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Posted: 11 years ago
Chap-17
Rachna woke up asusual late,Before her Kabir n monu woke up.
Monu:Good morning aunty
Rachna:oh my sweetheart u woke up so early
Kabir:Its 10 Rachna,You not at all changed
Rachna:That's Rachna
Monu:Aunty take me out
Rachna:Where my monu want to go
Kabir:Rachna we need to go office
Rachna:One day I will take leave for me.
Monu went n kissed her cheeks n she carried him in her waist n kissed him too.
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Rachna got dressed herself in a sky blue saree.In car Kabir could not take his eyes from her all along the way.Monu was sitting on Rachna's lap again as he kept shaking all the way Rachna saree was getting loose .When they reached Kids world
Kabir:Rachna Madam get down
Rachna:Kabir you close the car glass n wait,I will come in a min
Kabir:Why any problem
Rachna:Kabir I have to adjust my saree pls close the door
Kabir:Am sorry
He closed the glass n stood out showing his back to her.
Kabir's thoughts:As though I have never seen any part of you,You really irritating me
Rachna was bending down n adjusting her saree suddenly her blouse hook opened,She got tensed since she was sitting she couldn reach it.She knocked on the window
Kabir:What now
Rachna:Come in just a min
Monu was still playing with the driver when Kabir entered car
Rachna:My blouse
She said it showing her bare neck to him.Kabir was giggling now n his hands took hold of her blouse he joined the hooks and saw in car mirror that Rachna was blushing.
Kabir:You remember Rachna,Whenever we fight you always ask me adjust your saree r blouse hook n make me plead to touch you
Rachna looked Kabir's eyes which showed more pain now
Rachna:why you still remembering all this after you got a new family
Kabir without replying got down from the car closing the door fast,which confused Rachna.
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Rachna and monu were eating Ice cream both were eating like applying it all over the lips.
Kabir:I am not sure who is Kid here,you both same to same
Rachna and monu bothexchanged kisses applying ice cream on cheeks n was posing for a photo.
Monu:Daddy you too come
Kabir joined Rachna and monu for photo.Rachna and Kabir knelt down to height of Monu n monu put his small hands around Rabirs neck,As driver clicked photo.Monu ran to driver to look the photo,Then Rabir looked at each to find both teary eyed.
Rachna:Kabir I miss our child
Saying it she hugged Kabir
Kabir didn't hug her back he felt guilty for not telling her truth of Monu,But Rachna kept crying he removed her hug n cupped her face
Kabir:Why should you miss my child after marrying Rajiv he can give you how many kids you want
Rachna was shocked by his words
Kabir left her face murmerring after all you loved only Rajiv all your life,Rachna lost her temper now she slapped him hard,Kabir's face fell down when he raised to face her she was running from the place."Go getlost" shouted Kabir
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Rachna was crying hard in wash room,She was recollecting all her past
Three years back after Kabir left her leaving a small note.
Rachna waited for Kabir whole day,She thought something happened to him,so she took help from Rajiv to help her,Rajiv pretended like searching him everywhere,atlast she came to her room to cry aloud that time she read the note.
I am sorry Rachna,I am leaving you now don't search me anywhere,I had relationship with another women n she has given birth to a child now,I definitely ned my kid so I am forced to live with her,But I always love you.
Rachna could not bliv what she was reading She wanted someone to say its all a dream,Thinking all she fell unconscious Rajiv went n spilled water on her face.
Rachna:Kabir cant do this
Rajiv:Rachna,you should move he just left you for child
Rachna:No he luvs me I know
Rajiv:You bliv him more that's your problem
Rachna cried heavily n Rajiv hugged her to console her n he was giving an evil smile remembering how he changed Kabir's note n he kept his own note.
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Rachna took several days to come out from the shock.Rajiv encouraged her to take up his business to make her change n she accepted.A week later There was business party,Rajiv was drunk,Rachna was busy getting introduced to all Workers,Suddenly Rajiv pulled her to dance floor,He took her hand n placed her hand on
Her waist,Rachna felt uncomfortable but as he danced more close she dreamt like Kabir dancing with her.So she too danced more close now.Rajiv thought Rachna is enjoying being with him n he thought he should not miss this chance,Music stopped
Rachna:Today am too happy (she said it thinking of Kabir)
Rajiv went closer to her Rachna was confused n stepped back Rajiv put his arm around her waist n pulled her close to him
Rachna:Rajiv what's this leave me
Rajiv without listening went to kiss her lips Rachna gave him a slap
Rajiv:Rachna its not wrong,I will marry you
Rachna:What marriage?How dare you,I am Mrs.Kabir ok
He is gone laughed Rajiv
Rachna:I will live n die in his memories,he given me that many memories to cherish all my life
Rajiv:No Rachna I want you
Rachna:Rajiv,I dont love you anymore you are only my friend
She said n cried,Rajiv dragged her to road to take her home,Rachna tried to stop him,
Rajiv:So you not coming ok fine,You yourself will come to me soon.
He said it facing her that he didnt realize a heavy vehicle nearing him,Rachna was shocked seeing the vehicle so close,She ran to Rajiv n pushed him .Rajiv didnt understand what happened but saw Rachna laying on road,He rushed to her n she didnt respond
Rajiv:Rachna,Come on u r fine wake up
He sprayed water on her face n her eyelids moved.
Rajiv:Rachna can you hear me
Rachna:Rajiv you are safe,Thank god
Rajiv now felt bad to face he never thought Rachna would risk her life for him.His eyes were filled with years.
Rachna:What hapn Rajiv?Does it hurt anywhere
Rajiv cried now n hugged her this time the hug was very tight but Rajiv was only crying,Rachna felt the lain in Rajiv she thought something is bothering him,so she broke the hug n looked in to his eyes.
Rajiv:I cant see your face Rachna
Rachna:Whats wrong with you now,You can share everything
with me,
Rajiv:How can I say Rachna,How can I say its me who stopped our marriage not your dad.
Rachna:What?You cheated me
You broke my trust?How can u do that
Rajiv:Yes Rachna I am not good as you think,I never loved u Rachna slapped him.Rajiv put his head down.
Rajiv's thoughts" How will I say I took her child she will never forgive me for that,I really don't want to loose her friendship now
Rachna:Rajiv leave this all,its done now,I got used to this. Kabir itself left me alone.
Rajiv:I am sorry Rachna,I did stupid but I promise I will be a good friend to you from now .pls stay with me
Rachna:If you want me to stay with you,you should marry soon
Rajiv agreed and the following week Rajiv married his assistant Reena n all three stayed in same house from then on n that's when Kabir mistook Rachna has Rajiv's wife when he came to house in past.
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Kabir:Where did you go? We were searching for you
I was searching for you for three years shouted Rachna n pushed him n took monu along with her.
Kabir ran behind her.
Kabir:What's wrong now I just said your husband Rajiv will give how many kids u want,What wrong in that.
Rachna:Kabir pls stop it,lets leave home
Monu:Mummy Daddy why fighting?
Rachna was shocked on Monu calling her mummy,Rachna left his hand now.
Kabir:Monu she is not your mummy
Rachna stood still with tears dropping from her eyes.she missed her child now.
Monu:No my mummy he said n hid himself in Rachna's saree.
Kabir:Am sorry Rachna to trouble you
Rachna remained silent and all left to home.
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Kabir knocked at Rachna's room,he was wondering how come there is a single bed.
Rachna:Say Kabir
Kabir:Monu is getting more fond of you,I think I should take him home
Rachna:Its your kid so your wish
Kabir:Thanks
Kabir was about to leave the room but stopped seeing Rachna weeping,Kabir came near her n cupped her face,Rachna looked in to her eyes.
Kabir:Why you behaving different from morning what's bothering you
Rachna pushed his hand from her face.
Rachna:Don't touch me first
Kabir:What? I should not touch you?omg I cant bliv this you once asked me to promise that I will never move an inch away from you when I sleep,you remember
Rachna:Its all over now,You don't have any rights on me,Go and do all that to your wife
Kabir lost his temper,he held her neck n dragged her to the wall.
Rachna:Kabir what's this
Kabir without listening to her kissed her all over the face,neck,hands,He kept kissing.Rachna stood in shock.
Kabir:Now go say Rajiv that I have all rights on you n u r my wife.
Kabir left the room angrily,Rachna looked her at the mirror n felt Kabir kissing her.
When Kabir reached the hall he saw Rajiv at the gate entrance .
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Edited by saravathi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
owww this was really unexcpected,
you are great,
so im really excited to read rachnas pov...

thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
from where do u get such brilliant idea hats off and i must say saranya that mentor will always be a mentor its brilliant i am reading again will then comment on each small thing 😳👏
Edited by mkakkar93 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hangok

owww this was really unexcpected,

you are great,
so im really excited to read rachnas pov...

thanks for pm

Thanks dear,I was waiting fr ur comments for my previous chap am glad u read it
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Posted: 11 years ago
owww so much misunderstanding..
i just hope now that rajiv tells the truth to kabir,
want to see them together...

oww monu called her mom, sooo sweet

thanks for pm
Edited by hangok - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: saravathi

Thanks dear,I was waiting fr ur comments for my previous chap am glad u read it


im sorry i was late, but then i saw your next part😊
saravathi thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mkakkar93

from where do u get such brilliant idea hats off and i must say saranya that mentor will always be a mentor its brilliant i am reading again will then comment on each small thing 😳👏

lol.may be bcoz I do watch more south Indian language movies my mind work like that.
anyways Thanks fr ur comments will be eagerly waiting to read Kabir's entry tomo,I revealed everything in this chap to make my next as the last one
saravathi thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hangok


im sorry i was late, but then i saw your next part😊

No prob I can always wait
mkakkar93 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: saravathi

lol.may be bcoz I do watch more south Indian language movies my mind work like that.

anyways Thanks fr ur comments will be eagerly waiting to read Kabir's entry tomo,I revealed everything in this chap to make my next as the last one

whatever the reason is but one thing that is sure that u are very creative ,no person can think like that and next one will be the last one oh no but no prob will wait for another 😳 see i m so greedy 😆
and coming to this chap
blouse and hook scene was marvellous and sexy too
racha make a hattrik in slapping in this chap😆
rajeev become so wicked he shold be be punished and although he changed but for his friendship he separated a mother disgusting the best scene when kabir kissed all rachna all over lovely
hats off big hugs u made my day as always😳👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
Love love love love the update
Especially the last line
Rajeev back
Hope the misunderstanding will clear now..
And the best part was kt kissed her all over and said I have full right on u..u r my wife. .

Uff!! Mindblowing
Plz update soon

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