*Rabir FF: True Love...Note, Chap 55 @ pg 143, 145 (2/1) - Page 94

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sb1410

Loved the conversation between father and son, their dad's explanation of trying to keep his child safe, away from the murderous intention of his older child and mother.


Thank you Sharlene! Glad that you could connect to it. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hailly

nice update continue soon .Thanks for pm


Thanks so much dear! Glad you enjoyed it. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
great update
pls update soon n pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: meenu_taarey

great update

pls update soon n pm me
take care


Thanks Meenu! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for taking request to give father son scene Nivi!
And you do good job to it.
You say no good dialogue but I like everything chapter.
Kabir angry dad for hiding he run away like Rachna want.
I like Prakash joke about Rudolph. It show how much Kabir love dad to memory that joke.
Whatever Prakash say about hiding Mayank truth also good and make sense.

Good job dear! Update next one soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nividances


Thank you! 😳
I feel like I'm not too good at writing dialogues and emotional stuff like this so it's a big relief to see that you liked this part.
And like you said, Kabir has had no one to share his pain with for all these years so he is bound to have more feelings and anger pent up inside him as compared to Karan. I wanted to show that Kabir is still very emotionally connected to his dad, but he also needs time to sort through everything that he has found out recently. But Prakash knows his son well enough to be able to explain things and guide him through this rough patch.
Glad you enjoyed it Nurit. 😊


You right Kabir dad know son good to explain him
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great update
Loved the father-son moment
Thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RaBir

Thanks for taking request to give father son scene Nivi!

And you do good job to it.
You say no good dialogue but I like everything chapter.
Kabir angry dad for hiding he run away like Rachna want.
I like Prakash joke about Rudolph. It show how much Kabir love dad to memory that joke.
Whatever Prakash say about hiding Mayank truth also good and make sense.

Good job dear! Update next one soon.


Thank you Poonam. Glad you enjoyed the update...and it was my pleasure to give you a scene you requested. Anything else you would like to see?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Princess.S786

Great update
Loved the father-son moment
Thanks 4 pm


Thank you Selina! Glad you enjoyed it. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nividances


Thank you Poonam. Glad you enjoyed the update...and it was my pleasure to give you a scene you requested. Anything else you would like to see?


Rabir wedding 😆
We no get to see on show end, want to read in your story.
Update soon dear. Waiting for it.

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