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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey people, im back with Part 5....

RECAP.....
Baba talks to Ayi about getting Daksh and Naina married to each other, Ayi agrees.... Naina questions Daksh about his behaviour in the car when he was caught staring by Baba, she asks why he was doing it....
Part 5

Daksh: (confused as to what to say) Voh …. Mein …..

Naina: Kyaa vohhhh??? (she looks at him curious)

Daksh: Kuch nahin Naina, aise hiii…. (he gives gentle smile)

Naina: Daksh tum mujhse kuch chupa re hoo? Kya baat he??

Daksh: (shocked) Kuch nahin Naina.... abh sojaiii??

Naina: Daksh tumko khana nahin??

Daksh: (he looks at her speechlesss) Ha chalo.... niche jaate haiii (he again just stares at Naina with the same eyelocking eyes … Naina also stares back confused)

Naina: Daksh, tumhe kya hogaya he?

Daksh: (he comes out of his eyelock) Kuch nahin Naina, chaloo.... (he points for her to start going down and he will follow, Naina gives him a confused glare and starts to walk…. They gradually reach the bottom of the stairs after giving each other a few more looks on the way …. They head towards the dining table and they find Ayi and Baba waiting for them….)

Naina: Ayii, Rohini aur Sanket ko nahin khana??

Ayi: Beta, voh dono kha liye jab tum aur Daksh Baba ko lene gaye the ….. (hearing Daksh's name Naina starts to stare at him…. Daksh also looks up)

Naina: (thinking) Yeh kya ho raha he??? Yeh nahi ho sakhta? Kadhoos ke saath pyar?? Nahin baba nahinn…. Lekin voh itna bhi bura nahih haii…. (She stares at him a bit more) Nahin yeh nahi ho sakhta…. Daksh toh mujhse hamesha jagarta he, pyar ki baat dur (far) hai…. (she stops looking at him and starts to eat)

Ayi: Chintu, mujhe baat karni thi ...

Daksh: Haa maa, boliyee.... (he looks up at her)

Ayi: voh… mein aur baba teri shaadi ki baat kar rahe thee (Daksh starts to choke, Naina also looks up in shock, Baba sees this and smiles…. He looks at Ayi who also notices their reaction…)

Daksh: Maa…. Maine kaha na ke mujhe abhi shaadi nahin karni….

Ayi: Lekin Daksh… shaadi toh karni paregi naa…. Toh kyun baat ko baar baar tal ta he…. Soch to le...

Daksh: Maine bohot socho, aur abhi nahi ..... (he starts to get frustrated, so wipes his mouth, chucks the cloth and runs into his room…. Naina looks at him in shock)

Ayi: Chintu…. (she gets up and tries to stop him, but he goes) yeh ladka bhi na, samaj ta nahin he, usse shaadi karne ki zaroorat hai… kitna barra ho gaye lekin shaadi ka naam hi nahin leta…. Kya karu mein?? She looks at Naina and Baba, few tears come down her cheek)

Naina: (gets up and puts her hand on Ayi's shoulder) Ayi tum fikraar mat karo…. Mein usse baat karti hoon…

Ayi: Naina voh nahin sune gaa…

Naina: Ayi mein koshish toh kar sakhti hoon naa… (she turns ayi to face her, and starts to wipe her tears) Ayi, tum to jaanti ho ke meri baat koi tal nahin sakhte… dekhoo mein manaake aati hoon… (she starts to go)

Ayi: Thank you Naina, sunoo… khana bhi leti jao…. Ghuse mein khaya bhi nahin (Naina Smiles and comes back to take his plate… she goes upstairs)

Baba: Vibha tum bhi na… baat abhi karne ki zaroorat thi kya?

Ayi: Mujhse raah nahi gaya…. Mein abh aur intezaar nahin kar sakhtiii… mein Daksh ko ek pati ke zimidaarya uthake dekhna chaati hoon…. Aur Naina ko meri bahu ke roop mein…. (she smiles)

Baba: Vibha…. Tumko bacho ko pechane mein waqt dena chaye….

Ayi: Aho, Kaisa waqt, dusre toh ek dono ko jaante he….

Baba: Lekin utna bhi toh nahin jaante na joh ek pati aur patni ko jaan na parta he….

Ayi: Voh to baad mein bhi kar sakhte he naa….

Baba: yeh hamara zamana nahin he… abh pehle se jaanaa parta he….

Ayi: Theek hai, dekhte he ke abh kya hota hai… chalo khana khate hai, varna besabri se intezaar karte rahenge (Baba Smiles and tells her to sit down)

Meanwhile upstairs… Naina reaches outside Daksh's room, she sees him sitting on his bed staring into space…. She knocks on the door…. Daksh sees her….

Daksh: Naina, tum?? Andar aao…. (Naina walks in)

Naina: Daksh... mein khana ..... (she is lost for words)

Daksh: (angrily) Mujhe bhuk nahi he...

Naina: lekin daksh… tum ghusa khane par kyun utar rahe ho?? Khana tumhara kya bhigara?? (Daksh looks at her in shock)

Daksh: Maine kaha na mujhe bhuk nahi he.... (Naina puts the plate down on the bedside table…. She sits down on the bed…)

Naina: Daksh… tum Ayi ki baat pe itna ghusa kyun kar rahe ho? Voh sirf…

Daksh: (Angrily) Mujhe iski baare mein kuch baat nahin karni…. (he looks down on the floor)

Naina: Daksh, itna garam kyun ho rahe ho…. (She puts her hand on his hand, Daksh looks up at her.... both feel an electric shock run through their body, they both wonder what just happened…. They stare at each other for a few minutes….. Naina then realises that she still has her hand on Daksh's hand, she quickly takes in off….) Voh Daksh… im sorry…. (she pauses for a bit….) mein sirf yeh kahe na chaati hoon ke har maa ek sapna dekhti he jab unka beta ya beti shaadi karte hai, aur phir pati ya patni ka faraz nibhaye… Ayi ka sapna yeh hi haii…. (Daksh is continuously just staring at her….) tumko beta hone ka farz to nibhana he… ek bahu ko ghar mein liyana he, phir ek pati ke zimidaariya nibhana … ek patni ko pyar dena… kya tum ayi ke liye itna bhi nahin kar sakhte?? (Daksh stares at her)

Daksh: (he looks down) Naina… mein ayi ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hoon…. Lekin tumhi ne aasanse yeh baate kahe di… mujhko toh pata hi nahin chalta ke yeh baat ko kaise sambhalu… shaadi ke baat meri zindagi kitni badal jayegi…. Mujhko kaise pata chalega ke har mor pe kya karna hai… (he looks up at Naina with an embarrassed look… Naina stares at him in awe)

Naina: Daksh… yeh to waqt ke saath sikhna parta he….

Daksh: Lekin… tumko yeh sab pata he… mujhko to yeh bhi nahin samaj mein aaya… tum ayi ka kitna khayal rakhti ho….

Naina: voh to tum bhi rakhte ho... bas tareka alag he… tum ek beta ki tara khayal rakhte ho…. Aur mein ek beti (daksh looks at her in awe…. He smiles at her) toh shaadi karne ke liye raazi ho??

Daksh: Haa… lekin ek baat he…. (Daksh stops) He thinks: mein kya kehna jaa raha hu? Mein kaise yeh keh sakhta hoon ke shaadi karni he toh sirf tumse… kaise batao yehh… lekin… usne kitni aasani se mera ghusa tandha kara, aur yeh bhi samja diya ke mujhe ayi ka yeh sapna pura karna he… Kaisa kahu, kya mera haq hai yeh kehna ka? (he comes out of his thoughts and looks at Naina with a smile) Naina… kya tum meri madad karogi yeh sapna pura karne mein?? (Naina looks at him confused) Mera matlab… mujhko iss tara samja na aur ghusa tandha karna??

Naina: Haa Daksh kyun nahin… (she smiles at him) Abh khana khalo mein chalti hu… (she gets up and starts to go…. Suddenly she feels someone hold her hand and she couldn't move a step further…. She turned around and saw Daksh holding her wrist… her body started to melt… her heart started to beat faster…. She couldn't understand what was going on…. She looks down again at Daksh holding her hand and looks at Daksh, Daksh smiles at her)

Daksh: Sorry…. (he slowly lets go…) tumhe bhi nahi khaya, chalo saath niche jaa ke khate he… (he smiles and gets up, he grabs his plate…. They both start heading downstairs… )

What will Ayi Baba say when they get downstairs? Will they realise each other's love for each other?? Stay tuned to find out....
please leave your comments and suggestions 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
Hayye main tho maar gaiye. Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely,

Plz let them realize their love very soon!


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Posted: 14 years ago
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jus loved and was totally lost while reading the update.... i can actually visualise the whole thing in front of my eyes...... just loved the update..

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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
Very nice.Update next part soon. Wanna see ayi-baba reaction.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
Awwwww!!!😳....VERY VERY sweeet and electrifying at the same time! ....What an effect!!LOL!😆.......Superb!!!👏👏....amazing how you have managed to capture everyone's (Naina,Daksh,Ayi & Baba) character so wonderfully in writing!!👏....when I read your FF, i can easily imagine Daksh and Naina enacting the romantic lines you've penned down so beautifully!!😳😍....ONCE again you DID it Ayesha!👏⭐️.......plzzz do carry on!!!😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Loved your story, could u please add me to your PM list

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