RABIR FF: INTEZAAR updt part 5@ page 7

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RRABIR FF : INTEZAAR
PART 1


my story started from when kabir left rachna alone in dhaba


rachna is very scared . kabir left her alone here
everybody starring her . dhaba's owner come to rachna and demand for money

rachna : money??money for what??

owner said for my loss .
rachna understand if now she argue with them the situation will become more worst so she give them money .
after waiting for kabir rachna understand that kabir will not come back

rachna : it's waste of time to wait for him. he will never come back. don't know what's wrong with this KHADOOS.

rachna decide to go home by herself so she take a taxi

kabir is driving ...he is very angry suddenly he remember about rachna , he harshly break the car and turned firstly . finally he reach dhaba but rachna wasn't there ,he tried to call rachna but she doesn't pickup the call
he saw the dhaba owner and o to asked her

kabir: do you know where is the girl gone who was with me

owner : oh you?? the girl left and gave my money

kabir : she left?? but how

owner : sorry i don't know

kabir become tensed . he tried her phone but again she didn't pickup the call

rachna finally reached her hoe . she is totally in angry mood .

racchna and gunjan's conversation

rachna : how could he gunjan?? he left me alone in an unknown place. he always give me lecture on responsibility . what a responsible man he is.

gunjan : calm down rachna. there was definitely something happend

rachna : so what gunjan. i understand that but he should come back na?? but no..

gunjan : okay rachna . forget it. it's bed time. you forgot tomorrow you have to attend your history lecture .
rachna : oh yes . i have to go early in college tomorrow.

kabir reached home but he is tensed about rachna

kabir ( to himself ) : god knows he reached home or not??

dadi: what;s wrong with you nanhe??

kabir : nothing dadi . are you feel bore?? if you then you can talk with racna's mom. call her

dadi : are you okay beta. it's quite late.

kabir : but dadi... ( actually he wants to know rachna reached her home or not that's why he force dadi to call her mom).. rachna wants to talk with you.

dadi : rachna?? ok i call her

dadi and sail's conversation on phone . kabir is sitting besides dadi and listening their conversation very carefully

dadi : hi shayal . how are you dear??

shail : i am ok buaji. is everything all right?? i call me this time?

dadi : actually i want to talk with rachna. at this moment kabir become nervous

shail : she is sleeping buaji . if you say i will ..

dadi: no no shail . it's okay beta. let her sleep . she must be tired. okay dear take care. goodnight.

shail : goodnight

finally kabir is now revealed but he is feeling guilty

precap : kabir is waiting for rachna in office. but she doesn't come yet



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good starting, i love it.please continue soon. I wish in the show that rachna also give some attitude like when they met first. I hope in your ff she will, just reming kabir that he is wrong aswell. I love how u describe kabir emotion and care for rachna, i wonder what he s gonna do now.
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Nice :) Wanna see Rachna showing some attitude to kabir 😛 Please continue soon 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: linu82

Good starting, i love it.please continue soon. I wish in the show that rachna also give some attitude like when they met first. I hope in your ff she will, just reming kabir that he is wrong aswell. I love how u describe kabir emotion and care for rachna, i wonder what he s gonna do now.

thank you so much
i will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MahimaSingh

Nice :) Wanna see Rachna showing some attitude to kabir 😛 Please continue soon 🤗

thank you 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow I really like Rachna like this! All fiesty and attitude like their first, second and third meeting! Keep it up! Good job 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved your Rachna. 🤗I hope they stop showing Rachna as a scared one. Its high time, she should start showing confidence.
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Originally posted by: dramagirl123

Wow I really like Rachna like this! All fiesty and attitude like their first, second and third meeting! Keep it up! Good job 👍🏼


thank you😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: usrfan

Loved your Rachna. 🤗I hope they stop showing Rachna as a scared one. Its high time, she should start showing confidence.

thank you
and yes agree with you
i also don't want to see scared rachna. rachna should react or she should act like a smart girl


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Posted: 11 years ago
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really nice ya .kabir is feeling guilty like it😊

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