Mayan n Rabir ff [Play Date] -Completed Last chap @pg 49 - Page 30

Originally posted by: parmarA

Today got Bonus Bonanza.Two ff and two updates.

Will read and comment soon

Originally posted by: sb1410

Super fabulous update.

Originally posted by: cuteangelasya

Ohh great!!!

This is just superb!!!!

Mayank impressing gunjan's mom ws very nyc...

N rabir scene ws just amazing...

Hw sweet of kabir?

Such beautiful things he did 4 rachna...

That ws so cute...

N she felt so special...

Thank u saranya

Very good.
Loved all of it especially RaBir in this update..:)

Beautiful chap saranya.

Good update saranya
I like so much kabir n rachna scene
He he kabir is too funny rachna ki mom ke liye sab kuch kiya
Poor rachna
Thanks for the pm saranya

Loved it saranya...

you are really too good,
like the scene in the hospital, hope their plans dont fail and create more problems for mayan...

and now im about rachna and kabir alone in the house, and to add all his afforts for rachna...was just great ...
and rachna is too much, did she really belive that he has made this all for her mom😆

hope we can see more of such scene

great work and thanks for pm

Originally posted by: parmarA

Beautiful chap saranya.

Both Kabir and Mayank on mission manao saasuma.

Kabir is too cute and careful here.I just love this kabir.

Rachana's beauty i can imagine her.Her wet hair stole Kabir's heart.

How much Kabir observing him chhupke Chhupke.His mirror settled to see her?

Oh ghosh!I love this kabir and his tricks to make Rachana happy.

Originally posted by: PINky733

Good update saranya
I like so much kabir n rachna scene
He he kabir is too funny rachna ki mom ke liye sab kuch kiya
Poor rachna
Thanks for the pm saranya