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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: saravathi

I wont accept tis ...I strongly bliv u wud bring up a dif story
then regarding chapters all depends on how we are at that moment,I wrote this update in a hurry it would def sound less than other updates n thanks too

This update is as awesome as the last ones and ya I have finished almost my first chap just giving finishing touch hope that i will post soon 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
i am waiting too eagerly honey😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mkakkar93

i am waiting too eagerly honey😳

Morning i will update since I was busy reading ur ff😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mkakkar93

Aww monu is sweet and I m too praying for him to get fit and fine and love the coffee moment between rabir was lovely 😳And ya I want to see that how these misunderstandings will be clear between both of them lovely rabir 😳Hats off lovely update 👏

Thank u
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: saravathi

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Morning i will update since I was busy reading ur ff😉

so sweet of u and u know i m feeling like i am on seventh heaven as the person whose writing i like the most is liking my first ever update thanks a lot honey lots of hugs to u 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
chap 16
Kabir was feeding monu when Rachna entered.
Rachna:Hi Monu..How r u
Monu:Am fine aunty..I was waiting for u
Rachna moved near the hospital bed and took the plate from Kabir.Kabir moved back letting her sit next to monu.She put her shoulder around monu n he leaned on her,Rachna started to feed him
Monu:Aunty its enuf,my tummy is full
Rachna tickled on his tummy n both laughed,Kabir was admiring both.
Dadi:Rachna a small request,I want to go Delhi for our family function,I will be back within two days till that can you take care of monu.
Rachna:Why not Dadi,I will take him along with me to my house,What monu will you come with me
Monu:Haan aunty but Daddy? pls lets take him too
Kabir:Monu eat first
Rachna:You can still cum Kabir,I don't mind
Kabir:But Rajiv wont like me cumin
Rachna: I will tlk to him.He is not like before
Kabir:If you have no problem then its ok for me
Monu in excitement raised his body to hug Rachna but both Kabir and Rachna held his body to stop him at a time at that time monu moved back and Both were about to touch their hands and stopped with shock.
Rachna:Monu you r not completely well so do everything slow ok
Monu giggled at both.
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Kabir was more curious to know more about Rachna when he entered the house his eyes wandered for every hint of her life..He could see Rajiv's photo hanging n Rajiv's certificates.
Kabir:Rajiv is not here
Rachna:He has gone for a business meet
Kabir:That's cool
Monu:Aunty who is this uncle
Kabir:Your aunty's husband..cal him Rajiv uncle
Rachna throwed him a fake smile
In the night..

Kabir:Monu its getting too late,let aunty sleep
Monu:Aunty pls sleep with us
Kabir:Monu that's the limit.
Rachna:Kabir its fine,I think he miss his mom
Monu seeing his dads anger hide himself behind Rachna's back.Rachna wrapped him
Rachna:Monu am der na
Monu:Mummy
He cried aloud now
Rachna:See I will sleep along with you today if you stop crying
Monu immediately closed his mouth and his cheeks spread wide with a small dimple seen.All three shared the same bed n Monu was btwn them
Kabir:Rachna you dunno about him,He will act well if he needs something exactly like you
Rachna:Oh when did I act
Kabir:I remember every single acting of yours
Rachna:You were so arrogant those days
Kabir:You were a devil for me
Rachna:You were an idiot,waste fellow,
When both threw angry looks,Monu dozed off to sleep.
Kabir:Shhh Monu slept

Rachna:I know you shut up
Monu put his hand on Rachna's hand n she pulled him more closer to her n made him sleep within her arms.Rachna too dozed off soon.Kabir was admiring both he could not bliv if its a dream he really didn't want this day to end.
He was thinking all happened in his past.
Three years back
Kabir was in airport,Rachna was crying in hospital.
Rajiv:Rachna he is gone,why you bothered so much anyways you planned to end your marriage
Rachna :No Rajiv pls don't say that again I need Kabir in my life,I cant live without him,I love him
Rajiv got shocked he held her hand with tight hold.
Rachna:Rajiv its paining
Rajiv:You think I will let you live with him.
Rachna:Pls Rajiv understand I have no time now,I must say him my love
Rajiv got angry n left her hold n pushed her,Rachna was about to fall down when her Kabir's hand held her waist to stop her from falling.
Rachna was surprised seeing him,tears were flowing down,Kabir wiped it
Rachna:Kabir I
Kabir:I heard it all Rachna,first let me talk to Rajiv
Rajiv:You both nicely cheated me n now what gonna talk
Kabir:you cheated us.Did that accident really happen,You planned it,Rachna he was never true to you,I saw Doctor in airport n he said t all to me
Rachna:Kabir,Its me who cheated him not Rajiv pls bliv he is nice,
Kabir:But Rachna
Rachna without letting him speak came near him n hugged him.Kabir too hugged her back starring at Rajiv when Rachna said"I love you Kabir"
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Kabir was still angry on Rachna that he didn't meet her after Rajiv left house.Rachna knocked his room
Kabir:What
Rachna:hmm I am scared to sleep alone can I sleep here
Kabir:Ok but don't disturb me
Both slept on the same bed turning opposite sides.Rachna showed him signals by creating sounds but Kabir didn understand.Irritated Rachna went n bit his ears,
Kabir shouted in pain
Kabir:I said you not to disturb me
Kabir raised his body n shouted at her but the moment he saw her his eyes widened she removed the knot in over coat of her night dress,which revealed her inners,Kabir admired her from top to bottom,Rachna felt shy n tried to tie the knot but Kabir stopped her,He pushed himself to her n removed that over coat of hers her small tummy was shaking as Rachna
was breathing heavily He placed his lips on her lips,Rachna placed her hand mids of Kabir's hair n he moved his lips from waist to top he kissed her there along her inners first when Kabir approached her leg to kiss,Rachna herself removed all her inners now Kabir stopped Kissing and admired her now,
Rachna closed her face with her hands.Kabir opened her hands n kissed her lips,As he pressed her lips,Rachna opened her mouth n both were kissing wildly pushing eaching other down the other.
Kabir:Rachna I know you wanted it
He said n undressed himself,Rachna now pulled him n on her n they consummated their marriage.
10 months later,
Rachna was in hospital along with Kabir who was giving her advices on delivering baby
Rachna cried in pain.
Rachna:you stupid I am in pain n u lecturing me
Kabir:Rachna am scared too
Rachna cant see him so that she pretended like it didn't pain n she smiled at him,Kabir kissed her tummy then she gave long cry of pain.
Doctors hurried n took her to operation theatre,She didn't leave Kabir's hand till the last second she entered that operation theatre.There was no sound for so long time.Kabir was more tensed.
Nurse:Sir we cant help the baby sorry its born dead.
Kabir fell down in shock.Only thought running in his mind was how he will tell this to Rachna.There nurse got money from Rajiv n handed the child to Rajiv.
Rachna opened her eyes n was searching for the baby Kabir hugged her n cried aloud.
Rachna:What happen where is our child
Kabir:God liked our child more than us Rachna
Rachna pushed him n shouted but Kabir again hugged her both cried on each others arms.
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Few days later Kabir saw the other nurse she said to Kabir about Rajiv's plan.Kabir got on his nerves n rushed to his room,He searched for the baby he could not find,He slapped him had n gave him lot of punches.
Kabir:Rachna blivd u so badly how can you do this to her,give back my child
Rajiv:You give Rachna to me,if you leave Rachna n go I will give ur child
Kabir:How dare you,first I will complain to police
Rajiv laughed"If you complain Rachna herself wont support you.she blivs me good man.
Kabir remembered Rachna supporting him he felt she will never doubt Rajiv he stood there confused.
Rajiv:You want ur kid alive or not
Kabir:Ok I will leave her n go
Kabir thoughts"I have no other option first i will act to him like leaving n come back to her after fee days".
Kabir saw Rachna sleeping he went n kissed her forehead he kept a note to her n he left the house.
Rajiv gave the child to Kabir
Kabir:Rachna I am doing this all for our Mohit.I will come back to you in few days.
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He left the city n its a month now,he decided to get back his wife That day morning he got some letter from Rajiv,it was pics of Rajiv and Rachna marriage n all their pics of being close.
Rajiv wrote on a letter,she has moved on n she is happy now don't pls comeback.Kabir didn bliv this all he catches a flight immediately with monu n came back he searched for them everywhere but finally his car stopped on seeing a name board on house"Mr n Mrs Rajiv.Kabir hurried to open the door he knocked it,He heard a voice saying coming he knew the voice is his Rachna's .He saw her eyes too
He could not bliv Rachna is Rajiv's wife when Rachna opened the door she could not find anyone out n she went inside again.
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Flash back ends.
As Kabir recollected everything he had tears filling his eyes,As he saw Rachna hugging monu
Kabir said to himself " Not only monu misses his mom,me too Rachna wish you would have waited for me,I really want to say Monu is our child but now if I say it will spoil your happiness in ur marriage life" he wiped his tears n slept.
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End of chap
I wrote flashback only on Kabir's pov, Rachna's part will be in next chapter
Edited by saravathi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG!! What a WONDERFUL twist!! Monu is Rachna's child!!😲
Honestly- I thought that Kabir probably adopted the child or something.
Rajiv was so evil taking a child away from his mother.😡
Poor Kabir had to sacrifice his love for their child's safety.
I just hope Kabir and Rachna soon figure things out.😳
I'd say this was a superb update, wow what a twist.😛
Edited by Pookhi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Are you serious? ??
I mean monu is rachna's child??
Omg I had this feeling that she's the mother
Hats off to you dear. You made rajeev really bad lolzz
Lovely update
Please update soon
I hope that they clear their misunderstandings soon
Love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww so sweet somewhere I was also feeling that mohit can be rabir kid but again the thing came to my mind that how it will be possible😲
Nice twist and wow rabir consummated their marriage it so lovely hats off saranya for the twist 👏 Love u all and omg Rajiv is becoming hell wicked that he separate the mother son 😡See the magic saranya ,I am writing negative about Rajiv this the influence of u on mee 😆 But lots of hugs for such a beautiful update 😳👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pookhi

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OMG!! What a WONDERFUL twist!! Monu is Rachna's child!!😲
Honestly- I thought that Kabir probably adopted the child or something.
Rajiv was so evil taking a child away from his mother.😡
Poor Kabir had to sacrifice his love for their child's safety.
I just hope Kabir and Rachna soon figure things out.😳
I'd say this was a superb update, wow what a twist.😛

I myself didn't have this thought of writing monu as Kabir's son I thought to write as adopted one but suddenly I thought of new twist am glad u liked it

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