*Rabir FF: True Love...Note, Chap 55 @ pg 143, 145 (2/1) - Page 92

Originally posted by: hailly

wow amazing dear . great work ,keep it up .continue soon . Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: sb1410

Hi dear like everyone else I too are speachless amazing work so beautiful the comparison between the family of birds and Kabir's family.
Hats off to you my dear.

Originally posted by: RaBir

Whole story Kabir watch and tell Rachna about bird so nice. I like how connect to Kabir family. It master stroke from you to write n show flashback.

Too sad that Kabir think he kill mom but Rachna tell him truth so he no feel guilty.

"She saw tears glistening in his eyes, his lips quivering with sadness, an expression of pure innocence painted on his visage, almost as though he trusted her and believed that she would save him."

Kabir still love his mom and believe her after so bad she do to him. That how good he is.

"Kabir stood unmoving, his eyes fixed at the growing red puddle on the ground. His breath hitched as he saw the gun still in his hand; he threw it away repulsively."

You write this so good Nivi I see picture in my head.

Really amazing Nivi. I want to write more but I no do that because it take away from beauty of what you writing. I worry after last update to see how Kabir get save but you write everything too well. It flow so nice. I stop now but really Nivi I big fan of you writing after that part.

Originally posted by: swathin

lovely...

Originally posted by: hangok

waiting for an update

Originally posted by: crtkelly

Res. Until I find the words. But well done Nivi!

**Edited**

Geek Alert😊

Some of my favorite movies are the ones that I watch, and then go back and watch over and over because I'm so blown away the first time, and then I have to go back for the sheer enjoyment. ( The Matrix and Inception immediately come to mind). Now not to say that you messed with my head like those movies did😆, but Nivi I had the exact same reaction to this chapter as I did those movies.

I read it ( on my mobile no less) and was totally flabbergasted, truly! Since then I've read it at least 3 or 4 times, honest!

I love the analogy of the birds in comparison to the circumstances of the Tripathi boys and their mother absolutely brilliant!

And then the chapter itself, never did I expect that this would happen, even though I had a spoiler😉

And yes, your reputation has been restored Nivi.

You have taken us for a wild ride in True Love for sure. Aside from the story itself, what I've noticed is a real development in your writing style. It seems to me that you are really making the effort to attempt different writing styles throughout. Maybe I'm wrong, but if you are you have been hugely successful Nivi.

I swear I'm having flashbacks to my college Freshman English class 😆 with everyone of your chapters

Really well done Nivi.👏

BUT...will we ever know for the reason for the revenge against Rachna, now that the evil one is gone?

Update soon!

Anyway I'm going to back to my tame little story with sweet li'l Sonal🤣

Originally posted by: nividances

Thank you so much for coming back and adding to your comment. You didn't have to, but I appreciate it.😊

I really just cannot explain how much all these positive comments mean to me. ☺️

Writing is just a hobby for me, a way to get away from the stresses of being a medical student, so to see that people are actually liking the work that I put out, it makes me feel so good.😳😃

And your comments would never take away from my writing...in fact, reading your thoughts prompts me to improve so keep them coming. Definitely tell me things that you would like me to add, I'll see if I can try and fit them in. I'm writing for myself of course, but that doesn't mean I can't take your suggestions. 👍🏼

THANK YOU once again Poonam!🤗

Originally posted by: nividances

Omg Poonam! Your comment has left ME speechless!😲😳☺️

Like seriously! Thank you so much for those sweet words! I really can't explain how I'm feeling right now, but safe to say that I'm on cloud 9 and if there's anything above that then I'm there too! 😳

Thank you so much!😳

Originally posted by: RaBir

Wow you medical student and still find time to write so well? Very talented dear. Hope school go good but otherwise have career in writing open.

So nice to ask suggestion. I say before about Kabir scene with father but I also like Rachna Kabir scene you write. I like read whatever write so keep going like want.