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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: savee_k

@bhondu..such a nice chapter.enjoy reading it..👍🏼

i'm loving this fun loving anmol.how he barge in ragini's house leaving her in shock..feeling so at ease going in her kitchen keeping food stuff for ragini..in the end he helped with the furnitures in keeping her distracted in his talks but it did had a positive outcome as ragini said thanks to him for his help..something which ragini disliked "help"but only one day with anmol changes are happenning ...😊
days went by and they became good friends..i just could picturise this scene so perfectly as you have so well described it..
"she came in his way n stopped him with angry look'almost scaring him'JOTAY(shoes) utharo

Anmol: kya..meray jotay mujhey he maro gi'Ragini larney Ka time nahi hai .I know you are angry with me after i shouted last night.....hatho.. OMG my meeting, presentation daam I overslept .. he kept grumbling as he headed towards the bathroom...

Ragini stopped him and grabbed his hand and he looked at her surprised:
Ragini: You're not going anywhere 'don't even dare to move out of the house'go and change in something comfortable' I am bring breakfast ..eat it have medicine'n take some rest..

Anmol: Whaatt.. are you lost ,.. I am fine'I have a presentation... I need to get ready..What medicine.....I have to get ready thats it...

Ragini: sarcastically: ooohoo'how stupid of me'forget to tell u'Mr.Sareen..news..ur having fever'if you wont take rest and continue doing work..your final day will arrive and u''ll be gone'n as I have nothing good black to wear at your funeral'.so plz give me some time to shop n don't die so early'now AT ONCE GO N CHANGE

Anmol Astnished at his change f tone of Ragini.. Gawd when she scolds she becomes a shreni...and he a mouse: hain'.Ragini..ok..but my work

Ragini her tone changes again :Anmol '.goooo

Anmol: Gosh Daam she is a Hitler..
He went '.change in his track suit'sat on his bed'she put the breakfast n orderd him to eat"..

lol kya scene tha and i was laughing as i could see anmol's expression and ragini's anger esp when she said dont die now i have nothing good in black to wear..wat a pair they make these two...just lovely..👏

ragini doing her first presentation and a complete success ... again credit goes to anmol.he is sure getting back the trust and faith in ragini and also to believe in herself..
awwww thats anmol cant see tears in ragini's eyes..he is toooooo adorable..😍
happiness is getting its way back in ragini's life and anmol is the one...😊
fantastic and so interesting ..you doing a great job and do continue soon..this for you..👏👏👏

Thanks Saveeta ,,, I am just writing what ever i can think of hopefully readers find it interestings and they can imagine the scene
I will continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

awesome fic loved it cont soon

Thnaks I will continue ..I hope to make it interesting
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: SukuluvsParul

Hey bhondu, why why I didnt see this??? Wow what an update yaar. YOu have done a superbbbb job, I just adored both the parts..

😃 Thnaks a lot .. I just started to write and I am glad you read the parts
Hiope I made you happy
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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautiful awesoem very very cute.....loved it bondhu..................
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very nice part..
Interesting take Iiked the way you are gettng ragini's confidence back
The funny part was when Anmol was'nt ready miss his presentation and he was running temperature and Ragini insisting him to listen and stay back

And later Anmol telling her to stop crying and smile !!
Please comtinue soon !
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very Well written Bhondu!👏👏👏 I really like this new Independent Corporate Woman shade to Ragini's character👏👏👏...she goes so well with Anmol's personality!😉 They're so made for each other!😳😳 The way Ragini demanded that Anmol take rest when he had fever was sweet😃...their "khatti-meethi nok jhok" is fun & the way Anmol n Ragini are slowly coming closer in support of one another is Beautiful!😊😳👏 Looking forward to reading the next part...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhondu2010

Thanks for all the encouragement ! I will continue soon.. Glad to see you around back😊


Aww...that's sweet!😊 Thank You so much for the warm welcome Pal!😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ragini: ufff what a day .i am sooo tired…….it was such n hectic day

Anmol: ya it was….yawning…I m so glad the presentation went well and Ragini you were awesome. I am so glad I left teh stage for you I believe you have immense talent and Steeve and the rest of the directors were extremely surprised .

Ragini looked at Anmol as she was digging into her purse for her keys..She nodded and thanked him for all the enouragement.

Ragini:Mr. Sareen , I should thank you, I was hesitant initially, but getting my self back to a posistion where I had lost all hopes
They both smile as he leans against the wall next to the door and drops his shoulder bag on the floor .
He digs into his pocket and bangs his head against teh wall

Anmol: Daam I left my keys on my desk.. Aab what teh heck am I suppose to do..

Ragini pulls out the keys from her bag and shows it to him
Ragini: Pata tha You have been quite careless with your keys and You remeber that day when I came to see you all exhausted I kept the kets in my purse and you are lucky Mr. Sareen Aaj phir say no fine ..

Anmol " Thanks Ragini Yes he held his fist.. I owe you a lunch at Apple Bees..
She opens the door for him and they walk in.

Ragini: Ok here you go and I will also go and rest as my neck is hurting
She moved her head side t side to relieve herself from teh joints.

As she walked out he held her hand with a grip.
She turned to look and wondered why she stopped him.

Anmol: raised his eyebrows…if u have forgotten I am working on the same project and I am tired tooo, Magar today was a great day for you so I decided to make some nice hot coffee for you...

Ragini: plzzz…with cute face

Oh no not that….he goes so weak when he see her like that

Anmol: mujhey nahi atti bana ni

Ragini:As if I have never had anything made by u na

Anmol: that was such a big mistake….no wonder y I behave like a good neighbor and made dinner for u that day...ainda tu apnay liyan bhi nahi banao ga

Ragini laughing a little: plzzz na stop arguing na go plzz

Anmol:Ok fine I am gald you stayed.. But I feel that I am not such a good cook so let me make the coffee , and the dinner is on you...

Ragini: han han abhi tu coffee bano….diner k diner time per dkhy gay

Anmol:no no…deal or no deal

Ragini: oook…fine

After sometime Ragini went into terrace…she was feeling the cold breeze…n was lost somewhere…somewhere in her past

Anmol entered there but stopped at the door…he was smiling and enjoying….but not the breeze…the picture perfect moment in front of him…an angle standing in front of him…hugging her self n closed eyes..hmm..she is….beautiful and pleasent …but the frown on her face made him a bit low

Anmol: Here is ur coffee ma'am

She excepted the mug with a faint smile…both settle down on the patio chairs beside each other…enjoying the peace around them

Anmol was in a dilemma….he was thinking of asking her about her life…..but than ..should I..what if she does'nt wana tell….but than I should give it a try


Anmol: Ragini …can I ask u something

Ragini was a little lost in her thoughts again when she came back to hearing Anmol asking her: she knew that ..this question is gonna cum her. way ….sooner or latter…n than she need to face it again

Yup Anmol u can ask

Anmol: I don't want yp borther you or be persoanl ,see if you don't wana answer it don't….its complete fine with me…

Ragini I just wonder why u left India..and here all alone

Ragini:it's a long story …sipping her coffee

Anmol: I am all here to listen …If you wana tell

Anmol look towards him…he nodded in assurance that he's gonna listen to her with all concern

Ragini: I don't want to be depended on anyone

Anmol: shook his head in surprise….india or out of India …both place u can live independently Ragini

Ragini: ahhh…Anmol …I am divorced ..that u must be knowing…we are two sister .. I am the youngest…. …my sister was married…3 years ago..She lives in Lagos Nigeria..so after a year or so my relatives were pressurisng my parents that I shoudl also get married. My father was'nt open to this decsion since he knew that I wanted to work and get independet , but my mom insisted that she can work even after getting married.. ..everyone forced me to get married though I did'nt want to….actually I want to take tobe on my own…but than I got married…my sweet husband.. she sounded sarcastic , it hurt her way deep.. She took a few steps towards the wall of the patio and rested her head.

Anmol watched her every move, he knew she was hurt but still he was ready to share her pain and wanted her to expressit ou. He listened like a good listner who would'nt want her to stop.

She continued as it seemed teh best that time

Ragini:My husband was the most non trust worthy person…he gave the gift of betrayal on my wedding night he said he doesn't love me n love someone else….so can't get along with me

Anmol: wht ….wht a jerk than why the hell he marry you

Ragini: cauz his family wants to do so….he said he'll get married to his love in few months and then will divorce me…by showing that he was already married and his parent forcefully marry him to me…..and our marriage will become fake according to hindu law. He was playing with my emotions Anmol. He never even thought about my family before plunging into this awful act ..

Tears rushed down from her eyes and hernose turned red as she expressed her unhappiness.. Anmol walked up to her and held her hand. She had to compose herself, it was hard but she did .Taking a deep breath ..

Anmol : Ragini if you wish please stop..I ..I just wanted you to feel lighter maybe its wrong of me to ask but Kabhi kabhi Insaan ko apna dukh baat lena chahiye..

Ragini: Anmol I know your concern ..I am fine ..He was a rich man so playing with law was simple for him…..and he did the same within 6 moths he divorced me

Anmol than why you didn't filed a case against him.

Ragini: I don't want to…Anmol it was of no use what will happen then….if even by chance I won the case…he wont start loving me and its too disgusting to think of that also..
She just held her ears.

Anmol: but then why did you rush here

Ragini: … After this incedent my mother was in shock she went into coma and few months later she left us aboard.. My relatives felt that I was responsible for this , but my father stood by me all teh time and supported in my decidion...I didn't wnt to live in Agra I don't want people to sympathize with me…and so he encouraged me to shift to the US based concern.


Anmol was all hurt …dnt know why ...but... but he was feeling pain ….he tried to put his hand on her shoulder but then stoped…..didnt want her to feel uncomfortable..

Anmol: ur..ur.. ok

Ragini: ya …I am fine…n plz don't feel sorry… its destiny..

Anmol: .If its destiny than why cant u stop spoiling ur life …u need to move on ...there loads of people around u who really cares for u loves you……

Ragini: I know … and I have moved on………….coffee is finished…lao mjhy do mein rekh ker ati hoon..



Anmol' thought

What..what was that…is tht so simple….my god how strong she is…I can see tears in her eyes but she said everything so simply…I know she doent like crying in front of any one…not even me….i thought she trust me n will pour her heart out in front of me…but …but than its ok



Ragini went to kitchen followed by Anmol….Ragini stood infront of the counter…holding it tightly n controlling her tears

Ragini: what happen Ragini…why didn't u let it go ….i really wana pour it out but than why I cant…why I just cant



Anmol to himself

Anmol what you have done …she is crying…yes she is …I saw a tear roll down her cheeks…man …why I askd her all that….but it was just that I want her to feel relived…trying to see her face he said ti himself wao she is so relived na…crying ….go n make up for ur mistake..go… I am going I am going

Anmol: Ragini ( came back to reality n composed herself) ..Ra..Ragini I apologize I did'nt mean to get too personal or ask somthing to disturb you.. But you know what some attention diversion needed.. I have a great cook book got at B&N tried a few dishes Itlantian ones easy preperation.. As you have taken the privilege to cook in my kitchen today why don;t you do the honours..
With so much innocence he said…Ragini was like ahhh

Anmol your impossible…

Anmol to himsef: Finally she seems fine me and my silly thoughst .. OK Chalo aab here wear this ..
He gives her a apron

Ragini: Arrey why all this I am fine, she refused to wear the apron. But Anmol insisted and he put it around her head and she tied it.
Lagtha hai you will make me your cook for the days to come ...free mai khana mil jayega ...

Anmol: mein bhooka mar jao ga….aur tum mujhey mar nay do No ways I think Ms. Sharma …meri pyari dost mujhy asay dhooka nhi day sakti..I think you know me and my attitude.

Ragini:couldnt help but laughd : stop it..ur such a nautanki….I think you should try your luck in movies.. and quit your project leader job 😆


Anmol..so tu hai….hey Ragini…he came close to her …..u look so beautiful when u laugh…asay he hastay raha kero…achi lagti hoo

Next she just can smile n adore his friendship…she was truly blessed to have him around her


Ragini: now what r u doing

Anmol: helping u in preparing food…its my kitchen …so u must b needing me around…aur wasy bhi bahar tu I'll get bored

Ragini: smile …ur wife will b really happy to have u

Anmol: that she cant

Ragini: why

Anmol: cause I donno after hearing your stoyr well chodo .. Bas I mean marriage commitment people should be truthful ..

Ragini: common Anmol.. one person experience doesn't make everyone wrong.. and why are you saying that I mean you are so focused in life too I am sure she wil walk in and you will never realized ...

Anmol: hmm .. I know…n this not because of u…but I don't trust marriages from start

Ragini: you.. a person like you don't trust relationships…who himself is such a caring n loving person

Anmol: wah wah …aaj suraj west se nikla hai…itni tareefain..wao Anmol Sareen you are the boss right the project lead He raises his eyebrows and she smiles again..…

Ragini: Anmol ji...

Anmol: Ragini ji ….I think relationships are not reliable.. I think we are discussuing this way too much..


Ragini: frndship is also a relationship Anmol..so as love but marriage is also a great relationship but if people in it realize its importance n worth…..getting married is not a joke it's a commitment tht u make to love and care for a person whole life

Anmol: n look after her in health n illnes ...u may kiss the bride

Ragini: what????

Anmol: what..what,,,u were saying like father in the church so I just completed it …

Ragini: ur such funny guy….Anmol our parents were also married na… my parents use to share the most purist form of love I hav ever seen …..

Anmol: friends n love we pick …. … I dont know abt marriage.. I dont know why but I believe loves dies after marriage

Ragini: thats not the fault of marriage it's in you…..you thing so…. many people start there love after marriage

Anmol: I don't know ….. I thing people start taking each other for granted..n than love dies…sirf explanations rah jati hain

Ragini: ur scared of responsibility???

Anmol: no no not at all… I am all set to take responsibility of her but

Ragini: but what …..people u love the most …u take them for grant but in a positive sense….its beauty of a relation…u know.. u believe.. that the person in ur life will not leave you no matter wht are the circumstance….

Anmol: love is also a bond Ragini….people who are sincere with there relationship ….marriage or no marriage …remain with each other throughout there life

Ragini: marriage provide assurance, purity…dignity to there love

Anmol now this strange …ur experience with marriage has been so awful…n still ur defending it

Ragini: one person fault ..is not everyone's crime

Anmol: i know…but for me marriage makes people to stay with each other with or without love …its that when you know someone is there with you for whole life time…u start neglecting him.. believing the fact ..tht he''ll be there always…no matter u care ,,shower love affection or not….they are completely taken for granted

Ragini: its your fault not the fault of relation

Anmol:Ok Daam why are we arguing and whats this all we are relating to.. We know facts we know what is the life takes on usOk folding his hand and lossen his tie ...…bs meri ma bs….itna argument tu meri sath generation ny nhi kiya hoga.. He smiles again..

Ragini: seven gernerations…Hmm Saat pheras will give you all teh answers ...This will hapopen when your wife comes and you take the sacred wows...

Anmol: who ajay gi…us ke tension mat lo

Ragini: Anmol u r

Anmol: impossible … I know ..soch raha hoon board laga key ghoomo…n now stop arguing …dinner ko dkhy..warna larty larty breakfast k time hojay ga

That night finally the two cooks made some nice lazania with the help of teh cook book and some frozen stuff..
Anmol was sweet enough to light a candle and set a beautiful table and they sat down looking at the lights of NY city and enjoying the meal.
Later she reached home and sta against the wall her back facing it and resting her head on her curled up knees just sobbing over what happened in her past untill the she realized that she was here to face challenges and wiped her tears and went of to bed.

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Steeve: hey Anmol…howz life….he said while entering to conference hall

Anmol: cool…..pretty cool actually

Steeve: great…so whts the plan for Saturday…you're coming to the party

Anmol: ya ..of course..after all its our project success party ..

Steev: Ms Sharma ur also joining us …right

Ragini: no I can….

Before she could finished

Anmol: no …she cant be saying that….she was shopping for this party from past two weeks

Ragini: Anmol….can i talk plzz …she was already in a bad mood….a party on SATURDAY make her feels more low
Sorry Steeve I can't make it I apologize..

Anmol:.. I cant ..com on ….Ragini its office…and I am there na I will be the host ...

He burst into laughing

Steeve: Anmol ur impossible

Anmol: oh nooo…..not u too steeve

By the time steeve left

Ragini: Anmol its not always necessary tht people should follow what you want them to do. I mean I am fine without going for teh party, So don;t worry too much about me or my problems. And I just want to be myself.

Anmol:O come on Ragini, Thoda change ho jayega.. Afterall its a company party and you have worked hard for the poject and as a project leader I am asking you to come. He moves close to her and holds her arms

Ragini was cross hearing his word…..sumthing was actually bothering her n than Anmol talks.

Ragini: Anmol please just let me take my decision and be myself...…she said tht a left the conference room


It was round 5 pm ragini had left without informing...Returning to home….Anmol kept thing abt her… I shouldn't have said all that …she must be extremely angry…Oh Lord plz save me…wasay he I know these days I have been quite demanding….actually these days he was feeling there were lots of things shouldn't be doing…he always forcefully make Ragini do certain things…..like socialize, shop, go out, movie watching…..bt than it was just because he wants her to get back to life



Anmol: I need to check whether Ragini is annoyed with me or not…I need to …if she is she is not gona come for the party …and that surely I don't want…..already she was in bad mood today….and than I did that…

He stopped at her door …rang the bell nobody answer..he check inside ..no one was there….an unknown fear crept in his heart …is she that mad at me….she left office earlier than me then why she is not at home…oh GOD

He grabbed his car key and went looking for her…by the time they know each other that well …can guess where other can be

AT beach

Ragini was standing near the shores…feeling cold water touching her bare foot…she was remembering her past…..wht she has gone through….the scary night mares…the betrayals…..the faith which was lost ….the hope she found here…than life in NY…a smile appears on her face as she start thinking abt it


Ragini: I never thought my one decision will give me so much…a job …my individuality….independence…An…..Anmol….my friend…a person who always make me smile…no matter how low I am ….he gave me strength to believe…he gave me eyes to c life with another vision ….i m truly blessed …..he is such a nice guy…always there for me..


Anmol went to the beach……looking here n there for her..he finally saw an angle standing near the shores….he was relived …..n…..than… lost …oh God…..she is an angle…..so innocent…so pure…. always correct …life has been so difficult for her but than she stood against every odd like a true fighter ( he smiled) …he looked at her with a strange look as he was thinking …..why she is looking so different….oh..oh her hairs..they r so….. beautiful…y she always tie them up….looks so boring



Her hairs were continuously coming on her face…she wasn't removing them but was enjoying nature at its best….he felt so deep for her…that couldn't hold him self ...his feet automatically start moving towards her…without losing his passionate gaze at her……he move s towards her ..with every step he was taking towards her..his heart was beating faster…..his soul was feeling complete….he stood beside her…gazing at her...absorbing her inside his soul ….slowly he moves his hand n remove a strand of her hair from her face….she took a back with the touch …...she was surprised but could'nt utter a word when her eyes meet his passion filled one…..he moved more closer…n closer….n slides his hand two cup her face …slowly n gradually moving toward her ….so close that his head was against hers and he could almost feel her breath on his lips, her lips were sealed…..The time frooze for them when...suddenly..


Ball hit right on his head…..next he hit his head with his hand…realizing he was dreaming


Anmol:have u lost it…wht the hell u were thinking….she is ur frnd…she trust u so much …Anmol Sareen tjhy kya horaha hai….relax..relax …. take deep breath…dnt think like tht …..plz ..dnt mess…she is the most precious friend in ur life.. Anmol focus on talking to her and make her understand that she needs to see new frontiers in life..
Taking a deep breath.. He rusn his fingers through his hair


He turns towards her again n again get lost in her….


Boss ANmol your mind is definatly lost seeing this angle but come back to your senses Daam please come back. He kept talking to himself as he walked away again..


He went away from there…not even looking at her…he was so confused n scared of his feeling that could'nt even find courage to go near her.

Whats going on with him he was in such a situation that his mind was ..
Anmol to himself How can you leave her alone you must be crazy and do ever do anything like taht. Go and ask her to come back home..

He walked up to her finally taking the courgae

Anmol: Ragini kafi deer ho chuki hai .. SHall we go home..

Ragini: Hm.. you finally found me here..
as they walked

Anmol: Ragini I am sorry holding his ears


she smiled and pulled his hand off

Ragini : Friendship mai no sorry Ok..

Stopping for a moment as she walked ahead

Anmol to himself.. Kya yeah sirf friendshp hai ..thinking to himself.. No anmol lets goo
She also stopped and looked back and called him to come on...

So will she still agree for teh party lets see
To be continued

I am not sure if this part was interesting.. I think I was trying to show some varied emotions. Please let me know if I should continue as I know I am trying to just show some situations in lives.

Thanks for reading Please leave your comments

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Posted: 14 years ago
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@bhondu..tooo good.really captivating and so interesting...👏
really you showing the reality of life through anmol-ragini.
well blended emotions in the scenes..laugh..tease..tears..comfort-support..or may be love..
for now i just love the way you describing the friendship of anmol-ragini..its so real esp the kitchen scene ..the little nok-jhok about marriage and could picturise every single moment of them..😊
the scene on the terrace was so beautifully written.anmol looking at an angel standing there and how he finally made ragini talk about her past..a bitter one and anmol felt a little gulty later as ragini was in tears,.how he manage to divert her attention by asking to cook dinner..touchy scene..👏
life moves on and anmol -ragini friendship getting more stronger..taking care of each other but ragini's wound of the past seems still deep..
such is their friendship he already knew where to find her and wat a beautiful scene you have penned down..ragini all angelic from anmol's view and he is so lost in her beauty..the next scene so capturing anmol removed the strand of hair from ragini's face and the kiss ..a dream of anmol ..👏
back to his senses and thinking to himself wat's happenning to him...
lastly got the courage and asked ragini to go back home..
ragini past a very bitter one and she needs someone to heal her wound..
anmol her best friend and support and now seems love is finding its way in this relationship..
who can be better healer than anmol for ragini's pain ..
do continue as its really catchy the story..
you doing great job and enjoy reading each scene..keep it up..👏👏
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Fantastic update Bhondu 👏,It was a mix of emotions😭 and cute romance.😳

Felt sad for Ragini's past life.

Loved Anmol's conversation 😃and i loved these lines so much.😳

Her hairs were continuously coming on her face…she wasn't removing them but was enjoying nature at its best….he felt so deep for her…that couldn't hold him self ...his feet automatically start moving towards her…without losing his passionate gaze at her……he move s towards her ..with every step he was taking towards her..his heart was beating faster…..his soul was feeling complete….he stood beside her…gazing at her...absorbing her inside his soul ….slowly he moves his hand n remove a strand of her hair from her face….she took a back with the touch …...she was surprised but could'nt utter a word when her eyes meet his passion filled one…..he moved more closer…n closer….n slides his hand two cup her face …slowly n gradually moving toward her ….so close that his head was against hers and he could almost feel her breath on his lips, her lips were sealed…..

Continue soon Bhondu.👏⭐️

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