Originally posted by: crtkelly
Okay Nivi you proved me wrong - apparently a mother can be utterly disgusting😡, as can a son.
The evil duo seem to have the upper hand right now, and I'm so nervous for the next update, in the current situation I cannot see how the "good guys" get out of this situation totally unscathed😕, but especially, please don't let that creature harm Rachna!
Hmm, let's see if this works: Please update soon; I won't post my next update until you promise you will😆
Seriously great stuff Nivi!
Firstly, a big thank you for liking this update! 🤗
Now I am going into a long-winded "analytical response" to the bold comment.
Do women like Gayatri exist? Yes, they do.
Do mothers like Gayatri exist? Yes, they unfortunately do.
I have seen and interacted with women who are so focused on obtaining happiness from money and material comforts that they forget about the happiness that comes from the smaller things in life. This undoubtedly transfers over to their parenting, which often leads to their children going astray, becoming spoiled brats with criminal tendencies. Granted that I may have exaggerated things a bit to up the drama quotient for the story, but the basic bare-bones characterization of both Gayatri and Mayank is based off of real people that I have had the unfortunate experience of meeting or hearing about.
The reason I wrote the chapter the way I did was to give the full backstory behind why Gayatri and Mayank share the relationship they do, and why Kabir and Karan are so different from their older brother, despite being biologically related. I wanted there to be a convincing aspect behind the evil characters in this story and the flashback was supposed to paint a strong reason for why Mayank is the way he is. It's all about upbringing. I hope I managed to portray that aspect successfully rather than just making Gayatri and Mayank out to be total criminals and psychopaths, which they undoubtedly are (but even they have their own reasons for being this way).
I purposely ended where I did to keep everyone on their toes. 😈
And yes ma'am, I promise to not keep you waiting too long; I will definitely update soon. 😆
Anupamaa
