The Cavern of Secrets (AnGini OS) *Updated, Pg4 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow, thanks for all the great feedback guys! I'm glad that you actually like it, LOL.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow girl ! You rock..Interesting, very interesting..I can't wait for the update. & yeah, Ragini did mess up everything, lolzzz..
And oh yeah ! Damn it..Hahahaha ! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ Mira:

Gr8 update Girl!!👏👏👏👏..."I know you Love Shivani"..😆😆..LOLZ! That's all Ragini could come up with?😕...when will she see Mad Love for her in Anmol's eyes?😳😳😳...He'd die before he thought of any other woman than Ragini..😭...the poor guy even has a migraine!...can't wait to see Angini confess their Love for each other..😳😉...Do update soon yaar!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey guys!
Sorry for taking so long in updating, but life's been really busy.
Two things remain the same though: I still miss AnGini and Bidaai like crazy and I still HATE StarPlus. 😆
I hope you like this update! Please feel free to comment and add suggestions. 😃

Part 3

Anmol wasn't sure if he heard Ragini correctly. Shivani? What? The tension of seeing everyone he loved in danger was probably making him lose his mind.

"Ragini, what did you just say?"

Ragini looked as though she wanted to kill him.

"Please Anmol! How long are you going to deny it? I know that you and Shivani were involved in the past. And I know that she still loves you very much. Why are you-"

Anmol had heard enough.

"Stop it Ragini! For someone who has 20/20 vision, how can you be so blind? Have you really not noticed for the past seven years how much I have struggled with my feelings for -

"ALEKH! SAKSHI! KHUSHI! TAMANNA!"

Ragini knew that voice anywhere.

"Bhaiya! Oh God, we're in here!"

"Ragini? What on earth? What are you doing here?"

"She's with me." Anmol spoke up. "Vineet Bhaiyya, Alekh and Sakshi have gone home with the kids. I suggest you do the same. Ragini and I will be fine until the police get here."

"But happened with Tarun? I have the money he asked for."

Anmol let out a bitter laugh.

"Tarun became a victim of his own games."

Ragini spoke up.

"Bhaiyya, can you go home and tell everyone we are all right? Especially Khushi and Tamanna, I don't want them to be worried about me or Anmol."

Vineet, like Alekh, was hesitant to leave his little sister there, but he knew there was no one on the planet that could take care of Ragini more than Anmol. He put a hand to the wall of rocks that separated him from his sister.

"Anmol, please take care of my sister. I'll go and tell everyone what happened."

As soon as Vineet had departed, Ragini's mind went straight to the conversation she was having with Anmol moments ago. She almost laughed at the fact that she was stranded in a cave, and all she could think about was what Anmol was going to say to her. She turned to look at him and found him leaning against the wall, with folded arms and a very solemn expression.

Her heart skipped a beat at seeing him so intense...and so handsome. She blushed and quickly pushed those thoughts aside.

"Anmol?"

His intense gaze landed on her, and Ragini almost regretted saying anything. The expression in his eyes scared her. What was in his eyes? Anger? Fear?

Anmol walked over to her, his eyes never leaving hers.

"Ragini, I think you were right about us. We just can't be tied down to this fake marriage for the rest of our lives. After all these years of being married to you and telling you how much I love being a part of this family, you just forget all of that and believe Shivani's lies when she tells you that I still love her? Do you really think I am so fickle?"

Ragini felt her heart pounding against her chest and tears began to slide down her cheeks.

"Anmol, there is no one in this world who I respect more than you."

Anmol wanted to pound his fist into the wall. But he restrained himself, because no matter what happened, Ragini was the love of his life, and he would never do anything to frighten her. He did wish, however, that he could restrain his tongue like he could his fist.

"If you respect me, then how could you try and separate me from Tammy? You know how much she needs me and how much I need her, but I guess Shivani's words just have more weight to you than the past seven years we've shared."

More tears trickled down Ragini's face, however, this time; they were not tears of hurt but of anger.

"Can you honestly blame me for believing Shivani? How could I not? When you came into my life, I knew nothing about you. All I knew was that you were a wealthy bachelor who promised Ranvir to take his place after he died. I-I was so scared back then. I had no idea why someone like you would want anything to do with me. I was a widow with two children who depended on me, and there you were, just ready to take care of us. It seemed too good to be true, and you know what? For a long time, I thought it was too good to be true. I thought a morning would come where I would wake up and you would be nowhere to be found. And then Shivani shows up, and she's so beautiful, and sophisticated, and I can see why anyone would fall in love with her. And she tells me things about your past that I never knew, that I never bothered to ask. I really thought I was keeping you away from someone you loved and wanted to be with. I am sorry for falling into Shivani's trap, but it kills me that you think I would ever want to cause you pain. Giving you those divorce papers was the hardest thing I ever had to do in my entire life, but I did it because I thought it was what you wanted."

Ragini was now sobbing.

"When Ranvir and Sadhna died, my heart broke into a million pieces. But they left me with these two beautiful daughters who took my heart and put it back together, so that I- so that I could give it to you."

Anmol was simply stunned, but Ragini wasn't finished.

"I love you Anmol."

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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏👏👏👏👏

Firstly a big hug to you and great to see you back !!! 🤗

Aww sweety Mira it was beautiful !!!

Loved it Beautifully put!!

Finally she broke her silince and admitted her love for Anmol!!!😳
Anmol's gestures emotions fantastic!!!

Wished Ct's had given this angle to Ragini's side!!! 😔

I wrote an OS on the similar lines as Ragini's confession Do check it out!!!

Angini OS- Ragini confesses to Anmol

Nice to see you back.. please keep posting more OS..

We too miss bidaaii a lot hope to have thm back soon!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Looks like people are diving into stories of Ragini's confessions.these dayz...Welll what can i say it's been a great feast to my eyes lately....reading all the stuff which seems too good to be true
and imagine as welll....Nice one Tonks...thanks buddy
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: seared

Looks like people are diving into stories of Ragini's confessions.these dayz...Welll what can i say it's been a great feast to my eyes lately....reading all the stuff which seems too good to be true

and imagine as welll....Nice one Tonks...thanks buddy

It was your idea!!

I wrote my take and mnow Mira wrote hers...

Waiting for Rehana's she said it will blend with her Future of Angini story !!
So we have many versions of Ragini's confession !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice, i hope season 2 comes with raginis cofession.
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So beautifully written👏.Loved Ragini's confession😳

,Wish to see Angini back soon.😳 😃
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First of all, I LOVE YOU 🤗
hmm, if you are nowhere near as good as the rest of the writers, then I should just commit suicide, no?🤔 🤣🤣🤣🤣
dude! do u even know what you did to me???.....this is the first time i came across this FF and i proudly blame YOU for not showing up earlier with the update *me is shoo ishmart😎*......thanks for the english translation 🤗as I have hard time reading the hindi version 😳
"So, are you really going to shoot all of us? You know I'm a Rajvansh don't you? My family will never let you get away with this." Alekh taunted.
wow!!...that was classic😆....wud've loved to see Alekh with such dialogues😊
A bullet shot out of Tarun's gun and barely missed Anmol who dove out of the way and stumbled into Ragini who caught him. The bullet ended its flight path into the side of the narrow cave which caused an explosive myriad of flying rocks and rubble. The entire wall gave way as Anmol and Ragini desperately sprinted out of the way. Anmol yanked Ragini towards his chest, and pulled her to the ground, shielding her from the falling debris. After what seemed like eternity, the cave-in pulled to a close. A soaring wall of boulders had separated Anmol and Ragini from the rest of the cave ' and the outside world.
Wonderful! that was all visible in a clear picture 👏👏...very impressive😃
"HE ISN'T WAKING UP." and "Forget about him. "
🤣..i don't know why, but these two just killed me 🤣 i can so imagine their faces🤣
He suddenly realized Ragini was no longer holding onto him and turned to find her crawled up in a fetal position, crying.
Anmol kneeled in front of her and took her gently by the shoulders. "Ragini? Ragini, please don't do this. Everyone is safe. Khushi and Tamanna are going home. And we will get out of here, I promise." Smiling, he lifted her chin and forced her to meet his gaze. He marveled at how her deep, dark eyes could make him feel like he was in paradise, even when being in a terrifying situation like they were in now.
and I was in heaven 😍....such instances btwn Angini just kick me straight into the paradise *sigh*......
"Ragini, with all due respect, what the hell are you talking about?"
🤣omg OMG...you made my day.....i can sooo imagine his expression who looked like he just tapkaoed from the aasmaan🤣🤣.....my poor bachcha awww🤣🤣🤣
"Damn it, Ragini, what truth?"
Oh My Sweet Lord😍..... i still can't forget Apu's "damn it" from JJKN 😍....his one "damn it" is enough to damn all the girls on the earth 😍......hayee!!! choo cute and HOT *nazar utaring of my betu*
"I know that you love Shivani!"
I bet...if it was not Ragini, he would have strangled the person by now.....😆
I still HATE StarPlus. 😆
Count me in pal !😃
Ragini looked as though she wanted to kill him.
Haye! DO IT!!...I wud love to watch it 😍....I'm sure Anmol wud enjoy it 😉.....crap, I am going off the topic now 🤣....my poor brain is worn out 🤣🤣🤣....but wut can I do yaar, whenever there is a mention of Angini, it goes into malfunctioning mode☺️...
"Stop it Ragini! For someone who has 20/20 vision, how can you be so blind?
🤣🤣🤣🤣 did I say, I love you???....I lOVE THIS ANMOL...Period!! there I said it!!!
"Ragini? What on earth? What are you doing here?"
omg....this one was too good too 🤣....the expressions cud be easily visible into ur mind.....
"She's with me." Anmol spoke up.
I had a smile while reading that line....I don't know why but it just happend to make me feel so proud and secured...i can totally connect to how you are portraying the entire atmosphere there.....EXCELLENT job 👏
Anmol let out a bitter laugh.
🤣🤣 I love you 🤣🤣🤣
She turned to look at him and found him leaning against the wall, with folded arms and a very solemn expression. then .....His intense gaze landed on her, and Ragini almost regretted saying anything. The expression in his eyes scared her. What was in his eyes? Anger? Fear?
and I fainted 😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️.....ok that's IT...I HATE HATE HATE HAAATTTEEEE SP.....
"Ragini, I think you were right about us. We just can't be tied down to this fake marriage for the rest of our lives. After all these years of being married to you and telling you how much I love being a part of this family, you just forget all of that and believe Shivani's lies when she tells you that I still love her? Do you really think I am so fickle?"
👏👏 Loved every bit of it.....TOO GOOD yaar SIMPLY TOO GOOD 👏
Anmol wanted to pound his fist into the wall. But he restrained himself, because no matter what happened, Ragini was the love of his life, and he would never do anything to frighten her. He did wish, however, that he could restrain his tongue like he could his fist.
Ishhh yaarr....*SIGHHHH*..... I want THIS Anmol in B2.... MOMMMMYYYYY!!!😭
"Can you honestly blame me for believing Shivani? How could I not? When you came into my life, I knew nothing about you. All I knew was that you were a wealthy bachelor who promised Ranvir to take his place after he died. I-I was so scared back then. I had no idea why someone like you would want anything to do with me. I was a widow with two children who depended on me, and there you were, just ready to take care of us. It seemed too good to be true, and you know what? For a long time, I thought it was too good to be true. I thought a morning would come where I would wake up and you would be nowhere to be found. And then Shivani shows up, and she's so beautiful, and sophisticated, and I can see why anyone would fall in love with her. And she tells me things about your past that I never knew, that I never bothered to ask. I really thought I was keeping you away from someone you loved and wanted to be with. I am sorry for falling into Shivani's trap, but it kills me that you think I would ever want to cause you pain. Giving you those divorce papers was the hardest thing I ever had to do in my entire life, but I did it because I thought it was what you wanted."
"When Ranvir and Sadhna died, my heart broke into a million pieces. But they left me with these two beautiful daughters who took my heart and put it back together, so that I- so that I could give it to you."
"I love you Anmol."
WOW....that was out of the world.....this is exactly what CV should have done...SHAME on the CVs.....SP and CVs, kambakto, chullu bhar pani mein doob maro sabke sab 🤬.....excuse my temper but today after reading your tremendous talent I honestly feel that the CVs and SPs took the dumbest decision of their lives by ending Bidaai.....LOSERS!!!!......
you are a God gifted writer hon.....sorry, i cudn't help but write a long note on ur creativity, becoz that's how I am whenever something gets my attention to the core, I just can't stop myself from pouring out my heart abt it.....😳....LOVED IT, LOVED IT...LOVED IT....will be impatiently waiting for the next part 😃
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rehana

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