Anmol Ragini FF-Love will find its way again(pg6)

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Anmol Ragini FanFiction- Love will find its way again.

Anmol and Ragini are played by Apurva and Parul.. The story is new, Its something different maybe a little like a fresh story for season two.

Here its just Anmol and Ragini at present and when I go along my story I will introduce new characters. I am not very creative but please excuse my mistakes.

Anmol is like a man next door a little taking life easy and not too worked up with things.. For him life seems good and happy
Ragini is a bit serious in this. She has gone through a lot in life, and maybe thats the reason why she fees like that..

Ragini loves her papa, he has told her to be strong and independent and she is trying to be that.. She follows a lot of his principals and she feels he motivates her a lot in many ways. Taking his blessings she wants to stand up in the world there is a lot of hardship in her way but she goes by it.Love was not fair to her somewhere but then things took turns...Ok I will stop and go ahead with my chapter 1

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Ch1

She was siting in her balcony, viewing the beautiful waves of sea. Life can change to such extend, never she thought about. There was a time when she was living her life all alone, scared, broken but then it's truly said

Right in the middle of ordinary life, love gives us fairytale

Love an emotion she was scared to feel the most but than it happened and made her nightmares into dreams, dreams into reality


Anmol: Sweetheart 'where are you '.Ragini'..gosh here u are'.I was looking for u all over the house and you are...

He stopped there'.looked at her'she was not responding to his words not because they don'nt mean anything to her'.but she was all lost in her dreams, his dreams

He laid down on her lap and kissed their unborn child by placing a peck on her maternity shirt.

Ragini : Aap when u did come ?.. She jerked herself and looked at him as he gazed at her eyes which were lost somewhere...

Anmol: Look my little princes your mom is not interested in listening to my words na''hope u come soon and than v will have fun together ONLY

Walking up from her thoughts Ragini she smile on his husband childish behavior.. Husband yes he is my husband' a relationship I hated the most but he made me worship him, He made me feel that love exists and its beautiful ... Being lost or devoid of it and feeling it back with him was something she believed as her papa also had once told her that love will find its way to you all you need to do is open your arms and it will embrace you.

Ragini: looking at Anmol with a sad face'hmmm than mama will feel alone na ..if u and dad are not gonna talk to me

Anmol:'hey sweetheart not fair ..you know very well I cant see u like that'..your such a bad girl'.sure know how to make a fool out of me

Both start Laughing

Anmol: I never thought that after 3 yrs I'll be lying like this and talking to our daughter''I still remember when we first meet' you use to be soo arrogant, quite,

Things where not the same 3 yrs ago they were different way different


In the busiest city of Newyork a girl came out of the airport looking for taxi'..she looking so composed though she was very scared, nervous, but her papa's words were always a boost for her as it was her first time that she is out of Agra' all alone 'she was serious , but determined..

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Ch 2

3 yrs ago

In the busiest city of Newyork a girl came out of the airport looking for taxi'..she looking so composed though she was very scared, nervous, but her papa's words were always a boost for her as it was her first time tht she is out of Agra' all alone 'she was serious , but determined..

She gets in taxi and asked the caby to take her to an office she mentioned

She entered the office an asked the receptionist for Mr.Steeve, her boss. She was hired as an project co-ordinator of a multinational company. Back at Agar she begged her officials to shift her to some place outside India. She convinced her papa to believe in her and she would be a new Ragini Sharma when she returns.. Her papa was proud of his daughter and gave her the courage...As it was a US based company and she was an extremely competent girl, they shift her to there head office at NEWYORk

She went to Steeves cabin

Steeev: Good morning..Ms Sharma'..how was ur flight

Ragini: It was long but good

Steeve:
you must b tired'.you can take 2 days off and can join us on Wednesday' Mr.Sareen our project head will explain you ur responsibility here''.he'll be your neighbor too. He is an Indian ..so I hope u'll be comfortable with him

Ragini: thankyou'.I am here too work'so it doesn't matter who is what Indian or other'.and about taking rest'.I'll take today and will join from tomorrow

Steeve: ok that's good come I'll introduces u to your staff and show your cabin.

That is Ms Ragini Sharma'..a girl likes simple living high thinking'straight forward, honest competent, ambitious'..life for her is serious business and she dose'nt take anythin for granted and has been hurt deeply ..


Steeve made her introduce to everyone ... way back in a corner'sipping his coffee I guy was standing and looking''. at her ..He was wearing a formal grey n white suite. He knows who she is '''.stop pursing anything'..steeve told him about her yesterday 'this guy is none other than Mr. Sareen

Mr.Sareen'i.e. Anmol Sareen project head'.Sauve and stylish'.. Workaholic yes quite a bit but took things lightly was'nt too serious and saw life as a broader dimension .He was cool with what life offers not making too much of a headache for himself as his motto is life is short and things should be taken as they come and live life king size.

Day before today: Yesterday

Steeve: hey Anmol tomorrow a girl from India is joining us as ur project coordinator

Anmol: ok cool'whose she'do u think she'lll handle such a huge project from mid'..and than u know how Indian girls are no professionalism family priorities right Steeve

No no he is not like that'actually steeve thinks tht south asian girls are not career oriented are more family girls'no professionalism'

this is Anmol Sareen never ever leaves an opportunity to pull some ones leg

Steeve : stop it Anmol'.. I have been told that she isn't like that and than mr. malhotara personally recommended her'..n ya warning dnt ever ask her about her personal life ok

Anmol: ok even I dnt care but why'

Current day

Remembering all that steeve told him he was busy gazing her

Anmol to himself'.She is beautiful. Dressed neatly in formals'.her hair wrapped high in pony tail..she was meeting everyone with a faint smile'her eyes were dried'face was very pale'.dull'.her smile was visible appearing faint'..t'Man she must be what like 25-26 years'.she is beautiful'.competent, then... why her husband left her'.and why she rushed to NY..man these relationship are so not reliable

Divorced yes that's the truth 'n the reason why she bugged her officials to send her out of country. Her father was with her and he believed that she needed to relieve herself of all the bitter experience she had in her relationship and she was just not convinced with what love has to offer her and the seriousness took over her life to concentrate on her goal.

Anmol went near her to introduce himself to her

Steeve:
oh Mr. Sareen. meet Ms Sharma

Anmol: hey im Anmol ' nice to see an Indian in office

Ragini: glad to hear it

Steeve: Anmol you both are neighbors to and ur going home so plz drop her '.n help her as her car n other necessities will be arranged in two days

Ragini : no need to help '.i can mange all by myself


HELP'..a word which Ragini Sharma hates to hear for herself

Anmol was looking at her'.what an arrogant woman 'but then he likes that about her she since most women would want to take his help he being sweet with his talks to help out always..

Anmol
: I'm not really helping you '..you are new here once you got ur car and get to know the ways here '.I might be needing your help'.you can do the pick and drop to office for both of us, I'll be saving lots of dollars an my gasoline


Both smile'they left for there apartment'..during the journey there were all formal talks 'actually only Anmol was trying to talk'.but she maintains her distance

Anmol;
in my 4 years career it's the first time steeve has hired an Indian girl'.he is not found of them

Ragini: oh really than I need to prove a lot to him

Here u go this our apartment'.

Ragini enters her apartment'.sit down leaning to a pillar'.tears roll down her cheeks''.im in my new house '..all alone'.haaa'..no Ragini not now u cant just go weak now'.you need to be strong and look forward to ur life..

Anmol is about to leave when she calls...

Ragini :
Can I use your phone. I need to get a card for mine..
Anmol : Sure please use it do you want to make an international call

Ragini wondered how he came to know... she nodded, yes and punched in the international number ..

Ragini:
Papa I reached safely ... I will be fine and don;t worry I will come online and chat with you...Take care...

She hung up a tear rolled down her left eye but she quickly wiped it and returned the mobile...

Anmol : Shall I leave now...
He asked looking at her who was busy pulling her luggage in ...
Ragini : Thanks and please pull the door behind you

She says as she gets the last luggage in.



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Friends do let me know how it is..
Its a little different as I have tried to bring something which happens in our lives, patch up break up marriages divorce , a women goes through these ordeals and sometimes there is a ray of hope..

So for Ragini in this new city new country will she get a ray of hope will her seriousness go away and get her life more of convincing happiness we will see as the story progresses...

All comments , suggestions are welcome.. Its my first attempt I will update again in a day or two depending on what you have to say.

Thanks for reading๐Ÿ˜Š

The following chapters are here
Ch3

Ch4


Ch 5

Ch 6
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@bhondu..wow that was one pleasant surprise from you.. ๐Ÿ˜Š

really you already got my interest with angini new story..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

perfect intro of ragini-anmol and the way you have started the FF just superb...๐Ÿ‘

ragini in thoughts how life has changed for the better for her..love has made a way back in her life something for which she did not have any expectation.her husband anmol happenned to be the one to fill her life with happiness. and love..at present ragini-anmol happy in their married life and soon to be parents..

going down memory lane how they first met and how they were going to work together on a project...

such lovely scenes you have written and i could visualise every moment while reading the FF..๐Ÿ‘

"Remembering all that steeve told him he was busy gazing her

Anmol to himself'.She is beautiful. Dressed neatly in formals'.her hair wrapped high in pony tail..she was meeting everyone with a faint smile'her eyes were dried'face was very pale'.dull'.her smile was visible appearing faint'..t'Man she must be what like 25-26 years'.she is beautiful'.competent, then... why her husband left her'.and why she rushed to NY..man these relationship are so not reliable

Divorced yes that's the truth 'n the reason why she bugged her officials to send her out of country. Her father was with her and he believed that she needed to relieve herself of all the bitter experience she had in her relationship and she was just not convinced with what love has to offer her and the seriousness took over her life to concentrate on her goal."

so very well written about the past of ragini..a divorcee and as anmol was describing her we could feel she has been through a bad marital life...now her only goal is her career...

being neighbours and in same office how will her life change cant wait to read the next chapter and how ragini became mrs anmol sareen.....๐Ÿ˜Š

you have done a very fantastic job and you write so well ..i really loved this concept of the story on angini.so true today all these things happens in real life and as you put it there is always a ray of hope and second chances in love..

this for you for angini ff and brilliant job...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Edited by savee_k - 14 years ago
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhh..................๐Ÿ˜ƒ.๐Ÿ˜ƒ.waw..๐Ÿ˜Š what a pleasant surprise.... this is my new year gift.....๐Ÿ˜‰.(it's new year today in my country) it's wonderful bhonud...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ and a different story line..๐Ÿ˜Š very nice.. when ever i read your and savee's posts i wonder why don't you girls write a FF.....๐Ÿ˜‰

In the busiest city of Newyork a girl came out of the airport looking for taxi'..she looking so composed though she was very scared, nervous, but her papa's words were always a boost for her as it was her first time tht she is out of Agra' all alone 'she was serious , but determined..

She gets in taxi and asked the caby to take her to an office she mentioned

She entered the office an asked the receptionist for Mr.Steeve, her boss. She was hired as an project co-ordinator of a multinational company. Back at Agar she begged her officials to shift her to some place outside India. She convinced her papa to believe in her and she would be a new Ragini Sharma when she returns.. Her papa was proud of his daughter and gave her the courage...As it was a US based company and she was an extremely competent girl, they shift her to there head office at NEWYORk

you have written it beautifully..... ๐Ÿ‘ very nice bigging๐Ÿ˜Š
keep going my dear....๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ


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wow bhondu ji aap kamaal ho ..chupe rustam..very cute story lovely and interesting ...
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Wow Bhondu this is a total surprise.. You seem to be a good writer,.๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Its a fresh new story and on Anmol and Ragini..๐Ÿ‘
So basically somthing different from what was sown..
Maybe a new age working class, and more of how people in the society go through..
Ragini has a past looks like she has been divorced, and left her home to get back on her feet..
Her father seems to be quite supportive with her decsion...
Interesting and Anmol seems to be a normal guy , not the saint we saw in Bidaaiii or not saint but a human being with out flaws , here he seems to be a happy go lucky guy . Maybe Ragini would change his life dimensions
great start you gave a taste of the present and then going back to their meeting !!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Continue soon !


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@ bhondu:

Quite an Interesting piece of writing๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...the Anmol-Ragini story & the way their relationship started off has been given a new perspective in your work๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...Ragini coming from NY city & her first interaction with Anmol, Anmol's first thoughts on Ragini being beautiful๐Ÿ˜ณ..seems like a unique storyline!๐Ÿ˜Š Would sure like to know how the story moves on, so keep writing!๐Ÿ˜‰
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Originally posted by: savee_k

@bhondu..wow that was one pleasant surprise from you.. ๐Ÿ˜Š

really you already got my interest with angini new story..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

perfect intro of ragini-anmol and the way you have started the FF just superb...๐Ÿ‘

ragini in thoughts how life has changed for the better for her..love has made a way back in her life something for which she did not have any expectation.her husband anmol happenned to be the one to fill her life with happiness. and love..at present ragini-anmol happy in their married life and soon to be parents..

going down memory lane how they first met and how they were going to work together on a project...

such lovely scenes you have written and i could visualise every moment while reading the FF..๐Ÿ‘

"Remembering all that steeve told him he was busy gazing her

Anmol to himself'.She is beautiful. Dressed neatly in formals'.her hair wrapped high in pony tail..she was meeting everyone with a faint smile'her eyes were dried'face was very pale'.dull'.her smile was visible appearing faint'..t'Man she must be what like 25-26 years'.she is beautiful'.competent, then... why her husband left her'.and why she rushed to NY..man these relationship are so not reliable

Divorced yes that's the truth 'n the reason why she bugged her officials to send her out of country. Her father was with her and he believed that she needed to relieve herself of all the bitter experience she had in her relationship and she was just not convinced with what love has to offer her and the seriousness took over her life to concentrate on her goal."

so very well written about the past of ragini..a divorcee and as anmol was describing her we could feel she has been through a bad marital life...now her only goal is her career...

being neighbours and in same office how will her life change cant wait to read the next chapter and how ragini became mrs anmol sareen.....๐Ÿ˜Š

you have done a very fantastic job and you write so well ..i really loved this concept of the story on angini.so true today all these things happens in real life and as you put it there is always a ray of hope and second chances in love..

this for you for angini ff and brilliant job...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Thank You Saveeta .. I am not too good at expressing in words ..a new story so trying to make it reasonable..

I will continue soon
Thanks for all the enouragement

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: zee10

ahhhhhhhhhhhhh..................๐Ÿ˜ƒ.๐Ÿ˜ƒ.waw..๐Ÿ˜Š what a pleasant surprise.... this is my new year gift.....๐Ÿ˜‰.(it's new year today in my country) it's wonderful bhonud...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ and a different story line..๐Ÿ˜Š very nice.. when ever i read your and savee's posts i wonder why don't you girls write a FF.....๐Ÿ˜‰


In the busiest city of Newyork a girl came out of the airport looking for taxi'..she looking so composed though she was very scared, nervous, but her papa's words were always a boost for her as it was her first time tht she is out of Agra' all alone 'she was serious , but determined..

She gets in taxi and asked the caby to take her to an office she mentioned

She entered the office an asked the receptionist for Mr.Steeve, her boss. She was hired as an project co-ordinator of a multinational company. Back at Agar she begged her officials to shift her to some place outside India. She convinced her papa to believe in her and she would be a new Ragini Sharma when she returns.. Her papa was proud of his daughter and gave her the courage...As it was a US based company and she was an extremely competent girl, they shift her to there head office at NEWYORk

you have written it beautifully..... ๐Ÿ‘ very nice bigging๐Ÿ˜Š
keep going my dear....๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ


Thank You Zee I am glad you liked it
I am not so good in writing FF but visvualzing somthings and making my story
Great encouragement from you
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sami01

wow bhondu ji aap kamaal ho ..chupe rustam..very cute story lovely and interesting ...

Sammy I am not as good as you write maybe I am learing from thsi forum and friends like you.to write
Thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanti05

Wow Bhondu this is a total surprise.. You seem to be a good writer,.๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Its a fresh new story and on Anmol and Ragini..๐Ÿ‘
So basically somthing different from what was sown..
Maybe a new age working class, and more of how people in the society go through..
Ragini has a past looks like she has been divorced, and left her home to get back on her feet..
Her father seems to be quite supportive with her decsion...
Interesting and Anmol seems to be a normal guy , not the saint we saw in Bidaaiii or not saint but a human being with out flaws , here he seems to be a happy go lucky guy . Maybe Ragini would change his life dimensions
great start you gave a taste of the present and then going back to their meeting !!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Continue soon !


@shanti Thanks for all the encouragement.. I will continue soon here Anmol's character is different just made him look himself and not any resposibility .. a fresh story
Maybe something we can wish for in season two ..
Just trying my hands on creative writing

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