RABIR FF: INTEZAAR updt part 5@ page 7 - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

53

Views

18.2k

Users

21

Likes

102

Frequent Posters

AnjaliPunia thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#11
when will be ur next add me to ur pm list please
Oishiii thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: angelinasingh

when will be ur next add me to ur pm list please

tonight😛
Oishiii thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#13


part 2

next morning...
rachna is getting ready for college

rachna ( to herself); oh god i am getting late. (shail enter the room)

shail: rachna i take your breakfast here . hurry-up take it
raachna : no maa i really don't have time. i will take something @ college

shail : but..

rachna: maa i am leaving..bye

rachna leave for college

shail ( to herself): this girl is really crazy

@9 am..

kabir is getting into the car,,but he is looking to garg's house continuously . he wants to see rachna for once ...suddenly dadi come and noticed that kabir is starring at arg's house..

dadi: nanhe are you dear. are you waiting for anyone??

kabir: kabir hesitatingly answer no dadi i was just ... ( he stopped )

dadi : you are just??

kabir: nothing . bye dadi

kabir leave without answering dadi

dadi found something fishy on kabir's attitude


kabir in office...

he is continuously looking at the main road
he is waiting for rachna . he become so furious because rachna didn't reach yet

nittya : is everything alright kabir. are you waiting for someone

kabir: yes rachna ( kabir surprised on his own answer)

nittiya : rachna???

kabir: i mean she came or not

nittiya : no KT . she didn't

kabir lost in a deep thought



kabir( in thought) : i think rachna will not come here again. why should she come?? what i did yesterday with her that's not acceptable...

kabir is very very guily ..he wants to say sorry to rachna but his ego ( we all know)

@ college...

finally history lecture complete. rachna and chaya's conversation..

chaya : oh god rachna . after 7 days our eam will start

rachna : that;s why i attend todays lecture

chaya : did you note the lecture...

rachna : yes but why you asking me this . you also attend the lecture na??you would note it too

chaya : actually i was looking at the new hot guy in our class

rachna : new boy?? suddenly rachna crashed with some one and they both fall into the floor

the guy stand up chaya help rachna to stand up

rachna : sorry i didn't notice you

the guy: it's ok.. and give her a hot look

but rachna doesn't react. but chaya is totally flat on him

rachna's no reaction surprised the guy
rachna take her bag and leave with chaya

chaya : how hott!!

rachna : who??

chaya : that guy!! he is our the new guy..hott na??

rachna: hot?? whatever i have to leave or office. so bye

chaya : bye. take care

@ KT's office..
kt postponed all his meetings because he couldn't concentrate on his work

nittya: what's wrong with you ??

KT : what ??

nittiya : what mean what kabeer ?? you spoiled your ffirst meeting today. our clined was totally disappointment on you i manged them very toughly ..i think you should take a break

KT : oh come on nittiya don't over react.


precap : rachna enter the office...

ps : if anyone wants pm from me then comment here

in my FF i included exam
because in every college exam is a common thing but i think rachna's college is different . that college is exam free college









Edited by awesome-raji - 11 years ago
AnjaliPunia thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#14
first one to comment..and that too on half update but its okay ...suspense will rachna reach n kabir bothered that she may nevr come back...ahaha
Oishiii thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: angelinasingh

first one to comment..and that too on half update but its okay ...suspense will rachna reach n kabir bothered that she may nevr come back...ahaha


i will 😛
thank you
Colt.Pixy thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
#16
very nice FF raji pl continue. i loved rachna pl make her to show confidence
angelheart19 thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Hey, its a very nice story . Continue soon and please pm me.
hangok thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#18
oww great,
i love it howe he feels quilty...

please pm me
Kikidramagirl thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Wow why didn't I see this FF earlier!
Brilliantly done especially Kabir's restless behavior 😊
Oishiii thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#20
part 3


finally rachna enter the office ...

kabir see her and he releaved from something but he can't understand from what ..

kabir : miss garg is this the time you are coming

rachna : actually..

kabir : if you want to leave the job then you should inform first

rachna is confused

kabir is still shouting at her

kabir : but you don't have that type of responsibility

the two receptionist are smiling.. rachna saw that ..and she understand what's going on ..

rachna : one minute sir.. let me say...i am not leaving the job.. and why i leave the job..i never did a mistake...secondly ..i inform to you receptionist that today i would be come late in office
but i am sure they didn't get time to inform you..

everybody looking at them..they both get scared

one receptionist: actually we forgot
kabir become angry
kabir: what do you mean you forgot???

rachna : see i know my responsibility ..and what happened yesterday it was not my fault so for thati never leave my job

everybody shocked to see rachna's this avater ,the girl who always get scared and nervous in small things that girl is talking with KT by seeing kt's eye..

even KT also surprised and and also he is feeling guilty inside he wants to say sorry to her but his ego comes forward..

after some time ...

rachna is working with some new degines when kabir come ..

kabir is trying to say sorry for last time

kabir: emm rachna wo..wo..

rachna : yes KT

kabir: wo ...actually...
rachna also understand what kabir wanting to say and she is excited

rachna : say KT
kabir: wo ..degins are ready or not??

rachna is disappointed even kabir is furious at himself

rachna : yes sir. degines are ready..here ..

she give the degines to KT..and she leave..

kbir trying to stop her but aggain he can't ..

precap: kabir is trying to say sorry to rachna..

...

sorry for late update ..was busy for exam..and sorry for lshort update also because my exam is still going on...

ttrying to update soon
if anyone want pm then write here..

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".