The Cavern of Secrets (AnGini OS) *Updated, Pg4 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww thank you so much for the wonderful feedback everyone. 🤗 It means so much to me.
I am swamped with work right now, but I PROMISE I will update ASAP. It will happen, LOL.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Mira!👏👏👏👏...Gr8 work with the OS yaar...sad it was so short though! So many FFs / OS on the same theme / BG...👏👏👏...Wah! humari toh lottery lag gayi!😆...each of these FF updates made for Gr8 reading..👏👏👏...do continue soon yaar!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@mira: u asked whether ragini took the right decision or not..I tell you rgaini always take the right decision..(except few😉) but I think ragini will only increase the bruden of anmolji😭( bechara..will go to save kids from tarun...but he will get a surprise .in terms of ragini..then he can hadrly concentrate on his mission😆☺️) this time tarun will get some nice peace of mind if he try to mess with ragini😎

its very interesting mira👍🏼....pls continue..we all will wait...for next part...⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi guys, here is the next part. It's really not that great, but I am hoping the next part will be better because I'll be writing it when I am less stressed out. ;) All the dialogue is in English just because it's easier that way, LOL.
Part 2
Anmol Rajvansh couldn't believe his eyes.

Sakshi, Tamanna, and Khushi were all standing behind Alekh, shivering in fear. All four of them were being held at gunpoint by the psychotic Tarun.

Anmol clenched his fists. "I could kill him with my bare hands." he thought to himself.

Suddenly, Sakshi caught his eye, and her eyes widened. Anmol quickly signaled her to keep quiet. Sakshi nodded and pulled Tamanna and Khushi towards her into a hug. They buried their faces in her sari and were oblivious to the presence of their loving father and friend. By now, Alekh had also become aware of Anmol's presence and decided to take advantage of the situation by distracting Tarun.

"So, are you really going to shoot all of us? You know I'm a Rajvansh don't you? My family will never let you get away with this." Alekh taunted.

Tarun's face turned a bright red. "Shut up. If you want to get out of here alive, you better do as I say. Toss me your cell phone."

Alekh obeyed as Anmol stealthily crept up towards Tarun.

At that moment Ragini came running into the cavern. The scene before her made her heart come up to her throat. She lost all sense of reality and perception. All she saw were her two angels facing a loaded gun. She let out a blood curdling scream, and anyone who heard it could not have forgotten it, no matter how hard they tried.

Tarun whipped around and saw a shell shocked Anmol staring at an equally shell shocked Ragini. He raised his gun aiming at Anmol's back, his movement breaking Ragini out of her spell.

"ANMOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

*BANG*

A bullet shot out of Tarun's gun and barely missed Anmol who dove out of the way and stumbled into Ragini who caught him. The bullet ended its flight path into the side of the narrow cave which caused an explosive myriad of flying rocks and rubble. The entire wall gave way as Anmol and Ragini desperately sprinted out of the way. Anmol yanked Ragini towards his chest, and pulled her to the ground, shielding her from the falling debris. After what seemed like eternity, the cave-in pulled to a close. A soaring wall of boulders had separated Anmol and Ragini from the rest of the cave ' and the outside world.

Ragini opened her eyes and found herself clinging to Anmol's shirt. "Khushi and Tamanna." She gasped. "My God, are they okay?" Suddenly, Alekh's voice cut through the silence. "RAGINI! TAMMY KE PAPA! ARE YOU THERE?"

Anmol shouted back "WE'RE FINE! BHAIYA, THE KIDS!"

"EVERYONE IS FINE. SAKSHI TOOK KHUSHI AND TAMANNA OUTSIDE. BUT TARUN GOT HIT BY A BOULDER. HE ISN'T WAKING UP."

Anmol could not muster any sympathy. "Forget about him. You need to take Sakshi and the kids straight home. Ragini and I will be fine."

Alekh was shocked. "Tammy ke Papa, we can't just leave you here!"

"Yes you can. I had called the police while I was on my way here. They will be here soon and they will get us out. Please, all of you go home."

Alekh decided there was nothing he could do for Anmol and Ragini at the moment. "Alright, but please be careful. Sakshi and I are coming back after we take Khushi and Tamanna home.

Anmol acknowledged this and listened quietly as he heard the sound of Alekh's footsteps fade away. He suddenly realized Ragini was no longer holding onto him and turned to find her crawled up in a fetal position, crying.

Anmol kneeled in front of her and took her gently by the shoulders. "Ragini? Ragini, please don't do this. Everyone is safe. Khushi and Tamanna are going home. And we will get out of here, I promise." Smiling, he lifted her chin and forced her to meet his gaze. He marveled at how her deep, dark eyes could make him feel like he was in paradise, even when being in a terrifying situation like they were in now.

Ragini's eyes continued to bear tears. "An-Anmolji, I'm sorry. I made everything worse. I couldn't even stop myself from screaming. I put all of you in danger. And I caused you pain ' like I always seem to do.

Anmol's smile faded so quickly, one could have wondered if it was ever there.

"Cause me pain? What are you talking about?" he asked in a cold manner that surprised Ragini.

Ragini lowered her eyes. "I know how agonizing these past seven years have been for you. If I had only known about the sacrifice you were making! I would have never allowed you to go through with it."

Anmol was just lost. And suffering from a severe migraine. He rubbed his throbbing temples. "Ragini, with all due respect, what the hell are you talking about?"

Now Ragini began to grow irritated. "Why is it so hard for you to admit it? I know the truth! You don't have to hide it from me anymore!"

"Damn it, Ragini, what truth?"

"I know that you love Shivani!"

-------------------------------------------------------------------- Well that's it for now. Until next time...
Edited by Tonks611 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@mira..enjoy reading this chapter.😊

so ragini blunder did had an effect .tarun down unconcious and all saved in the end..
interesting part anmol/ragini scene..anmol saving ragini and also getting the shock of his life..
in the end ragini's talks about sacrifice love the tone anmol used for ragini..
gosh she is giving him a real headache by her talks..btw love the "DAMN it" one...can visualise anmol saying this to ragini.
will wait for next part to know how anmol's reaction will be on this shivani issue..
great job and keep it up..👏👏...
Edited by savee_k - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Tonks Fantastic part Yaar & hope Angini confess their love in the Cave😉😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wah wah good twist re.......did not expect this and wow...ragini confronted anmol yeh hui na baat loved it mira thanks a ton
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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏 please continue...really enjoyed reading it :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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there is lot of excitement and anxiousness after reading the second part
please print the third part soon..waiting for ragini to shove out her feelings....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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🤣

Seriously it was fantastic , 👏

But I was in splits reading the last Bit

'poor guy is having a migraine and Ragini is telling him that he loves shivani !!😡

gawd mira I feel like shaking that ragini and Telling Daam Ragini he loves only U and U and only u
'Madly deeply and whatevrly in love only with you Ragini
Anmol only loves ragini

But seriously they should have shown tyhis and it would have been fantastic

Loves it
Please continue soon
Thats today itself or tomorrow whenever !!
Edited by shanti05 - 14 years ago

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