*Rabir FF: True Love...Note, Chap 55 @ pg 143, 145 (2/1)

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hangok

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Posted: 10 years ago

#901

im speechless, what an end...

cant describe right now my feelings...
great work

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Nurit

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Posted: 10 years ago

#902

I am speechless. poor Kabir he pass enough from all this.

I don't know what to say. great work dear

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hailly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#903

wow amazing dear . great work ,keep it up .continue soon . Thanks for pm

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 10 years ago

#904

Hi dear like everyone else I too are speachless amazing work so beautiful the comparison between the family of birds and Kabir's family.
Hats off to you my dear.

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RaBir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#905

Whole story Kabir watch and tell Rachna about bird so nice. I like how connect to Kabir family. It master stroke from you to write n show flashback.

Too sad that Kabir think he kill mom but Rachna tell him truth so he no feel guilty.

"She saw tears glistening in his eyes, his lips quivering with sadness, an expression of pure innocence painted on his visage, almost as though he trusted her and believed that she would save him."

Kabir still love his mom and believe her after so bad she do to him. That how good he is.

"Kabir stood unmoving, his eyes fixed at the growing red puddle on the ground. His breath hitched as he saw the gun still in his hand; he threw it away repulsively."

You write this so good Nivi I see picture in my head.

Really amazing Nivi. I want to write more but I no do that because it take away from beauty of what you writing. I worry after last update to see how Kabir get save but you write everything too well. It flow so nice. I stop now but really Nivi I big fan of you writing after that part.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#906

Originally posted by: RaBir
I think last update good but this one just leave me so speechless. I read two time already and I no have word to describe how beautiful you write.

I start confuse about bird story but I read on and it just connect amazing to rest of part. I read maybe 2-3 more time and come back to more comment.

But Nivi you leave me awe. Tell me when you publish first book I want from you autograph dear.

Omg Poonam! Your comment has left ME speechless! 😲 😳 ☺️

Like seriously! Thank you so much for those sweet words! I really can't explain how I'm feeling right now, but safe to say that I'm on cloud 9 and if there's anything above that then I'm there too! 😳

Thank you so much! 😳