29th sept written update - COMPLETE

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starts with vinu kaushi and mama ji in the pooja room praying

mama ji parys to god that all the sorrows of rajvansh family to be gone, return the peace of the family god.

they are done praying.!

kaushi goes and picks the cheque from the pooja ghar and suggests mama ji to give the money to their children. malti over hears it.!

mama ji says your are right kaushalaya ji, this money shall be given equally to our children. vinu, ragini and sadhna, kaushi isn't happy hearing this, neither is malti. vinu says ma bauji why are you talking about the money at this time, this can be discussed later. we've been really busy today, bauji you must be tired please go and rest. malti is too happy about vinu stopping the discussion.

mama ji says i'll try to sleep. mama ji leaves, vinu asks kaushi if everything is alright, i can tell by your face that nothing is okay at the rajvansh house. kaushi says yes son, nothing is right, the news is very shocking, that's why i didn't consider telling this in front of malti. vinu asks what happened? kaushi says son you iwll not believe this, you know ambika ji, she is the reason behind aalekh's madness, vinu and malti are shocked. vinu says what are you saying ma? kaushi tells vinu everything(it's on mute), malti is overhearing them.

Vinu says he doesn't belive this that ambika ji can do this, she was very polite with everyone, who can say that from the inside she was all this and that.

kaushi says you are right, when i saw this i was quite shocked myself, i just pray that nothing wrong happens in that family no more.

vinu says okay ma please go and rest, you must be really tired. kaushi says yes son, you should also go to sleep, you have work tomorrow morning. kaushi leaves.

malti is in her room really angry. vinu comes in the room.

Vinu asks malti what's the matter why hasn't she slept yet?

malti doesn't reply, vinu goes and sits next to her and asks her what's the matter, why are you sitting like this?

Malti says don't talk to me. vinu says what happened? now?

malti says i heard what maaji said to you, such a big thing happened in our family, and no one considered to tell me. i felt really bad. vinu says malti you are misunderstanding everything, ma was worried about you, that's why she didn't tell you anything. malti is worries are fine, but why didn't anyone consider telling me about the problems my sister in law's family are facing. Is this something to hide? "jooth toh main bolti nahin" but i'm also a part of this family, i have the right to know about this, now if no one would tell me anything wouldn't i feel bad? vinu says look malti, your angry on such a small thing, how many times have i told you not to get hyper. always think nice things, if you think nice, our child will be thinking nice. now it's really late, and you should be sleeping, come let's go to sleep.

Malti says i'm only thinking about our child, but you will never understand, now only i have to do something. vinu says listen tomorrow take mummy ji to the drs for your check up. and tell me are you taking your medicines on time? malti says yes. malti says i was thinking about our child, i was thinking when our child will come into our life, our life would completely change na? cinu says you are right, our life will be so beautiful, when our child will wake up during the night, then we both will have to get up and take care of him. malti says yes that's right but why would you wake up during the night? you'll be going to work in the morning, and you'll be so busy during the day, i just want to you to take complete rest when your at home. vinu says what rest? it's my child i can atleast do this much and by the way by then my sallary will also increse.

malti says can i say something? vinu says yes go ahead. cmalti says don't you think bauji worries too much about saadhna and ragini, now see the money we got, what's the need to give it to ragini and saadhna? ragini and saadhna don't lack anything, then what's the point in giving them both 70, 000 each? vinu says the money belongs to bauji, let him give it to anyone he wants to. and by the way bauji has never differentiated between us 3 brothers and sisters. i'm feeling very sleepy malti, so i'm going to sleep. Malti can you just turn of the lights please. Malti says why don't you do it yourself?

it's morning.

everyone is sitting in the hall..saadhna is taking breakfast for aalekh, vasu calls out to saadhna. she asks if aalekh is awake. saadhna says yes, i'm taking this breakfast for him, he;s in his room, CM is leaving na? i don't want him to come downstairs, because i don't want anymore problems. Vasu agrees, saadhna is about to leave but she sees CM coming. vasu turns around and notices CM standing there. sateyn also comes out. the camera zooms on ranvir's face. (looking damn cute) CM and satyen are leaving, but aalekh calls out to saadhna. everyone is worried to see aalekh coming downstairs.

Aalekh begins to breathe heavily as soon as he sees CM and is scared.

CM walks to aalekh and says you CM is leaving aalekh. Ranvir tries to stop her but ragini stops him and signals him to not to go. CM says won't you say bye to your CM? Aalekh is holding onto saadhna and doesn't say anything. CM leaves and aalekh turns around and calls out to CM. CM is smiling, everyone looks at aalekh. CM turns around. Aalekh walks up to her and says CM and he hugs her while crying. CM is smiling and looks at vasu. Ragini is standing besides saadhna. Ranvir looks at aalekh. Aalekh says CM you can't leave anywhere, are you leaving? Aalekh holds CM's hand and saysNo you love me a lot na? more than yourself? Then how can you leave your aalekh? No CM you will not go anywhere. CM says love? She moves her hand away from his. I never loved you. Aalekh is shocked. CM says you were just a pawn for me, I used you as my weapon against vasu, so she breaks down slowly. I only used you. And that why I had to fake all this, everything is a lie. I hate you! Aalekh is shocked.

Vasu shouts stop it. You have no feelings withn you at all. This child loved you the most, more than me he took you as a mother. His trust was unbreakable, and now you are trying to break his trust? How much pain will you give him? Are you satisfied? Why are you trying to give him pain when your leaving aswell? CM smiles. Vasu says you have lost everything, because there is no such thing as humanity within you.

Satyen says stop it ambika ji, aur kitna zeher uglengi aap? You have lost your place in this house. CM says I have lost nothing. What has this house given me that I have lost? CM walks to vasu and says this house has only given me was pain, insult, helplessness, suffocation and suffer. And today I'm being thrown out as an unnecessary burden. This house has given me nothing but deception; it has killed all my hopes. I curse this house. The history shall repeat itself. Just like ambika and vasu happiness were ruined due to their color difference. Ragini and saadhna will go through the same. Saadhna and ragini are shocked. The camera focuses on everyone. Ranvir and aalekh are upset. Satyen drags ambika along. CM says this house will suffer and vasu you'll never live in peace. Your mad son will always remain mad. Everyone will be ruined. Aalekh remembers what CM said and gets an attack he falls on the floor. everyone is shocked and rush to aalekh. ranvir says we have to take him to the hospital.

And it ends on aalekh.

Preview: aalekh being rushed to a ward.

Edited by s.sanj90 - 15 years ago

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KinSanj thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i'll do the rest in a bit...
gotta go somewhere!!!
please have patience
KinSanj thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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the update is up guys!
i apologise for any mistakes
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanx for the update..take your time..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks for the update but wat if CMs words cum true...?i really dnt want sadhna n ragini to suffer...
n hope alekh gets normal now...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks for the wonderful update
I dont understand how alekh is going to react after this attack
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Posted: 15 years ago
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so we can guess what will happen now right? Alekh miraculously becomes normal because of the second shock. Very filmi.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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^^ let's just wait and watch..we can't say anything...his condition can get worse so u never know!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks will alekh go in a coma

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