Mayan n Rabir ff [Play Date] -Completed Last chap @pg 49

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Saranya

@saravathi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: hapo
Ur awesome saranya...
I mean it was so good...
Mayan reunite and all credit for rabir...

Kabir taking advantage was so cute...

And rabir duo of not accepting their love for eachother...

Finally this s for u👏👏👏

And ya ll b waiting for ur nxt update eagerly...

Thanks hapo for always supporting me

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Saranya

@saravathi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: Pookhi
Wonderful update. Hope Gunjan realizes Rachana is not at fault & forgives her.

Thanks pookhi hope you will like my next chaps too

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Saranya

@saravathi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#273

Originally posted by: parmarA
Me first again wow

This time I write too dramatic so am really nervous u people will like t or not

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parmarA

@parmarA

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#274

Hum chahte hai unko isse badi sachai nahi

Jajabato ko rok sake aisee koi aandhi nahi

Ishq ka junoon sur chad ke bolega

Khauda bhi is pyaar se mehroom nahi

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parmarA

@parmarA

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#275

@saranya it is a beautiful update.

Parents are more important for us.Gunjan take right decession.But if Mayank is right choice for her she must convince her father.I know she wil do.

I find Kabir and Rachana hiding their feelings for each other.But Kabis is more sweet here.He was establishing new relation with Rachana's mother.

I love angry Rachana and cute Kabir here.

But why i am thinking this sir word will create problem for their relation.

Beautiful and Enjoyable update dear.👏

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Saranya

@saravathi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: parmarA
@saranya it is a beautiful update.
Parents are more important for us.Gunjan take right decession.But if Mayank is right choice for her she must convince her father.I know she wil do.
I find Kabir and Rachana hiding their feelings for each other.But Kabis is more sweet here.He was establishing new relation with Rachana's mother.

I love angry Rachana and cute Kabir here.
But why i am thinking this sir word will create problem for their relation.

Beautiful and Enjoyable update dear.👏

Thanks Alka ,I was really tensed on this chap since I again split up Mayan n Rabir now am more satisfied to know you liked t,Thank u so much

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parmarA

@parmarA

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#277

Originally posted by: saravathi

Thanks Alka ,I was really tensed on this chap since I again split up Mayan n Rabir now am more satisfied to know you liked t,Thank u so much

Welcome dear.Don't you like my shayri?😕

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Saranya

@saravathi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#278

Originally posted by: parmarA
Hum chahte hai unko isse badi sachai nahi
Jajabato ko rok sake aisee koi aandhi nahi

Ishq ka junoon sur chad ke bolega
Khauda bhi is pyaar se mehroom nahi

You would have definitely written it good but my sister s not there with me now to translate it,Hate myself for not knowing Hindi

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paru

@enthusiastic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#279

Oh wow saranya so nice part
Kabir is making food very funny
I hope gunjan mayank ki shaadi jaldi ho jaye
Thanks for the pm saranya
Update soon

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parmarA

@parmarA

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#280

Originally posted by: saravathi

You would have definitely written it good but my sister s not there with me now to translate it,Hate myself for not knowing Hindi

No problem dear.I tried to write according to your chap.Take your own time