Rabir ff-'Why Us'[Last chap-PG 48] - Page 35

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MahimaSingh

OMG he kissed her ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ Its an amazing update 🤗 Can't wait for the next chapter.. update soon dear 😳

Thankiee s will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi I am new to this website. I just want to say that after I read your FF I think I should join in and write a comment for you. You really did a great job on at I really like your FF i hope you going to update at soon. thank for you great work. well done :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nuritzur

Hi I am new to this website. I just want to say that after I read your FF I think I should join in and write a comment for you. You really did a great job on at I really like your FF i hope you going to update at soon. thank for you great work. well done :)

Welcome dear
So sweet of you..
Thanks a lot ...I never knew my ff got silent readers
Am too happy that u liked it
will update soon
n like to hear more from u
Edited by saravathi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey. First of all let me tell you your updates are very captivating. Eagerly waiting for the next update. Please make our Sunday more beautiful.😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
sry for the delay
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anks209

Hey. First of all let me tell you your updates are very captivating. Eagerly waiting for the next update. Please make our Sunday more beautiful.😊😊

Thanks a lot for ur first comment
will update in few hours dear,typing last part
But huge thanks to u for following it
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Posted: 11 years ago
No problem take your time 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi all,
so here's the last chapter
Chap-18
Kabir's anger reached his peak on seeing Rajiv.Rajiv pressed the door bell.Kabir didn't want to meet him he stood there thinking what all he lost bcoz of Rajiv hearing the door bell,Rachna came down
Rachna:Kabir who is that
Kabir:Your husband madam,you yourself go open the door
Rachna"Why he came so soon omg what if Kabir knew I lied"
She opened the door with so much tension on her face.
Rajiv gave a bright smile seeing her n seeing Rachna nervous he thought she s scared bcoz she was alone n he hugged her,Rachna stood still.Kabir was grinding his teeth in anger but then he noticed Rajiv didn't arrive home alone
Reena:When you both together you will forget that I exist itself
Rachna freed herself from his hug,giving a fake smile.Too many questions were hitting his mind.
Rajiv:Reena I missed Rachna, n u know it na
Reena:Haan Haan even I missed her more but lets get in first
Kabir stood in the stairs waiting eagerly to know who Reena is,Reena and Rajiv didn't see him.Rachna's eyes checked for Kabir more.
Rachna:Why can't u both rest in your room
Rajiv:But We have lots to talk to you
Reena:Yes Rachna you know what Rajiv was sooo romantic this trip,
Rachna's thoughts"Is it so important now"
Rajiv:Yes this trip was better than my honeymoon
Kabir's thoughts"Rajiv married Reena.Rachna s still my wife oh god,What I did"
Rachna:You could have stayed more days there then
Rajiv:But Rachna tomo is day you lost your child,I cant leave you alone here,I know how much you will miss ur child that day.
Tears were dropping from Rachna's eyes and Kabir was starring at Rajiv
Rajiv:Rachna come on,Whatever happened is hapn u cant change it,your child will be resting peacefully.
Rachna remembered monu calling her mummy n monu came to hall running,Kabir signalled him to go back but he ran straight to Rachna she was turned back to him n Monu hugged her leg from back.
Rajiv:Rachna who is this cute kid,he said n pulled Monu"s small hand but he tightly held Rachna.
Rachna:He is my friends child,Monu go he s Rajiv uncle
Rajiv:Oh monu come to uncle
Rachna lifted monu n she went to hand him to Rajiv but a hand stopped her.
Monu:Daddy
Kabir dragged monu from Rachna's hand.
Rajiv:Kabir you?
Kabir:Yes me,How dare you touch my child again.
Rachna:Kabir why you behaving rude to him.He didn't do monu anything now ok
Kabir:You shut up,you are such a stupid to bliv him..If you miss your child today he is the only reason for it
Rachna:What you mean
Kabir:Its waste of explain you anyways you will bliv only Rajiv
Rachna:First say me,Rajiv what s he saying
Rajiv:Rachna
Kabir:Answer her, say you blackmailed me that you will kill her child if I didn't leave her life
Rachna eyes opened wide in shock.
Rajiv:Rachna I
Rachna dragged Rajiv's collar now,monu started to cry seeing all n Kabir was patting on him
Rachna:Is it true..say me you killed my child
Rajiv:No Rachna your child is alive
Rachna left his collar now her cheeks were spreading in happiness .she could not bliv her kid s alive.
Rajiv:Kabir said is true,I did this all to make you mine,but when you saved my life,I really wanted to say you all but I was scared you will hate me.
Rachna stood still her mind was only in thoughts her kid is alive.
Rajiv :Kabir I know you forgive me but I really tried searching for you everywhere to join you both
Kabir too didn't react to him.
Rajiv:Pls both don't be silent pls punish me,pls Rachna if you want you kill me even but don't hate me.
A tight slap was given on Rajiv's face,

Rajiv:Reena
Reena:Dont say my name too,Its irritating to know I lived with such a person.You dont worth Rachna's trust at all..She blivd you more than herself you killed her,
Rachna:Pls stop it,Someone say me wheres my child is?
Rajiv:Is Monu Rachna's child?
Rachna looked Kabir with so much of eagerness.
Kabir without saying anything
went close to Rachna n placed Monu in her hands.
Monu:Mumma
Rachna:Kabir you mean Monu is my child

Our child shouted Kabir.
Rachna could not bliv what she heard.
My child is Monu,Is this true am I dreaming
Monu bit her cheeks suddenly n Rachna admired his small,she gave Monu plenty of kisses.
Reena:Rachna you forgot Kabir,he too needs you
Rachna:He is married now Reena,for me my child is enuf to live.
Kabir went on his nerves,he hit his hand against the wall.
Rajiv:No Rachna Kabir cant marry or even see other girl,That note I wrote like he is in relation with other girl.
Reena:Rachna you forgot Kabir,he too needs you
Rachna:He is married now Reena,for me my child is enuf to live.
Kabir went on his nerves,he hit his hand against the wall.
Rajiv:No Rachna Kabir cant marry or even see other girl,That note I wrote like he is in relation with other girl.
All throwed him a kill you look,Rajiv put his head down.
Rachna looked at Kabir and Kabir turned his back to avoid her.
Rachna:Kabir
Kabir:No dont talk to me,Then I will fall for you again
Rachna :Kabir pls see me
Kabir:You said your child is enuf right go take him n getlost.
Rachna:oh fine,I will leave then,what Monu we no need Daddy na
Monu:My Daddy
Rachna put Monu down n he ran to Kabir n shook his Dads pant.
Rachna laughed and Kabir too laughed,He turned to Everyone now,knelt down to Monu's height n whispered in his ears.
"Go bring your mummy to me"
Mumma daddy caln u, shouted Monu.Kabir went to shut his mouth but he said it fast,
Rachna laughed hard seeing Kabir n Kabir blushed n stretched his arms in kneeling position.
Rachna:Catch me if you can
She said n ran from the place to the stairs.
Kabir:Rachna you,Monu pls wait,I will come with your mom
Reena:You go get your girl,I will take care of Monu.
Kabir:Thanks Reena n pls forgive Rajiv he is changed now ,u both should be together atleast for Rachna
Reena:Only for you both
Kabir:Rajiv forget whatever hapnd,n Dont worry I am sure Rachna will never hate you
Rajiv hugged Kabir n he cried
Rajiv:Am sorry for everything,you truly deserve Rachna,go get her man.
Kabir ran to the room in upstairs it was opened he peeped in to it,Rachna was not seen.
Kabir:Dont make me wait again
A hand Hugged Kabir from back.She hugged him tight.
Kabir:Show your face to me my wife
Rachna:No
Kabir pulled her n she fell in his arms,Kabir bent over her n attempted for a kiss but she pushed him n ran to a few distance n stepped breathing hard
Kabir:Rachna don't challenge me,you know how am I in this
Rachna:you alone made me cry for three years na
Kabir went close to her n faced her n held her shoulders
Kabir:Its all my fault I accept it,I am stupid,I should have blivd you would wait for me
Rachna:No its my fault.I should have not left anyone between us
Kabir:No my fault I should not have left you at all,But seeing you in his house I gone mad,I thought of dying that second only for our monu I lived
Rachna closed his mouth with her palm
Rachna:Its my fault that's t
Kabir kissed her palm Rachna blushed
Kabir:Love you Mrs.Kabir
Rachna jumped on him n hugged him,Kabir hugged her back both crushed each other.
Rachna:Will never leave you a second alone anymore.
Kabir gave a naughty smile n kissed her forehead,then nose then he placed a gentle kiss on her lips but her lips opened n she locked his lips in hers.And she was dominating the kiss,She was kissing him so hard,And she finally let him breathe.
Rachna:Hey what happen
Kabir:You too hot Rachna
He took her on his arms n dropped her on the bed n removed his shirt n jumped on her
Rachna:Hey monu will be alone
Kabir:Yes that's y I am helping him to get a sister
Rachna blushed n covered her face while Kabir undressed her...
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Epilogue
An year later In house which Kabir bought for Rachna 4 years back in London
Kabir:Wake up,its late
No its only 10
Monu:Mumma my first day to school n you sleeping
Rachna:Oh ya,I forgot omg
Monu:You will never change
He said hitting on his head
Kabir:Rachna your parents called to wish Monu,you talk to them,They asked you to call back
Rachna: Sure n you know what Monu is behaving more like you nowadays
Kabir:Atleast let him be good
Rachna threw pillow on him n he ran
Kabir:shhh Mahi is sleeping
Rachna took Mahi in her hands n Kabir too joined her they both Kissed Mahi while Monu ran n sat between them..Kabir put his arm around his pretty wife n she leaned on his shoulder with a wide smile on her face.
The End😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
you r the best...
Just now read the update for which i was waiting from morning it was just awesome...
loved it...
thanks a lot...
kabir forgives rajiv n monu and mahi n our rabir so sweet. I was just in imagination while reading the update.
Ya sad that ff got over, but ya ll b waiting for your next writing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh wow the baby girl mahi and thank god all well thats end well kabir is so kind that he even forgive rajeev so sweet of him noone can ever do that so easily love the update and at last rabir as together
Lovely update saranya but why it ended so soon hats off to you will miss it but wait for another eagerly😳

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