*Rabir FF: True Love...Note, Chap 55 @ pg 143, 145 (2/1)

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Awesome update both r very well

Written update doon n pm me

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Posted: 10 years ago

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lovely update .continue soon .Thanks for pm.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: crtkelly
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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: swathin
lovely...

Thank you! Glad you liked it. 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Nuritzur
Wow Nivi. Lovely update. like the flashback of Kabir father.
most of all I like how Kabir take Rachna away from Gayatri.
One minute how Mayank is out. Kabir just sign now?!

Thank you for the lovely update
cant wait for the next update

Thank you Nurit! I'm glad you liked the part about Kabir's father and his perspective on the entire situation. I enjoyed writing it.

Yes, Kabir saving Rachna was indeed quite bold of him, but what's the use? Now they are both trapped by Mayank (how he got there is a surprise to be revealed in the next part). I will have to think about how to get Rabir out of this situation. 😉😆

Glad you enjoyed the update.

*Edit* Hope that this response to your comment is long enough. 😉😛🤣

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: RaBir
Nice update Nivi! I like read about Pathak and how he find Kabir dad. Good job with flashback. Kabir free Rachna but now Mayank come! How he here already? Kabir just sign paper that gayatri give. Update soon and thanks for pm. Really want to know what happen. You leave with cliffhanger every time.

Thank you Poonam. I figured it was a good point in the story to give Pathak and Prakash's perspective. Glad that you liked reading it as a flashback.

How Mayank got there so suddenly is a point to be addressed in the next part. 😊

I like cliffhangers...don't you? They make the story much more entertaining I think. 😉 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: hangok
owww dear i have said it often but you are really great,
the way you have wrote about kt father when he was wounded, how he thought just about his sons were great...
he is really a good man, the way he helped pathak with his studies, that he can became a lawyer but the good thing is thanksfully pathak was grateful to him, and helped him in his difficult times...

the moment when kt free rachna from gayatry, i thought now they can go back happily, but nooo you made it more excited with mayanks entry, how can he be freee so soon...

great work

Thank you so much Bennu! You're far too kind, but I will accept the compliments nonetheless. 😳

Yes, Prakash is a good man but he has just been a victim to circumstance and fate for so long. Pathak certainly was smart in handling the situation appropriately.

Kabir freed Rachna but how could they leave so soon without any drama??? You have to have realized by now that I just love putting in twists and turns at every point in the story. 😉

The next update will be all about Mayank and then we will head towards some sort of closure...I haven't decided completely how to proceed yet.