The Cavern of Secrets (AnGini OS) *Updated, Pg4

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey guys, I decided to try a hand in writing an AnGini fan fic, although I am nowhere near as good as the rest of you. 😆 It's a OS, but I'll be doing it in small parts. I'll probably take forever in updating as I have final exams coming up, so please bear with me.
Part 1

Ragini Rajvansh couldn't believe her ears. Sakshi? Sakshi had it in her to do something like this? No, Ragini told herself. Sakshi had to be stuck in some sort of a predicament. Zaroor kuch majboori thi uski. Ragini felt like sobbing, screaming, sinking into the floor and just wallowing there for eternity. However, she had to be strong, for the sake of her daughters. What was she to do? Should she have called the police? What if her brother and jija ji needed help? Suddenly, a realization struck her with such vigor that she actually had to steady herself. Anmol! His words resonated in her ears as she closed her eyes and spoke them herself. Main aapke liye kuch bhi karsakta hu. Fresh tears welled up in Ragini's eyes and threatened to fall, but she held them back and grabbed her cell phone. Her fingers shook as she dialed Anmol's number - something she had done countless times before, in happy times, sad times, uncertain times, but never in a situation quite like this. The phone hardly rang for a few seconds before a calm and suave voice answered it. Hello, Ragini? That did it. Ragini gave up controlling her emotions as she sobbed uncontrollably into the phone. She told him about everything that had transpired after he left - how the kids never returned from school and how Sakshi had called demanding ransom in exchange for their welfare. Anmol stayed silent as she spoke, and only started talking when she finished. Ragini, please sahma liye apne aap ko. Main hoon na, I won't let anything happen to our kids. Ragini struggled to get a grip of herself. Anmolji, aap kya karne wale hai? But Anmol remained elusive and simply reassured her. Ragini, bas main hoon na? I'll take care of everything. With that, he hung up the phone, and Ragini's mind was whirling with questions. Woh kya karaynge? Kya apne khud ki jaan khatara meh dalaynge Khushi aur Tamanna ko bachane ke liye? Nahi! Main yeh kabhi nahi hone doongi. Mujhe waha jana hoga! Bachon ki aur Anmolji ki mere zaroorat hai! Ragini grabbed her phone and ran outside. She hastily slipped into the car as she instructed the driver to go to the old caverns where Sakshi had told her the kids were being held.

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So what do you think? Is Ragini making a stupid decision by going there herself? 😆
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shanti05 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow Mira interesting ..
I think she did teh right decsion of going
I kinda feel i may know what this would lead but I'll keep it to myself..😆

I am waiting for the next part , may be what I have in mind may quite be similar to your thought
Donno sometimes like minds think alike 😆

Yes Ragini took the decision to go and things may just turn out her way and Anmol may be her answers when she gets to her queries !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@mira..nice start and well written...😊
ragini without anmol seems lost..any problem he is the first to come in mind..
here its about their kids and anmol will do anything for them /ragini..
woah ragini anmol ke liye itnee fikaar..loving that..😊
i think she took the right decision and kya honewala hein..a little guess...😊
very interesting and good job..enjoy reading it..👏👏
will wait for next part..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice I now ragini take rite decision to go our there because she love anmol soo much.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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mira very sweet and well written,
ragini is going to increase anmol's work it seems..tarun may capture her as well😆....
dekhte hain what have u cooked am waiting
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Anmol ko bacchey ky saat biwi ko bhi bachana hoga😆

Wow man in action I think Mira has something on those lines planned
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Fantastic Yaar .Please continue👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Fantasticcccc Mira, I just want anmol fighting for ragini. A real angry and hot anmollll is my dream. 😍 YOu are really talented.👏 Waiting for the next parttttttt.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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mira really interesting cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wohooooooo !! This sounds interesting !! Damn ! 😆

Ragini herself goes there? So like her to mess up everything. 🤣

Okies..I want you to continue. Even if takes forever, I will wait, lolzzz. 😆

But please !! Do continue..Whenever you are free, as per your convenience.

And yeah, all the best for your exams 🤗

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