Mayan n Rabir ff [Play Date] -Completed Last chap @pg 49 - Page 29

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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nyc update saranya!!!
Too gud...
Mayank n kabir reached rachna's house... so interesting...
The 3 will be executing a plan...
Eagerly waiting to knw wht they gonna do...
Rachna is getting more n more attracted to kabir just awesome.
Kabir's will to make her his...luv it
Mmm,n the last part...kabir cooking too gud
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally commenting Saranya😊 Lovely update as usual:
Aww poor Gunjan , having to deal with her Dad's illness; hope it all works out for her and Mayank!
Can Rabir please stop denying their feelings for each other already😊
And a man in the kitchen, always attractivešŸ‘šŸ˜ƒ, and the fact that is Kabir too boot😳. He's a smart fellow though, get on mum's good side and half the battle is over LOL
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Posted: 11 years ago
Saranya as usual ur just superb...
Just loved mayan love for eachother...
And our rabir toh super...
kabir new avatar of patao rachna Ki mom s impressive idea...
ur too good...
Will be waiting for nxt update...
And atlast thanks for the update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update. Looks like Kabir will impress Rachna's mummy. šŸ˜†

Btw..am too late but Congrats on becoming Goldie. 🄳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pookhi

Wonderful update. Looks like Kabir will impress Rachna's mummy. šŸ˜†

Btw..am too late but Congrats on becoming Goldie. 🄳

Thanks a lot dear,you r not too late
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chap 15:
Rachna packed break fast for Gunjan's family n left to hospital with Mayank n Kabir.Gunjan fed her Dad juice n she joined her friends.
Gunjan:Thanks a lot Rachna
Rachna:Oh madam from when did u start thanking me
Mayank:So when s uncle getting discharged?
Gunjan:In three four days hope so
Kabir:Guys lets start our plan we have less time
Rachna:Yes Mayank best of luck,Go n change your costume soon
Mayank:But why me
Kabir:Then who else will do this?Rachna said the plan clearly boss
Mayank:Yes but she didnt say, who should do it?
Rachna:Am not dealing with this Gunjan pls need ur service
Gunjan screwed Mayanks ears n,Mayank shouted in pain
Mayank:Ok I will do Gunjan pls stop it
All four laughed n shared a group hug.
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Mayank dressed up in traditional sherwani (A Nehru jacket like) with the traditional mark on his forehead,He appeared before Gunjan's relatives.Nobody could find who he is.A small girl baby came running towards Mayank n hugged him.
:Uncle am so thankful to you,only bcoz of you my mom is alive today
Mayank lifted the child n gave her chocolate,The kid kissed him on his forehead n ran away.Gunjan's mom wondered who that man is.At that time a nurse crossed by.
Nurse:Sir,We have a new patient,he s so old n he was serious till yesterday now he is ok sir
Mayank:Can I meet his relatives,I think they need support
Sister:Sir they r here only,
Gunjan's mom:Gunjan who s that,I never seen him in our village before
Gunjan:Mom he s a big social reformer,He helps patients here give them moral support service like a nurse he even does financial services mummy
Rachna:Kabir this Gunjan s over acting,hope mom don't find it
Nurse:Madam,Sir wants to meet you
Mayank:Namaste Aunty,
He got blessings from her mom n her mom found him like a Mahan.Mayank started to advise more about how supportive they should be to Gunjan's Dad at this time.His words melted mom's heart n she cried leaning on his arm.Mayank hugged her n patted on her back to console her.Seeing her mom cry, Gunjan too cried n Mayank hugged put his other arm around Gunjan n she weeped aswell.
Kabir:Rachna Its getting too emotional
Rachna didn't respond to him so he looked back n found Rachna crying too.Seeing her weeping Kabir burst out laughing.
Kabir:Rachna its all drama,U too blivd Mayank
Rachna:Hey stop laughing I didn't cry,Some dust fell in my eyes
Kabir:Try a good lie next time
There Mayank who was hugging Gunjan n her mom was happy his plan is working out n he tickled at Gunjan's hip.Gunjan gave a jerk n came back to her conscious.Mayank too broke the hug of ladies.
Mayank:Aunty don't worry,uncle will be ok soon,I will definitely cum to meet him tomo.
Gunjan's mom:He will be so pleased to meet you child,He s also a social reformer like you.
Mayank got blessings again n left from the place.
Gunjan's mom:In this small age,how kind n helping he is,Your dad will definitely be happy if he see him Gunjan
Gunjan to herself:That's y We planned it mummy.
Gunjan left her parents n ran to her friends she directly ran to Rachna to hug her,Both were smiling after so long time.
Mayank:Its me whom you should hug now Gunjan
Rachna:Don't be jealous Mayank
Mayank:Even Kabir s jealous
Rachna:Why should he? What Kabir ?
Kabir:He s just teasing me Rachna,Why should I?
Rachna:So can we leave home?Mom will be alone
Mayank:Rachna you go with Kabir I will spend time with Gunjan n cum
Rachna:Ok be careful guys.
In car:
Kabir:Has your prayers worked ?
Rachna:What prayers
Kabir:While we traveling,Your lips kept murmering prayers for Gunjan
Rachna:Where you watching my lips on that time too
Kabir:Not exactly,At times I saw hmm whenever I got tired of driving
He checked for her reaction through mirror n Rachna was giving him killing looks.He became silent seeing her reaction n continued to drive.
When they reached the house Rachna was surprised too see no one was there.She took the key from the secret place n opened the door.Kabir was doing some calculations in his mind n Rachna observed it.
Rachna:See Kabir you go rest in ur room n I will be in mine,After mom come you can come down
Kabir:Are you afraid to be alone with me
Rachna:No no but I don't want anything to happen,Am going to change bye.
Kabir's thoughts:How will I miss my Golden chance baby.
Rachna was bathing in washroom n Kabir came to her room.He locked the washroom door.
After 10 mins Rachna came from bathing,when she tried to open the Kabir rightly unlocked it n ran from her room.Rachna came out in her night dress,drying her hair,When she stepped in her her wet foot felt more chill as she walked on the rose petals laid down.Rachna just then opened her eyes n looked her room.Her room was glowing in candle lights.She guessed who made it n she blewed all the candles off.Just then a voice played from laptop.
"I wish I were the candles to die in ur breath".
Rachna closed the laptop n laughed recollecting his crazy line.She stood before the mirror n was combing just then found her face has already a sindoor on her forehead,She rubbed her forehead but still it was there, n then she realized it was on the mirror n rubbed it scolding Kabir.She came out of her room angrily n searched for Kabir.Some music was playing n Rachna followed it n ended cumn to Dining hall.There was a note kept.
"Specially made for you"
He has made her a Sandwich in that the bread was cut in heart shape n the jam wrote"Pls eat me".Rachna swallowed the piece fast to find out Kabir.The door knocked she got scared thinking her mummy n she opened the door with so much tension but a man stood with a bouquet in her hands.
Rachna:Was it from Kabir
:Yes Madam have a gr8 day.
Rachna:Why s he doing this much for me,He said he dont love me n what drama is this now.First I will go check his room.
While she took the steps to reach his room,flowers kept falling on her n she couldn stop herself from feeling more special.
She knocked on Kabir's room the door was open n he has sticked the note on door
"I am always open for you"
Rachna removed the sticker n called for Kabir, n was shocked to see Kabir sleeping in bed.
Kabir:Rachna you,You said me not to meet you n why you here?
Rachna:Oh really,Stop acting Kabir.Why you doing all this
Kabir:But what did I do?
Rachna showed him the note on door then on the dining table.Seeing that Kabir fell on the floor n laughed.
Kabir: Rachna what made you think,I did t for you omg,I did all that for your mom n u spoiled all my surprises.
Rachna:What for mom? No u are lying then why you put flowers while I walked on stairs
Kabir:Oh God you spoiled that too how much time I took to do that for your mom,Shit you spoiled everything.
Rachna:Then y u decorated my room with candles Kabir:Rachna there was a power cut,I thought u will be scared.
Rachna:Then that laptop
Kabir:Rachna pls stop questioning,I dont have any reason to impress you okay,I think you need a deep sleep now.Go rest.
Rachna:Yes but y u impressing my mom
Kabir:She s my new friend n I thought to surprise her when she back home
Rachna:Am really sorry Kabir,I spoiled all ur plans you r too sweet to my mom,I will definitely say what all u did for her.
After she left Kabir felt relieved from her questions n thanked God.
Kabir's thoughts:You r such a fool Rachna how can u bliv I will do this much for ur mom.Hope u will find my love soon.
Rachna's thoughts:Why I thought he did it for me,He would have have thought am expecting it.I hate myself.
She text to Kabir saying sorry.
N Kabir replied " No sorry between us n you looked so beautiful in wet hair"
Rachna replied:Hope this s not for my mom
Kabir n Rachna smiled and continued their text.
Edited by saravathi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
You are too mean, Making Kabir so sweet, in your FFšŸ˜†
Wow, this was super lovely, see what can happen when we focus on what we have to došŸ˜‰
Honestly, I really enjoyed this.
What a tricky bunch these lot are!
But yes it was the Rabir scene that totally got to me😳
Well DonešŸ‘...my turn next LOL
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Posted: 11 years ago
Today got Bonus Bonanza.Two ff and two updates.
Will read and comment soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ohh great!!!
This is just superb!!!!
Mayank impressing gunjan's mom ws very nyc...
N rabir scene ws just amazing...
Hw sweet of kabir?
Such beautiful things he did 4 rachna...
That ws so cute...
N she felt so special...
Thank u saranya
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: crtkelly

You are too mean, Making Kabir so sweet, in your FFšŸ˜†

Wow, this was super lovely, see what can happen when we focus on what we have to došŸ˜‰
Honestly, I really enjoyed this.
What a tricky bunch these lot are!
But yes it was the Rabir scene that totally got to me😳
Well DonešŸ‘...my turn next LOL

Happy to hear you enjoying KT here,
To say the truth I never thought to update yesterday,Talking lot about Rabir with u all boost up me to write n
sooo happy to know it worked out,All credits to Rabirians

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