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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_sakshi

@ bhondu:

Quite an Interesting piece of writing👏...the Anmol-Ragini story & the way their relationship started off has been given a new perspective in your work👍🏼...Ragini coming from NY city & her first interaction with Anmol, Anmol's first thoughts on Ragini being beautiful😳..seems like a unique storyline!😊 Would sure like to know how the story moves on, so keep writing!😉

Thanks for all the encouragement ! I will continue soon.. Glad to see you around back😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOW WOW Bhondu.👏It was Fantastic.👏

Loved the story line it is something new.👍🏼

Loved Anmol's character 😍and felt sad for Ragini 😭anyway she is destined to meet a gem called Anmol.😳

All the scenes where fantastic.👏


Walking up from her thoughts Ragini she smile on his husband childish behavior.. Husband yes he is my husband' a relationship I hated the most but he made me worship him, He made me feel that love exists and its beautiful ... Being lost or devoid of it and feeling it back with him was something she believed as her papa also had once told her that love will find its way to you all you need to do is open your arms and it will embrace you.

Mr.Sareen'i.e. Anmol Sareen project head'.Sauve and stylish'.. Workaholic yes quite a bit but took things lightly was'nt too serious and saw life as a broader dimension .He was cool with what life offers not making too much of a headache for himself as his motto is life is short and things should be taken as they come and live life king size.


Just loved these parts too much.👏👏👏

Please continue soon.😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: krithikas

WOW WOW Bhondu.👏It was Fantastic.👏


Loved the story line it is something new.👍🏼

Loved Anmol's character 😍and felt sad for Ragini 😭anyway she is destined to meet a gem called Anmol.😳

All the scenes where fantastic.👏


Walking up from her thoughts Ragini she smile on his husband childish behavior.. Husband yes he is my husband' a relationship I hated the most but he made me worship him, He made me feel that love exists and its beautiful ... Being lost or devoid of it and feeling it back with him was something she believed as her papa also had once told her that love will find its way to you all you need to do is open your arms and it will embrace you.

Mr.Sareen'i.e. Anmol Sareen project head'.Sauve and stylish'.. Workaholic yes quite a bit but took things lightly was'nt too serious and saw life as a broader dimension .He was cool with what life offers not making too much of a headache for himself as his motto is life is short and things should be taken as they come and live life king size.


Just loved these parts too much.👏👏👏

Please continue soon.😳

Thanks Krithika..
I am gald you liked it
Its a new story I was thinking I am not agood writer like other just giving it a shot.., Hope to make it interesting ,.. Thansk for all you support !!😊
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Ragini enters her apartment'.sit down leaning to a pillar'.tears roll down her cheeks''.im in my new house '..all alone'.haaaaaaaa'..no Ragini not now u cant just go weak now'.you need to be strong and look forward to ur life


Anmol was sitting in his apartment n was completely confused, Then he gets up and walks up and down somthing is there in his mind bothering him after he came back, talking to himself.

Anmol: should I check what she is doing'.no ..she doesn't like people to interfere'..No actually its not like that..She is new in this city so probably a little scared but also careful'that's good actually'. I should ask her if I can help her in some way she is new na'..hmmmm, magar jao kasay'.After a little pause he says : BINGO idea' and clicks his fingers....


After sometime door bell rang

Ragini: who can be there 'visitor for me'.why I don't know anyone here ...lets check

She opened the door an was surprise'it was none other than Mr. Sareen with tray of food'entering in the house without even asking her permission

Anmol: hey '. I hope I didn't disturbed you'..i thought you must be buzy in unpacking so like a good neighbor I thought of sharing food with you
He was also holding another brown shopping bag with a few important things for a quick grocery need ..

He said while enter into her kitchen'.taking out plates n spoons'arranging them on counter'and while all that was happen Ragini was still on the door with a shocked face which did show a little anger too.Folding her hands she keeps looking at her kitchen area

Anmol: array waha kyun kahri hoo'.comon in '..i am a good cook😊

He then pulled out teh stuff from teh brown bag and opened the refrigetartoer..
Anmol : thses are some quick essetntails you will need them I had extra a gallon of milk and some instant coffeee he looked inthe pantry ..."O its there thsts good "
Ragini: realizing 'its her house'what the heck.. he just badges in ,.This is my house my kitchen I need my privacy.. how dare he disturb me...
But she still goes towards the table and continues with her talk...

Yeah kahana tum nay banaya hai???

Anmol: yup 'what you doubt that I can cook'Mam.. I have been living here from past 5 yrs if I use to dine out all the time'.my food bills will be higher than my salary'don't worry this food is safe'.while talking a spoon himself...Zeher nahi kilaaonga !!!


Ragini can't help her self she nods'Anmol ur impossible

Anmol: wht 'wht I did'..no its not impossible to cook for a man

He said that so innocently that she can't stop her self from smiling

Ragini: Thanks

Anmol:Waisey your not always welcum'.Sometimes like to taste what others can make.and give complment also.. Akhir Mehenat ki hai !!!

They finished eating'while Anmol was doing all the talks

Anmol: chalo lets unpack ur thing I will not touch your belongings.. I know its suppose to be a personalthing, butwill help you arrange furnitures and other stuff.. Anyways its quite furnished the apprtment looks ready to move don't you think..
He moved stuff a little more inside from teh doorway and He started all by himself

Ragini: u don't need to 'I'll mange'


He wasn't listening to her'he knows tht very well that she need help but will never ask for it'.Ragini cant help it'he is too stubborn '.she joins him'.They dust out some of the dust sitting for a while on some of the stuff even though it was covered and they arranged her house..unpack all the things n set down on couch..

Anmol:.....ufff.......I did so much ..atleast ek coffee tu banti hai

Ragini: ya ofcourse 'here you go'.thanx a lot for helping me..thnax

Anmol: plz itna thanx mat bolo..I am not used to so much of thanks pouring on me .. He laughed.. I am boing a good neighbor and a good colluege and helping out.. Yeah tho meray doston kay saat its a norm when they are in need.. Actually I did'nt ask you if you needed my help just barged in ..Well I am like that I feel intution comes to me that you may need help so I decided to come...

Ragini: Anmol'ur impossible'kahbi serious hotay ho'i never thought my project head will b like this

Anmol: nahi .... Ragini life it self is sooo serious....and if you also start acting serious ...than u'll stuck with two serious people ....which will multiple the seriousness of the serious life

Ragini holding her ears hearing all his philosophical talk: Shocked haannn.....your impossible.. no wonder....'..

Anmol: thanx..that I know I am'wasy sorry for irritating you so much'

Ragini: thanx for doing all that

Anmol: what irritating you

Ragini: nooo... for making me comfortable in my own house

Anmol: your welcome .....wht friends are for......hey friends....actually I feel so lonely here ..while offering his hand to her

He then dug in his pocket and removed a mobile...and gave it in her hand.. She wondered why he was giving her a mobile..
Anmol: Ok I have this spare mobile.. It has about 30 minutes left not a 4 GS , but a reguaklr mobile which i had for about 2 years.. Now that i have upgraded mine it was lying at home and then I thought of you kuch deer pheley and you can finish the minitues.. It has international calling also some plan I had taken so use it off and call your folks untill you get your calling card.

She looked at him and was a little hesitant , he told her that he has to trust her and now that they are neighbors arrey ek doosarey kay kaam nahi ayengay tho kya faida.. She finally smiled... and continued with her talk..he said that he was glad he got a neighbor like her ...

Ragini: you feel lonely.....i bet you have hundreds of friend here....shaking hands with him

Anmol: hmm.. actually not most of them are more workplace friends 'else are companions....so not true friends....anyways I think I should leave...I'll catch you at 8 in morning

Ragini: ok bye

Anmol:
bye.. takecare.......sorry if I irritated u.....but I guarantee I cant stop doing that'kisi mahan insaan nay kaha hai.......aadataay agar waqt per na badli jay tu zarooratay ban jati hain

Ragini: gud night......she shuts the door.....n smiled....pagal hai pora pagal hai

She walks to her room... Opening her bag she removes her stuff and puts it in the cupboard. Her picture with her dad somthing which she can never part she removed it from way below and places it on the table and goes to change .

Snuggling into bed she holds the picture and talks "papa I know you are missing me around I miss you too.. " she kisses the photograph and turns off the light and goes to bed.


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Days past ….soon they become really good frnds really good one…they use to hang out, dine in together, shop, etc etc n ….Have a good time together…actually Anmol would do all the masti to cheer up Ragini when she was down or unhappy, never questioned her about anything but noticed a lot about her behavior..Slowly the changes made Ragini see life better and Anmol was amused by seeing such a competent beautiful and independent girl…..and Ragini was an admirer of his care and affection



A day at Office


Anmol: what the hell …..Deadline is so close…..n wht u people are doing …ur work is still not complete…Mr. I need to submit this report day after tomorrow…GOD…..ok fine what ever u have done put here n LEAVE

John: sorry sir….I'll try to complete it today … my PC was having sum problems

Anmol: Daam don't give me such lame excuses about work….there 50 PC in this office u can use…just put the file n LEAVE AT ONCE

Ragini: ooops….Anmol calm down…why r u so angry

Anmol: Ragini I hate people who are not serious about there work …this project is my life u know that….i am working day n night ..why they cant realize that this is so important and our positions in the company will be at stake and we have to deliver in time .. Reputation ka sawal hai....

Ragini: ok… ok…. relax….now what are u doing

Anmol: I'll complete this report by myself ….u leave .. I'll be late …don't wait for me on dinner

Ragini: Are u sure… I can help

Anmol: no its ok …I'll mange… ur also tired…..tmhary pass kya kam kaaam hai…u go

Ragini: its ok I ca…

Anmol: Ragini…plz I am not in a mood to argue…..plz leave….I'll do it

Ragini looked at him and realized more she stays there the matter will heat up so she said . .o..k… and she left

And he continue his work…Anmol to himself:Hey Mr.head of the project ! no time for pain ..chill dude and finish it hojaayeega just focus just focus,,,

AT home

Ragini was still waiting for him…it was already 10.30 at nite he was still not home .. She peeped from her window to see if his lights were on it was dark pitch dark..….it was nt the first time but this time from past 4 days this is happening n top of it today he is extremely angry too..

Ragini: ghusay mein to car bhi jet ke speed per chalata hai…mujhey us ko akhela chorna nahi chaiay tha…but nahi Mahashy mujhey rukh nay daytha tu na….mujhey koi problem ho tu foran hero ban jata hai…n if I want to help..tum jao mein Manage kerlo ga he says I know he is not going to be able too ....…what should I do…she kept thinking then looked at the mobile ...text kerti hoon..



She grap her mobile but …beep beep..1 message received…she opened just to find… it was Anmol

Ragini ji I know you are waiting you are like a hawaldaar jo mujrim ko pakadkey kay liye tayaar hai lockup mai dalney kay liye...…I'll b late …I had my dinner…so stop waiting for me..go to bed…Good night Smile

She smiled..pata tha he will have some excuse.. maybe I was only too worked up thinking about him and his eating, he is not a kid and can manage himself...She walked to her room and and laid on her nice cozy bed to have a good night sleep



Morning 8.00am



She was all set to go to office when realized that its already 8…and why there is so peace around her…actually it was a daily routine tht by this time Anmol would have come to her place and rang the door bell again again n again ..untill she open the door and ask him to stop it as he was too particular about reaching in time ....

But today it wasn't the case…she went to his house…opened the door…she always had spare keys since he was fined $200 by the apartment office for forgetting his keys atleast 3 times..So he decided to give it to the first person whom he found good friendship and who m he coudl trust in years for this help.. and thats were Ragini became the best candidate and he had given his keys just in case...Ragini opened the door slowly and found no one in living room…she went in a little more and saw a half door opened... Pushing the door a litle more she stepped inside his bedroom It was pretty neat and well arranged book shelf and a few clothes in the laundry basket, a laptop opened ,keys on the side table with the wallet and she …smiled….as she spotted Anmol who had looks like crashed after last nights hectic long hour was sleeping on his bed…actually half on bed n his legs off the bed…with his shoes n formal clothes on…She walked a little closer but the stopped.. Thinking about the arguments of last night and the time he gt back maybe 1 am she did'nt want to wake him up.. but knowing how important it was for him to go office today and Steeve's narazgi tho kanthey ki tarah chubthi hai so she did'nt want to take a chance and after all he is her boss and the project head has to be there ..

Ragini: went close to him..Anmol utho..Anmol…she places her hand on his hand..his head was warm...…she was shocked and ..she check his forehead…....he is having fever he seems so warm …itna kam keray he must be so worked up.. and thats caused all this... …4 din se ghar bhi late arha hai..rest kerny k bholo tu nhi kaam hai buhat…careless I mean health is so inportant .ANMOL UTHO..she shouted

At once he got up….rubbed hos eyes and looked up to see who it was focusin he saw Ragini
Anmol : what what happen…morning..oh freak I am late…I'll get read in 5 mins..Ragini plz wait..

Ragini: she came in his way n stopped him with angry look…almost scaring him…JOTAY(shoes) utharo

Anmol: kya..meray jotay mujhey he maro gi…Ragini larney Ka time nahi hai .I know you are angry with me after i shouted last night.....hatho.. OMG my meeting, presentation daam I overslept .. he kept grumbling as he headed towards the bathroom...

Ragini stopped him and grabbed his hand and he looked at her surprised:
Ragini: You're not going anywhere …don't even dare to move out of the house…go and change in something comfortable… I am bring breakfast ..eat it have medicine…n take some rest..


Anmol: Whaatt.. are you lost ,.. I am fine…I have a presentation... I need to get ready..What medicine.....I have to get ready thats it...

Ragini: sarcastically: ooohoo…how stupid of me…forget to tell u…Mr.Sareen..news..ur having fever…if you wont take rest and continue doing work..your final day will arrive and u''ll be gone…n as I have nothing good black to wear at your funeral….so plz give me some time to shop n don't die so early…now AT ONCE GO N CHANGE

Anmol Astnished at his change f tone of Ragini.. Gawd when she scolds she becomes a shreni...and he a mouse: hain….Ragini..ok..but my work

Ragini her tone changes again :Anmol ….goooo

Anmol: Gosh Daam she is a Hitler..
He went ….change in his track suit…sat on his bed…she put the breakfast n orderd him to eat

Ragini: Take this and have sum rest…I know your work is important…first half ..I'll handle..you join the office after half day..ok…n you don't dare to look..think..about work..is that clear..

Anmol who was resting his face on his palm and listeing to al the instrustions was lost in her talk
Anmol : yes…ma'am…got it teacher with the childish..angry face

Ragini: good intellingent Ho samajdaar ho and you listen to me.. …I am leaving have sum sleep

Anmol: ya ya ..i heard that ….leave….Ragini….she turn back….thanx

Ragini: smiled… your are welcome bye take care..

Another day at Office:

There was a final presentation of project in front of the directors and Anmoldecided that it should be Ragini who 'll be presenting it..she was damm scared, nervous….she know that she can do it but still it was a huge thing…and Anmolhas shown so much of trust in her…and fought for her so that she can show what creativity and knwledge she has in her…

She was busy arranging things in board room…when Anmol enters

Anmol: so Ms Sharma all set

Ragini:….hmmm..ya ..ya all set

Anmol: he can see she was nervous…he smiled…and came close to her ..he gently put his hand on her…she looked at him surprisingly…somehow his touch wold shift her up a litle.

Ragini every thing will be perfect…you can do …its just that u need to believe in yourself…if anybody else in this office would have been so competent like u…he must have been presenting today…no body is but ur…..trust ur self…I believe in you


His words were acting like magic in her ears….did'nt know why but her faith was cuming back…. every time she look in to his eyes the faith he has transfer to her…..she was lost in his words …in his eyes…in faith he had for her….suddenly the door open…and she came back to reality ….it was Steeve

Steeve: so all set

Anmol was about to say sumthing when Ragini cuts

Ragini: yes 100%..any doubts

Anmol: was smiling …she was back ..her confidence was back…he felt like the most relieved and happiest person in this world….finding a true smile( wch was rare) on her face seems to be his biggest achievement…he didn't know why..and even he didn't care


The presentation start and our bold and beautiful Ragini rocked the board room ….everyone was extremely impressed by her work…Anmol was also…no he wasn't impressed…but he was feeling the biggest achiever today….as if he won the battle

Anmol: congrats Ms Sharma

Ragini: thanku Mr.Sareen…..thnx Anmol

Anmol: why this double thanks

Ragini: The latter one is for my best friend who believed in me even when I wasn't and told me how good I am ..Really boosted my moral.. I was so lost but now....tears fell from her beautiful eyes...

Anmol : Hey Hey Ragini what happened.. No ways can i see tears in your eyes.. he rushed to fetch the Kleenex box from the table near the projector and a bottel of water..
madam here you are how can you do this tio me.. Meray saamney roona.. Am i that bad a project head .Meri reputation ka sawal hai what will Steeve say ...

Ragini taking the tissue wiped her tear and cleared her throat and composed herself..
Thanks Anmol... I really appriciate it .. I think you have done a lot I am truly fortunate to have you in my life now...she shook hands with him and he placed his hand on hers..
Shall we leave now ...

Anmol: Sure chalo ghar chal kay we shoudl celebrate .. what say...

Ragini smiled and as they were about to leave her phone rings

Ragini: hello papa yes it was my day today ...I presented the project and the directors were extremely happy

On the other side
Sharma ji: I am proud of you my dear...I know you can achive anything once you know your goal...Keep your sprit high..Love you beta...
Another tear rolled down and Anmol nodded and whispered softly in her ear ... No tears my dear !!!

She looked back and smiled and wished good bye to her papa and hung up...

Achiveing something was Ragini's goal.. Happiness started to knock at her door so will she get her life back.. we will see and teh story moves on

All comments , suggestions are welcome.. Thanks for reading😊
Hope you liked this part .. Please leave your feedback..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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waw....it's fantastic bhondu. It's very . Intersting.... Anmol has be come a close friend of ragini... Thas good. You have written it well keep going.
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Another wonderful update Bhondu.👏👏👏

I actually love this Anmol who is very naughty 😳and the way he went to Ragini's home with some food stuffs to make her normal and happy was too good.😍

Anmol's innocent and cute dialogues to Ragini asking for a coffee is too lovely.😃☺️

Anmol giving his another mobile to her saying he has an extra one so that she can call her dad shows how caring person he is.👏😃

And they became friends and Ragini wanting to care of him as he got fever was a step ahead in their life.😉

Also loved Ragini's and her dad's conversation😃. and Anmol saying No tears my dear !!! was too adorable.😳😍

Yes Ragini is getting her happiness back in the way of Anmol.😃😃😃

Please continue soon you are too good in writing.👏👏👍🏼

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Posted: 14 years ago
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@bhondu..such a nice chapter.enjoy reading it..👍🏼
i'm loving this fun loving anmol.how he barge in ragini's house leaving her in shock..feeling so at ease going in her kitchen keeping food stuff for ragini..in the end he helped with the furnitures in keeping her distracted in his talks but it did had a positive outcome as ragini said thanks to him for his help..something which ragini disliked "help"but only one day with anmol changes are happenning ...😊
days went by and they became good friends..i just could picturise this scene so perfectly as you have so well described it..
"she came in his way n stopped him with angry look…almost scaring him…JOTAY(shoes) utharo

Anmol: kya..meray jotay mujhey he maro gi…Ragini larney Ka time nahi hai .I know you are angry with me after i shouted last night.....hatho.. OMG my meeting, presentation daam I overslept .. he kept grumbling as he headed towards the bathroom...

Ragini stopped him and grabbed his hand and he looked at her surprised:
Ragini: You're not going anywhere …don't even dare to move out of the house…go and change in something comfortable… I am bring breakfast ..eat it have medicine…n take some rest..

Anmol: Whaatt.. are you lost ,.. I am fine…I have a presentation... I need to get ready..What medicine.....I have to get ready thats it...

Ragini: sarcastically: ooohoo…how stupid of me…forget to tell u…Mr.Sareen..news..ur having fever…if you wont take rest and continue doing work..your final day will arrive and u''ll be gone…n as I have nothing good black to wear at your funeral….so plz give me some time to shop n don't die so early…now AT ONCE GO N CHANGE

Anmol Astnished at his change f tone of Ragini.. Gawd when she scolds she becomes a shreni...and he a mouse: hain….Ragini..ok..but my work

Ragini her tone changes again :Anmol ….goooo

Anmol: Gosh Daam she is a Hitler..
He went ….change in his track suit…sat on his bed…she put the breakfast n orderd him to eat"..

lol kya scene tha and i was laughing as i could see anmol's expression and ragini's anger esp when she said dont die now i have nothing good in black to wear..wat a pair they make these two...just lovely..👏

ragini doing her first presentation and a complete success ... again credit goes to anmol.he is sure getting back the trust and faith in ragini and also to believe in herself..
awwww thats anmol cant see tears in ragini's eyes..he is toooooo adorable..😍
happiness is getting its way back in ragini's life and anmol is the one...😊
fantastic and so interesting ..you doing a great job and do continue soon..this for you..👏👏👏
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Hey bhondu, why why I didnt see this??? Wow what an update yaar. YOu have done a superbbbb job, I just adored both the parts..
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Originally posted by: zee10

waw....it's fantastic bhondu. It's very . Intersting.... Anmol has be come a close friend of ragini... Thas good. You have written it well keep going.

Thnaks again for reading.. I am trying to make it as interetsing as I can hope i can be good at it 😊
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Originally posted by: krithikas

Another wonderful update Bhondu.👏👏👏


I actually love this Anmol who is very naughty 😳and the way he went to Ragini's home with some food stuffs to make her normal and happy was too good.😍

Anmol's innocent and cute dialogues to Ragini asking for a coffee is too lovely.😃☺️

Anmol giving his another mobile to her saying he has an extra one so that she can call her dad shows how caring person he is.👏😃

And they became friends and Ragini wanting to care of him as he got fever was a step ahead in their life.😉

Also loved Ragini's and her dad's conversation😃. and Anmol saying No tears my dear !!! was too adorable.😳😍

Yes Ragini is getting her happiness back in the way of Anmol.😃😃😃

Please continue soon you are too good in writing.👏👏👍🏼

Thanks Krithika.. Anmol and Ragini have inmspired me to write. Just putting down some new thoughts 😊

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