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Posted: 14 years ago
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CHAPTER:5

After much thought Ragini decided to go for the party .. She had to move on in her life and realize that something nice will be around for her,,,


It was Saturday 'yes its party time'.Anmol was all set to go n rock the party..he loves socializing when given a chance.. actually he hates to be alone '.n Ragini'.she didn't wanna go..she was feeling low for some reason but than

'does she was left with any other choice rather than not attending the party '.even if she does dare to say NO'she was warn '.


Anmol: mein tum ko utha k bhi lay ja sakta hoo'n u know this very well..what I say I really mean that'..I am not going without u after all you're my DATE


Ragini: DATE'ur date.. you must be kidding ... I am not coming to the party as your date just as friends otherwise I have better things to do and I informed Steeve also u know that.


Anmol: O come on Ragini See we have know each other for months now and i know I am the most good looking guy in the office (pulling his collor up) and I know the party will rock and you would also feel

nice'warna ur desire to dance with the most handsome guy in the city will never come true'just for my sake don't do that ..itna bara kadam mat uthao'I need a partner...


Ragini:'nodding her head and a half smile...Anmol you also na...


Anmol: aur nahi tu kya'I know that u don't want me to go to the party with an ziddi, arrogant'.boring .n what ..hmm'.ya aloof type girl'but than'kya kero ..dosti ke hai tu nibhana paray gi


Ragini: her mouth was open..n 'she was hell angry...mein 'An..mo..l'mein bhanji


Anmol: aur nahi tu kya'the way you have been avoiding this party and you initially shopped for a dress and now you say you don;t want to go '.ok'why to waste time..i m going ..mujhey buhat sara kam hai

party kay liyan..tum taiyar hojao..agar hosakti ho tu 'I'll catch at 8'bye ..shuts the door


Ragini: tm ko tu mein batao gi akir Ragini Sharma cheez kiya'mein boring ..ur gonna regards ur words Mr.Sareen


Anmol: opens the door again: plz I am dying to '


Door shuts but ths time by Ragini..n she locked it


Ragini: samhjtay kya hai khud ko'..he is so irritating , annoying , but sweet person.. sweetheart.so true to his words and actions.. I am truly grateful to have him in my life.. He means a lot to me .

she thinks as she about the incident which just took place.


She shuts her mouth with both of her hands realizing what she just said'.she smile and than confess'.


Ragini: hmm..he is a sweetheart'a person I trust the most'who knows me so well'.he knew that my anger always have some hidden feelings'but..Mr.Sareen'today I am gonna tell u jab Ragini taiyar hoti hai tu

kasa hosh urtay hain'


She was extremely anger'n as always this time feeling of disappointment as he felt she was a boring type of person who did'nt want to be in some good company and see the different shades of life.. So to

take up this challenge which Anmol put on her she decided to show him what she Ragini Sharma was and how she could show him that indeed she is elegant and beautiful.


She went to her wardrobe'.n know exactly what she wants to wear


Flashback: At Mall


Anmol was looking at a mannequin which had a beautiful green colored gown , He was lost looking at the beautiful golden border .He was lost in his own world when fingers clicked at him and he came back

to his senses.


Ragini: hmm ..Tho you will see your date in that outfit I guess looking at the mannequin and him'.teasingly


Anmol: Well nothing like that I believe beauty lies in the beholders eyes.. Aap jo bhi phenay achha lana chahiye.. I liked that dress on her so I was admiring, but ...


Ragini: acha'tu kya na pehany se hota hai'.she bit her lips..oops kya kah diya'mar gay


Anmol: mischievously: that I haven't experienced


Ragini: O come on.. I think all men are like that..she snubbed him...


Anmol: laughed'Ragini' I mean for looking beautiful..wearing anything is ..not my logic


Ragini: meaning


Anmol: hmm.. I dont know'but didn't find that soo attractive'just seeing the way it looked on her..but you..see..for example'sari'for me it's the most gorgeous 'classy'n 'attractive attire


Flashback end


She wore a green sari'with low back'she clipped her hairs on top'simple diamond ear rings n a pendant around her neck'she looked her self in th mirror n was her self lost'.something was new in her eyes..the

spark


Suddenly the door opened'it was him'but I locked the door'how can I forget he has keys'n he knocked on her room's door n opened it


Anmol: may I '..c-u-m-in


His last words were not audible'he dropped his jaw'.


OMG '..sari'.how can she do this man'this isn't fair 'dude tu tu paka gaya'.how an this earth can some1 look so amazing, stunning beautiful'..but'.wwwhattt'.i hate this..wohi boring hair style'he

loved when she left her hair and she looked so divine.. He couldn't stop remembering the scene at the beach the other day and suddenly came back to reality..


With a smile on his face he start moving towards her..slowly n steadily'with his gaze fixed on her'his eyes filled with all that he has somewhere in his heart'she was feeling his eyes on her 'n when she met

them'she skipped few heart beats or rather her heart was beating at full pace'her breath was increasing'.he stood in front of her'move a bit closer'.her eyes were closed'he moved his hand forward n remove the clip to make her hairs fall on her shoulders'Anmol moved back ..n his voice make her open her eyes


Anmol: perfect'u look absolutely ravishing


She blushed n whisper thanks


Her blush did'nt went unnoticed'


Anmol: Ragini..yeah ..he touchd her cheeks'why u have applied so much of red on that'.she looked at him surprisingly'he..smiled n raised his eyebrows..ohh..


Anmol Sareen'..she gave a tight slap on his shoulder n smiled


Anmol: chalein'.was abt to leave


Ragini: she stopped him by holding his hand...and he turned around sunao'.ur looking good


Anmol: he stood there'checkd himself from up to down..she was right he was looking handsome in his black formal suit..n ..now slightly blushing, Indeed he was one handsome guy when he was in a suit or a

tuxedo...


Throughout the journey both of them were quite n lost'Anmol couldn't stop thinking about her n Ragini cant stop blushing on what had happen at the apartment


At party:


Both of them enter the venue'.every1 was stunned to see a beautiful ravishing Ragini like that'they met there friends..every1 congratulate them on there work '..


Ok I know official parties don't have dance n music'.atleast mine never had..but that so unromantic'so here v go


Soon the lights were dimmed'music started'n people get there partners on dance floor


Anmol and Ragini were standing opposite to each other but on far ends'.


Anmol: should I ask her for dance'why not'no I should'nt..us din beach per than aj ghar per'I was imagining'oh God'.y I was thinking like that'tu itna confuse kab se honay laga'com on be a man'no I am

not a man.. what.. I mean 'I am not finding guts'Guts..us ko date per lay jana hai kya'its just a dance'ya it is chill dude'Daam you should be just yourself. EVer since Ragini came into your life wel not like

exactly I mean she is a partof your life.. Uff Anmol you are really lost man. He rubbed his temple..


He took a deep breath n move forward towards her


Ragini: yeah mujhey asay kyun dekh raha hai'.n why I am getting nervous'who sirf dance kay liyan tu poch raha hai'.poch kaha raha hai..he is so sweet'wasy you keep talking. now I think I know you better

than yourself.. Ok I know somthing is in your mind and you are hesitant, but Iknow you wil ask.. she kept looking at him ... and aslight smile ran across her face..


Anmol:Ragini ..dance he offered his hand out to her and she was still with a smile.


Ragini: mein '.han'per


Anmol: par kya Ragini'khabhi tu meri baat bina argument k man liya kero


She smile'n nodded her head in yes


He put his hand on her waist'.she hesitantly put one hand on his shoulder n other she gave in his tight grip'.her eyes were lower but she can feel his on her'soon she rise them up to meet his'n than cant get

out of them '.slowly they get lost in the moment'in each other'.he twirl her round'..and pull her back in his arm'her back was touching his chest'his chin on her shoulder'..he slides his hands on her waist n

griped her tightly. But softly'her hands were holding his'he turn her around..n make her face him'.her one hand was holding his shoulder from them back'..soon she shifted her head to his shoulder'he

held her firmly'.his eyes were closed'..they were feeling each other'he was feel content'peaceful'.she was feeling secure'.they were listening to there emotions kept somewhere deep in there heart'they

were enjoying the peace '.completeness.. ..the felt every time they r with each other'.



But than '.music stopped'.lights were back'.both of them immediately got out of the hug'..almost a hug'.they were looking everywhere except each other'


Anmol POV: what is going on'.why it feels so content when she is with me'y I never felt any regard in my heart for wht I have done'I just loved it ..oh Lord plz help


Ragini: POV: what is going on with me. why am I atracted to Anmol, I have had the worse time in my life.. what is this unknown drawing towards this perso what was I doing'.whats getting on me'.


Soon Steeve join them n they were relived as topic was changed'


Steeve: hey Anmol ..cum lets have some drink


Anmol: u know I don't drink'.n don't force me'.Ragini want eat something 'I am hungry


Ragini: ya'sure..lets go


The food was Mexican so was extremely spice'.Ragini wasnot used to eating spicey food but after a while being with Anmol and his company of foodlikes she slowly transformed for change better change

love spicy food'.but that day it was extra spicey Anmol warned to be careful but she put deaf ear to him'she accidentally ate some chilies and now was coughing badly..


Anmol: Ragini I told u to be careful but nahi tum ney kisi ke suni kaha hoti hai'.he was caressing her back and was shouting too


Ragini gave him a dead look'she was coughing badly n he was giving lectures'a waiter was bypassing them with some drinks '..she stoped him n drunk a class n another n another 'n she was relived


Anmol: Ragini' no'.stop'.Oh'..My'.GOD'.


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Edited by bhondu2010 - 14 years ago
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Chapter: 6


Ragini gave him a dead look'she was coughing badly n he was giving lectures'a waiter was bypassing them with some drinks '..she stoped him n drunk a class n another n another 'n she was relived


Anmol: Ragini' no'.stop'.Oh'..My'.GOD'.


Ragini: kya nahi 'ek tu yaha meri halat karab horahi hai'.and I needed to drink something to relieve my burning throat.


Anmol: halat karab tu ab hogi ma'am'.have u realize wht u were drinking'..it was hard drink..ek nahi do nahi'teen glass'.mujhy nahi pata tha tumhary asay bhi shook hain'jo doosroo ko shock day dain


Ragini: ohhh'nooo'ab kya hoga


She started feeling very uneasy and almost about to throw up


Anmol: O Daam Ragini are u feelings like throwing up ok, come with me and he takes her to the womens rest room not realizing that its womens restroom but he had to badge in with her untill she throw up excess of whatever she had drunk.. wiping her mouth with a towel he helped her out and made her sit on a chair..


Ragini: Anmol 'thanks pata nahi maney kyun pee ley pani samaj key lekin phir be'.mujhey buhat ajeeb lag raha


Anmol: relax Ragini..yaha already 80% loog'tm se bori halat mein hain'and I think some of the alcohol has gone in to your body..


Ragini looks at him with a sad face 'shaken her head in disbelieve


Anmol: acha baba relax'.hum ghar chalty hain '.u'll b fine..OK


Ragini: han ..plz'thanx


He holds her hand..n make his way out'.carefully so that nobody notice them..or question them as why they r leaving so early


By the time ..she was all out of her senses'.he make her sit in the car n than get to his own seat'


Her head is spinning but she tries to keep her self up and she rests her head on her palm and looks at Anmol..and smiles sweetly..


Anmol: yeah mujhey asay kyun dkh rahi hai'.her look makes me mad..wasy he I am getting ATTRACTED towards her'aur yeah asay keray gi tu paka I m so distracted when she is around.. Daam I cannot concentrate on the driving.. alcohol ka asar is gettng on her inspite of the throw up..


She lean her head back'and all of a sudden start signing


Look into my eyes - you will see

What you mean to me

Search your heart - search your soul

And when you find me there you'll search no more


Don't tell me it's not worth tryin' for

You can't tell me it's not worth dyin' for

You know it's true

Everything I do - I do it for you



He looked at her surprisingly


Anmol POV: Gosh this lady is full of it'surprise'but what I am more surprised is'yes she is singing this song'like is she defining my emotions or her'..what my emotions???'ya its so true everything I do 'precisely I do it for you'.her voice is beautiful'Mr.Sareen..kuch bora hai us mein'hmm nahi kuch bhi nahi'



Look into your heart - you will find

There's nothin' there to hide

Take me as I am - take my life

I would give it all - I would sacrifice


Don't tell me it's not worth fightin' for

I can't help it - there's nothin' I want more

Ya know it's true

Everything I do - I do it for you


Hmmm'I am loving this feeling 'I thinking somewhere I have started LIKING her'hm I really like her'


His thought was broken when he found someone very close to him'.looking at him 'he was scared again'of himself'but this time more of her


Ragini: near his ear : ANMOL SAREEN JI


Anmol: ahh..kya hua'chila kyun rahi hoo


Ragini: itni dair se awaz day rahin hon sunai nhi dayta kya'ganna khatam hogaya aur apney clapping bhi nahi ke'.how mean


Anmol: laughed'..this is sumthing new Ragini Sharma acting like a child'I think she is too tired after the download of alcohol and throw ups.

sorry Ragini'ok'lovely song'u sung it beter han bryan adams'suchi'


Ragini: hmm ..i know


He smile n continue his journey of '.thoughts'soon the recahd..they were in elevator'.this time Anmol was smiling n smiling 'now he feels satisfied '.satisfied with the thought that what he feels 'there is nothing wrong with it'.its sumthing more than just liking '.sumthing NEAR LOVE


Elevator stopped at there floor..Ragini fwds her hand..in thought that he'll grab it an they'll make there way out but found Mr.Sareen lost n smiling'she came close to him n shouted


ANMOL SAREEN JI


Anmol: tremble'.got straight 'composed himself'hmm.hmm ya kya hua


Ragini: with grin..pee mein ney rekhi hai..jarhi tho aap hai ..'.mujhey pata hai you are lost in some thoughts about someone may be your would e wife.. but I am here and we need to go ... kya pori raat lift mein mujhey dekh ker guzaroo gay'.ghar chalay


Oops'he realized they reach there home finally '..woh apnay ghar mein apnay ghar


She digs in her bag and pulls out her keys with much effort as she is was loosing her balance..Anmol watched her moves making sure she doesn't collapse anywhere before she gets in otherwise he would have had to carry her.

After opening she walked in slowly with Anmol making a shield around her so that she is carefully inside.

Anmol: Ragini tum rest kero mein chalta hoo..while making her sit


He was about to leave when she caught his hand


Ragini: mat jao plz'sab chalay jatay hain mjhy akeela chor k jab mujhey un ke zaroorat hoti hai'tum tu mat jao plz'


Her eyes where filled with pain n where pleading him'that's something he cant tolerate'


Anmol: ok mein yahain hoon..aur tum ko chor key khabhi nahi jao ga..tum rest kero ..u need it


Ragini: tell the time


Anmol:11:00pm ..kyun


Ragini: mujhey suna nahi hai'kuch kerna hai.. Please say back for sometime..


Anmol: shocked'.O lord what does she want to say she is so tired half sleepy I mean full sleepy'..matlab'..kya kya kerna hai


Ragini: hmmm'.baatein


Anmol: chuckled'.ok'tum rukho..i'll bring something to drink'u'll feel better


He bring sum lemonade'n settle down beside her


Ragini: You are a really nice person Anmol'.You say a lot sometimes well thats your nature and it seems good and harsh,and maybe thats the part of life , ..lekin mostly hamesha achy bacho ke tarahan behave kertay ho 'per than every1 has his life na..i know u also have..n sum day u'll find ur way'..n I'll be like''.


Anmol: smiling at her sweet talks ...ur part of my life 'how can even u just say that'he was understanding what she was conveying and getting annoyed ... how can she'just how can she even think that I have a life without her'


Ragini: tell the time


Anmol:11:15'kyun


Ragini; asay he'dekha phr bolay aap'yeahi prblm hai aapki'today I'll speak n u'll listen


Anmol: yes ma'am


Ragini: I had such a bad experience in life'.than the person the relation I trusted the most left 'the man who gave promises and married me left telling me that he had married already and this marriage was nothing.. he walked out on me...'.I felt betrayed ...nobody..N-O-B-O-D-Y'.I trusted with feelings and love...evry1 thought I was at fault 'I never tried to make him mine'how can I ..he was never mine..we lived six months together..but he was already commited to someone..for his parents sake he was forced with this marriage


Anmol: han 'was so hurted ..evry word was hurting him he so hurt n she is asking time: 11:45pm


Ragini: I got divorced'my mom died..i know she died because of me..she was a orthodox couldn't bear her daughter being divorced'so apparently I killed her



Anmol Pov:


Life is cruel'the day I was enjoying my feeling'she was enjoying herself'she is broken'.but thank God she is poring it out 'for the first time she isn't hiding or stoping her tears to fall out'it hurts 'hurts so much '.


He couldn't stop his tear nor himself..he hug her as tightly as possible'just to engulf every pain of her in himself'to assure tht he trust her more than himself


Her voice broke his thought


Ragini: tell the time


Anmol: what the hell'.why every five mins ur asking time yr


Ragini: kaha na meri marzi..batao 'Anmol: fine 11.58


Ragini: so only my dad supported me and my decsion and boosted my moral...


Looked at him its 12.00 now...he nodded in yes


Ragini: happy birthday to me( he smiled)''..congratulations n celebration we wish u a happy married life( was surprised )'.happy first wedding anniversary


He closed his eyes..n shake his head in disbelieve


Ragini: I just SO HATE THIS DaY'.my life complete ruined after this day'she throw's the glass she was holding on the floor'a broken piece hurt her hand too'


Anmol: Ragini ..tumhara hath..oh God'yeah kya kiya..he rushed to bathroom bring the first aid box'.she was staring at him


Ragini you why are you hurting yourslef. past is past .. you have moved on you know that .. Life is experiences and you have gone through a bitter one...why did you hurt yourself..who will help you when you need to grow strong.. who is...


Ragini: cause I know ur there..to relief all my pains


He look at her surprisingly .. do i have that place in her life


Anmol; Ragini thora jalay ga


Ragini chuckled ' chalay ga


He was not in a mood to joke..he was freaking out..he was so scared to put medicine on her hands just think how painful it will be..slowly n with gr8 difficulty he start putting medicine on her hands'.soothing it with his breath'she was numb...chills run through her,,,she loves his care affection' everyting abt him


Ragini: mein tum ko buhat tang kerti hoon na


Anmol: hmm buhat 'per mujhey acha lagta hai'.meri ek baat mano gi..plz'chup chap ja ker soo jao ab plz'


Ragini: ok Anmol jee she smiled as he nursed her hand...


Anmol: thats like a good lady...'.he makes her rest on bed cover her with sheet 'Good night'was abt to leave when she caught his hand


Ragini: u promised u will not leave me


Anmol: he was helpless'not because she was acting stubborn...because even his heart doesn't want her to leave in this condition..he set beside her ..she closed her eyes n in few minutes goes to sleep'he was in his thoughts'.while gently padding her head with his hand 'y a small cut on her hand gave me soo much pain..y every time she is around me I feel my heart is beating and caling out some senses towards her...who can go out of the way just to see a smile on her face'what I felt on beach'.why I felt so complete when she was in my arms..its because yes..it is..its not nearly sumthing like love'its love'.he whispered near her ears'Ms Ragini SHarma I love You'bas all I need to know is wht ever u said today..whtever I saw in ur eyes is it love or not'its time that I stop hiding n fighting with my feelings and show u how much I love you n how important you are to me , to yourself and to this world.



He again went closed to her and tucked her hands in and closed the door gently and stood against the wall next to it and said to himself. Yes I love her I love You Ragini.. Daam its a relief .. I feel so nice telling his finally to open up to myself..


He smiled to himself and the grin said it all again


Please let me know how it is . Any comments sugestions are most welcome.


Sorry for the delay in posting the next part . I was busy but I will do it as often as I can 😛



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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey bhondu (sorry i dont know your name).
Beautifull scenes dear..loved each and every scene of yours..so understanding Anmol is and so stuborn and reserverd Ragini is..
I was about to ask you for the update...
Eagerly waiting for the next update..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@bhondu.read both parts..fantastic and captivating..👏
ragini still not sure about party ...
anmol words did prick her and agreed to go to the party with him a she was his date..
a green saree and anmol bowled over ..
wat a mesmerising scene he came forward and let her hair loose..a discomfort moment for ragini as something is happenning to her to with anmol's closeness..
ragini drank and pouring her heatr's feeling to anmol..asking him to promise he wont leave her..
cute moments of them with ragini everytime asking him the time..
finaly he said it ..i love you ragini but ragini already asleep..
so beautifully written and can visualise every scene of angini..👏
keep it up and do continue soon its getting more interesting..👍🏼
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what a episoed yaar... I read last 2 parts... Wonderful bhondu.. You have written ragini's feelings very well.

Ragini: I just SO HATE
THIS DaY'.my life
complete ruined after
this day'she throw's
the glass she was
holding on the floor'a
broken piece hurt her
hand too'... Awww... It shows her pain well. A heart tuching parts dear. Continue it soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
I was waiting for you to update, thanks for the next installment. 👏Sammy's news have given new hope.😃
Okay, I loved both the parts and love your approach towards the build up of relation between Anmol-Ragini.👏⭐️😳
Edited by rekha03 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
Thanks all for your feedback! It gives me thoughts to write more stay tuned !'😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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bhondu ...i love you for such a sweet story...keep it up ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey yaar how nicely you write. O gosh i really miss angini. I just want to see apu and parul in bidaai,if not any new show...
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Wonderful scenes
The way anmol handles ragini when she has alcohol and then her pain she expresses and he tries to comfort her
This new shade of ragini is interesting
Anmol is falling in love with her and so is ragini

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