*Rabir FF: True Love...Note, Chap 55 @ pg 143, 145 (2/1)

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1021

Loved it what happened to Rachna
I must confess don't miss the show much because I have both yours and Kelly's ff to read. Just my opinion but they are better than the show 😉 😃

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meenakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1022

amazing

update soon n pm me

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hailly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1023

amazing update .continue soon .Thanks for pm

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RaBir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1024

Okay Nivi I back. First I give you clap because this another update that I read more one time. Kabir dad surprise was good Rachna like also since Kabir happy with it. Nice to see good relation between FIL and DIL. Then pihu plan for cheer Rachna with Kabir great idea.

First he help her with hair pin. You describe so good I can see in front of eyes. She also cutely put gel on neck and he like it. Then romance was too good!

It good idea from Kabir to distract Rachna like that. She no see anything at first and surprise completely. When she think he going to kiss he say about door and I laugh. Then second scene in balcony too good. Lipstick part funny also and then he finally kiss her and she forget everything. Last part she figure out what go on and she try to go away but he pull out sari pin. He no do more because she know all his plan. But you show all three romance scene amazing Nivi dear. So good way you write I see like movie playing.

Last part leave me so worried. What happen to Rachna. Update soon end suspense please Nivi.

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Nurit

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1025

Wow Nivi I just love it.

Nice plan of Pihu haha very love this funny little romantic part.

Rachna acting weird I think she feel sad. I know why but I will not say because maybe I will Destroy the surprise to you

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: RaBir

I see you keep promise. I go read update now first thing I wake up.

😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1027

Originally posted by: RaBir
What?!?!? Howdyou end there??? Tell next update soon. What happen to poor Rachna?

Beautiful update outside cliff hanger Nivi. I come back later in free time to give more detail comment.

You know how much I like my cliffhangers. 😉

And the update was already so long yaar. Aur kitna likhti main?

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1028

Originally posted by: Nuritzur

Yes he did. I start to hate him after I read you FF And then they give me great reason to hate him😆

Haha, wow that's unbelievable that you started hating him just from reading my FF. 😆

But yeah, by the end he proved me right.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: sb1410
Loved it what happened to Rachna
I must confess don't miss the show much because I have both yours and Kelly's ff to read. Just my opinion but they are better than the show 😉 😃

Thank you Sharlene! Glad you liked it.

What happened to Rachna? I honestly don't know. We'll have to just wait and see. 😉 😆

Kelly's FF is one of my personal faves as well. She gave me a new fictional couple to become obsessed with...RaMi, although my love for Rabir will always win out. 😛😆

No better compliment than that. 😳

THANK YOU so much for that.