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I will try and post it soon.😊 The next chapter is a work in progress. With my earlier chapters I had 6 parts done before I posted the first part. But this last chapter I only started writing after I posted 10. So that is why it is taking me forever.
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I will try and post it soon.😊 The next chapter is a work in progress. With my earlier chapters I had 6 parts done before I posted the first part. But this last chapter I only started writing after I posted 10. So that is why it is taking me forever.

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Okay guys here is the next chapter. I apologize that it has taken me so long to update. What can I say writer's block. As usual please let me know what you think, good or bad.

Part 11

It had been a week since Santoshi left the house and Dhairya was back to his old self. He had also began drinking a lot, and Kaka and Kaki were very worried about him. Meanwhile Madhu was happy that Santoshi was finally out of the house and that she wouldn't get her hands on the Mishra property. She thinks to go see Kraanti Maa and tell her the good news. She is about to leave for the ashram when Dhairya sees her and says "Maabhi, where are you going?" Madhu who gets startled says "Oh I am just going to meet my friend Upasana." She then puts on her fake caring routine and says "Dhairya meri bachi, why don't you go meet some friends." "Take your mind off Santoshi." Upon hearing Santoshi's name Dhairya angrily says "Maabhi, please do not say her name in this house." Madhu says "Okay, I am sorry." "I will be back soon." As Madhu leaves, she smiles thinking "Good, Dhairya is still angry at Santoshi." Dhairya thinks "I can't stay at home." "Maybe I should go for a drive." As he is about to leave he sees that Madhu left her phone and thinks to catch up to her. He goes outside and sees her car driving away and thinks to follow her. As he is driving, he says to himself "Why is Maabhi heading in this direction?" "Upasana auntie's house is the other way." He thinks "Maybe Maabhi had some other errands to do first." He keeps driving until they reach Kraati Maa's ashram. Dhairya looks confused and says "Kraanti Maa ki ashram?" "Why did Maabhi tell me she was meeting Upasana auntie, if she was coming to see Kraanti Maa?" He sees Madhu going inside the ashram and gets out of his car and decides to follow her. He heads inside the ashram towards Kraanti Maa's quarters when one of Kraanti Maa's men says "Kraanti Maa is in a meeting, you can't go in there." Dhairya says "My bhabhi went in there and she forgot her phone, so I just want to give it to her." He says "I am sorry you can't go in there." Dhairya says "It will just take a minute." The man says "Listen, she cannot be disturbed." Dhairya realizes the man would not budge and says "Okay I will leave." As he is leaving he looks back to see the man watching him suspiciously and thinks to himself "Something weird is going on here." When the man turns around Dhairya quickly hides behind a tree, and sneaks back up to Kraanti Maa's quarters, this time managing to avoid being seen by anyone. Dhairya is about to knock when he hears Madhu's voice. The door is slightly open making it easy to hear. Madhu says "Kraanti Maa, thank you so much for your help." Dhairya thinks "What is Maabhi taking about?" Madhu says "It is because of you I was able to get Santoshi out of the house." Upon hearing Santoshi's name Dhairya's ears perk up. Madhu narrates everything she did to make Dhairya suspect Santoshi and the drama that happened at Santoshi's birthday. Dhairya hears everything and storms in to the room shocking both Madhu and Kraanti Maa. Madhu stands up and says "Dhairya what are you doing here?" Dhairya angrily says "You forgot your phone so I came to bring it to you." "But here you are talking about how you plotted to get my wife out of the house." Hearing Dhairya angry Madhu says "Listen Dhairya..." Before Madhu could speak further Dhairya yells "Bas Maabhi, I don't want to hear your lies." "I heard everything." "Every sick detail of your twisted plan." He looks at Madhu with anger and says "It was a big mistake to start trusting you again." "No, you know what I can't even blame you entirely for this." "I was stupid to believe that Santoshi would cheat on me." "She is too good to hurt anyone like this." "But you, all you do is hurt people." "You are so selfish." He then sheds a tear and says "You called me your son and I thought of you not as my bhabhi, but as a mother." "But no mother would do this to their child." "Maybe that is why God didn't give you any children." Madhu looks a little hurt by that comment as Dhairya continues on. He says "You kept making me doubt Santoshi's love and I hurt her in the worst possible way." Dhairya wipes his tears and says "Santoshi!" "I have to find Santoshi." "I hope she will forgive me." Madhu grabs Dhairya's hand and says "Listen to me" but Dhairya pulls his hand away and yells "Don't touch me!" "You are dead to me." "I hate you!" Dhairya leaves thinking he needs to go find Santoshi. Madhu realizes she has lost Dhairya for good this time and says "It is all because of that naukrani, this is happening." She tells Kraanti Maa to send her goons to kidnap Santoshi.

Since leaving the Mishra house, Santoshi had been staying in a hotel courtesy of Kiran. She didn't want to go to her house yet and tell her family what happened. (Her family left before the confrontation at the birthday party) Kiran had come to visit her at the hotel to say goodbye as we was going to leave back to London the next day. "Santoshi, are you sure you don't want me to stay?" "I am worried about you." Santoshi says "Kiran, I am a big girl, I will be fine." "I just need some time." He smiles at her and says "You know you don't have to always put on a brave face." "That to for you best friend." Santoshi smiles a little and says "I am sorry, old habits." Kiran says "Well I am glad I could make you smile a little bit." Santoshi then says "Kiran, thanks for putting me up in a hotel, I am not sure how I can repay you." Kiran sighs and says "Santoshi, you are my best friend you don't need to thank me, neither do you have to pay me back." "In fact, if anything, you should be upset with me." Santoshi looks at him confused and says "What do you mean?" Kiran says "It is because of me, that Dhairya kicked you out of the house." Santoshi says "This is not your fault." She looks on sadly and says "Dhairya did not trust me or our love, and thought I cheated on him." She then looks deep in thought and Kiran says "What are you thinking?" She says "I was just thinking, who do you think is responsible for sending those photos to Dhairya that made him think we were having an affair?" Kiran says "I am not sure." "Is there anyone in your life who would stand to gain from you and Dhairya breaking up?" Santoshi was trying to think who would do such a thing, when the hotel phone rings. She answers the phone, it is the front desk saying she received a package. She hangs up and says "Kiran I will be right back, the front desk said I have a package." Kiran nods as Santoshi heads downstairs. After a few minutes Kiran thinks "Wait!" "No one knows Santoshi is here." "Who would be sending her a package?" He gets worried and thinks to go down to the front desk. He is about to get in the elevator when he sees that it is not working and starts to head down the stairs. Meanwhile Santoshi goes to the front desk and asks for the package. The front desk lady says "Ma'am, there is no package for you here." Santoshi says "I just got a call from the front desk saying to come collect a package." The lady says "Sorry ma'am I am not sure who called you, but it was not me." Santoshi looks on confused and walks back to the elevators. As she is waiting she gets a call on her cell phone. She answers it and it is Kiran who is all out of breath. Kiran says "Santoshi, are you okay?" Santoshi says "Yes, I am fine." "Why wouldn't I be?" "Why are you so out of breath?" He says "Stay where you are I am coming down." Santoshi is confused and is about to ask Kiran why he is so worried, when a pair of hands go over her mouth and she drops her phone. Kiran who is on the other line says "Santoshi, Santoshi, SANTOSHI." Hearing muffled screams he gets really worried. He finally makes it to the bottom of the stairs only to see Santoshi being taken away by two men. He screams "SANTOSHI!" and runs behind the goons, but is too late as they are driving away.

Meanwhile Dhairya is at home and pacing back and forth thinking where could Santoshi have gone. He tried calling her phone repeatedly but got no answer. He also tried calling Bitto to see if Santoshi was there but she wasn't. He then thought to call Kiran as he might know where Santoshi would be. He goes to grab his phone when it starts to rings. He sees Kiran's name and says "Hello Kiran, I was just going to call you." Before Dhairya could speak further Kiran frantically says "Dhairya, Santoshi..." Dhairya says "What about Santoshi?" "Is she okay?" Dhairya by now had become panicked and listened to Kiran narrate the whole story. At the end Dhairya says "Kya?" "God, this is all my fault." Kiran says "Who would do this? "And why?" Dhairya angrily replies "My Maabhi did all this." Kiran says "Kya?" Dhairya goes on to tell him it was Maabhi who created misunderstandings between him and Santoshi and it was her who sent those doctored pictures. He concludes by saying "She wanted me and Santoshi to split up so Santoshi would not get a hold of the Mishra property." "She did this for money." Kiran listens in shock. Dhairya says "I am really sorry I accused you and Santoshi of having an affair." Kiran says "It is okay." "Maybe I would have come to the same conclusion if I were you." Then Dhairya says "How do we find Santoshi?" Kiran says "I have called the police, they should be at your house soon." "In fact, why don't I come to the house and I can help." Dhairya says "That is a good idea." "I will see you soon." Dhairya goes downstairs and Kaka and Kaki see him tensed and ask what happened. Dhairya tells them the whole story. Kaka and Kaki are shocked that Madhu would do such a thing and that Santoshi has been kidnapped. Just then Kiran and the police enter the house and Dhairya says "Inspector, do you have any leads?" The Inspector says "We have officers searching for your wife." "Also Kiran told us that your Bhaabhi has done all this." Dhairya replies "Yes!" "I want my bhabhi arrested." Pratap comes home and looks at Dhairya confusingly and says "Dhairya, why would you want Madhu arrested?" Dhairya says "Since your wife is the one who is responsible for kicking Santoshi out of this house and having her kidnapped." Pratap looks on in shock that Madhu could do such a thing. Dhairya goes on to say "I also think that Kraanti Maa is involved in this." "I have no proof, but I believe my bhabhi did this with her help." The Inspectors says "Kraanti Maa?" "Dhairya says "Haan, she is a very dangerous woman." The Inspector says "We have been tracking some suspicious activity from her ashram, so we are not surprised." Just then Dhairya gets a call from an unknown number. He answers it. There is a man on the other end who says "Is this Dhairya Mishra?" Dhairya replies "Yes." The goon says "We have your wife." In the background we hear Santoshi screaming. Dhairya makes a fist with his hand and says "If you lay one hand on my wife, I will kill you." The goon laughs and says "I will be making the threats here Mr. Mishra." The goon says "I want you to bring me 10 crores in exchange for your wife." "Oh, and no cops. "You must come alone." "If you come with anyone, we will kill your wife." Dhairya says "No, no I will come alone." "Just, please don't hurt my wife." "Tell me where I should bring the money?" The goon tells him about an abandoned warehouse across town and tells him to be there in the next hour. Dhairya hangs up the phone and the Inspector says "What did they say?" Dhairya says "They have Santoshi, and they want me to bring them 10 crores in exchange for her." Kiran says "Okay, let's get the money and I will come with you." Dhairya says "No, they want me to come alone." "They said if anyone else comes they will kill Santoshi." The Inspector says "We will put a tracking device in your car and then our men will be able to reach the location." Dhairya sees Pratap trying to call Madhu. Pratap still shocked that Madhu would do such a thing, calls her and says "Come on Madhu pick up." But he just keeps getting the message "The device you are trying to reach is currently switched off." Dhairya goes to Pratap and says "Bhai, I know you don't want to believe that Maabhi did this but right now we need to focus on bringing Santoshi back home." "Please arrange for the bank to have 10 crores ready for me." Pratap looks at Dhairya and nods his head and calls the bank. Dhairya goes to the bank and then heads towards the warehouse. He gets a phone call from the goons who tell him that they have changed the location. Dhairya thinks "Good thing the police put a tracker in my car." He drives to the new location and says to himself "Santoshi I am coming." "Please be safe, please be alive." "Please Santoshi Maa, protect my Santoshi."
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Great Update dear 👏 ⭐️.Liked every part of it. 😃.Dhairya found out Maabhi's truth.Now Dhairya know Santoshi wasnt cheating him but it was all a plan of his wicked Maabhi & Kranti Maa (my fav 😆 thanks for bringing her here).Dhairya is right he was fool to trust Maabhi again & biggest fool to think Santoshi was cheating him.Dhakkan Dhairya 😡.Santoshi & Kiran part is also nice.Kiran is such a good friend 😊.Madhu desrves Dhairya's hatered.Wicked Madhu made Santoshi kidnapped. 😡.Sairya are still apart 😭.Hope Dhairya & Kiran finds Santoshi with the help of police.I am feeling bad for Pratap.Poor devoted hushband Pratap couldnt believe his Madhu did this 😆.I liked it when Dhairya said "Santoshi I am coming" & prayed to Santoshi Maa to keep his Santoshi safe & protect Santoshi 😃.I hope this Madhu & Kranti Maa both get the punishment.Thank you dear for wonderful update.Eagerly waiting for the next update.
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Originally posted by: SymphonyStar

Great Update dear 👏 ⭐️.Liked every part of it. 😃.Dhairya found out Maabhi's truth.Now Dhairya know Santoshi wasnt cheating him but it was all a plan of his wicked Maabhi & Kranti Maa (my fav 😆 thanks for bringing her here).Dhairya is right he was fool to trust Maabhi again & biggest fool to think Santoshi was cheating him.Dhakkan Dhairya 😡.Santoshi & Kiran part is also nice.Kiran is such a good friend 😊.Madhu desrves Dhairya's hatered.Wicked Madhu made Santoshi kidnapped. 😡.Sairya are still apart 😭.Hope Dhairya & Kiran finds Santoshi with the help of police.I am feeling bad for Pratap.Poor devoted hushband Pratap couldnt believe his Madhu did this 😆.I liked it when Dhairya said "Santoshi I am coming" & prayed to Santoshi Maa to keep his Santoshi safe & protect Santoshi 😃.I hope this Madhu & Kranti Maa both get the punishment.Thank you dear for wonderful update.Eagerly waiting for the next update.



Glad you liked it.😊 I knew that you would appreciate that I included Kraanti Maa in this chapter.😉 She had disappeared, but since she is Maabhi's partner in crime I had to bring her back.😆 Dhairya is hamesha a fool. Much like on the show.👎🏼 I didn't want to make Kiran the bad guy just so Dhairya could be the good guy. I wanted him to just be the best friend.😊 Madhu has sure done some hateful things so for sure she is going to get Dhairya's wrath. Especially now that she has had Santoshi kidnapped. Yes, poor Pratap.😭 Bechari didn't even see it coming.😆 He is such a good man (well in my story) and Madhu broke his heart.😆 I am glad you liked Dhairya's line at the end where her says he is coming and prays to Santoshi Maa to keep Santoshi safe. I too liked that line very much. I didn't just want him to get in the car and drive. I wanted to show his love and worry for Santoshi and I guess that is what came out.😃
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Okay here is part 12. I know it has been awhile since I have updated. It has been difficult to write these last few chapters. Anyways hope you enjoy. Please do comment.

Part 12

Dhairya pulls up to the warehouse and shuts his car off. As he sits there he notices that it is very dark and eerily silent with no sign of anyone around. He feels nervous and thinks to himself "God Santoshi must be so scared." "If anything has happened to her I swear I will never forgive myself." He opens the car door and heads inside with the briefcase full of money. When he walks into the warehouse he notices that it is poorly lit, and that he can barely see anything. As we walks further in, he hears voices and sees some light and decides to walk in that direction hoping to find Santoshi. He walks a bit further when he spots Santoshi tied up to a chair with tape over her mouth looking very scared. Shocked at seeing her in that state he drops the briefcase and yells "Santoshi!" She sees him and looks relieved that he has come. But before he can go over to her one of the goons holds him and says "Not so fast Mr. Mishra." Dhairya struggles to get out of his grasp when the goon asks "Did you come alone?" Dhairya says "Yes, I came alone like you instructed." The goon says to one of the other guys "Go check if anyone has followed him." Once the guy leaves the goon says "Did you bring the money?" Dhairya says "It is in the briefcase over there." He nods towards where the goon had grabbed him and says "I brought you your money, now let go of my wife." The goon laughs and says "Did you think we were going to leave your wife, and you, so easily?" Dhairya looks confused and realizes he was set up. He steps on the goons foot, and elbows him in the stomach and tries to run towards Santoshi but another goon punches him in the face while Santoshi screams despite the tape on her mouth. The two goons then come and tie Dhairya up across from where Santoshi is sitting and tape his mouth shut as well. They start counting the money when one of the goons comes back and says "Mr. Mishra was telling the truth, he came alone." The goon says "Good, then there should be no problems." The goon then comes over and says "You know Mr. Mishra, your wife is very beautiful, don't you think?" He goes over to Santoshi and traces his finger down her face. Santoshi moves her face away while Dhairya looks at the goon like he wants to kill him and tries to wiggle out of his chair. The man continues to make advances on Santoshi while Dhairya screams inaudiably, due to the tape over his mouth, and tries to break free while Santoshi cries. The man is about to pull her pallu off when his phone rings. He thinks "You got saved today." He answers the phone. The other voice says "I want you to kill Santoshi." The goon says "What about Mr. Mishra?" The voice on the other end says "I want you kill Santoshi in front of him and then dump him on the outskirts." "I will come to collect the money after you have messaged me that Santoshi is dead." The goon hangs up the phone and pulls out a gun. Both Santoshi and Dhairya look scared. He then walks towards Dhairya and Santoshi cries. He says "Don't worry Mr. Mishra I am not going to kill you." He takes the tape off his mouth and says "Do you have any last words you want to say to your wife" Dhairya looks at the goon in shock as he walks towards Santoshi and puts a gun to her head. Dhairya screams "I swear if you touch one hair on Santoshi, I will kill you." The goon laughs and says "That is going to be difficult with you tied to that chair." Dhairya starts to cry as he looks towards Santoshi who has her eyes closed with tears streaming down her face. He sees that she is scared and says "Santoshi, look at me." Santoshi opens her eyes and looks at Dhairya. Dhairya says "I love you." "Nothing is going to happen to you." "Do you understand?" "Santoshi Maa, is with you." "We will get out of this, okay." The goon says "Okay that is enough." The goon is about to pull the trigger when a bullet hits his arm knocking the gun from his hand. The police come and start fighting with the goons. Kiran comes and unties Santoshi and a distraught Santoshi hugs him. He says "I am here, your safe." She nods her head and motions towards Dhairya. Kiran then goes towards Dhairya and unties him. Santoshi runs towards Dhairya and they hug. He then tells Santoshi to stay safe as he goes to help Kiran who is fighting off one of the goons. Santoshi nods as Dhairya runs off. He grabs the goon from behind and punches him. Kiran then sees another goon coming behind Dhairya with a gun and shouts "Dhairya!" before pushing him out of the way and getting shot in the chest. Santoshi yells "Kiran!" and runs towards him. She sees that Kiran is loosing a lot of blood and is slipping in and out of consciousness and tells Dhairya to call an ambulance while she stays with Kiran. The police arrest all the goons and take them away. The inspector comes and says "Mr. Mishra, we still need to catch your Bhabhi." Dhairya says "I over heard the goon talking to someone." "I think that it was my Bhabhi." "I couldn't make out what she was telling him." Then like that the goon's phone beeps indicating a message has come. Dhairya picks it up and starts reading the message. It says "Have you killed Santoshi yet?" "I want to collect the money." Dhairya responds back saying "Santoshi is dead, and the money can be picked up now." "I also sent one of my goons to dump Mr. Mishra on the outskirts like you instructed." Dhairya then says to the inspector "I have a plan to trap my Bhabhi." (just wanted to point out that the ambulance takes Kiran to the hospital by the time Dhairya sends the message on the goons phone and Madhu arrives.)

Madhu comes towards the warehouse and thinks "Finally I will get my money and Santoshi will be out of my life." Madhu walks inside the warehouse and sees Santoshi's body lying on the floor. She says finally "Santoshi met her fate." Then Madhu hears clapping. Dhairya comes out of hiding. Madhu is shocked. She says "Dhairya, what are you doing here?" Dhairya says "I should be asking you the same thing Maabhi." Dhairya says tearily "You had Santoshi kidnapped and killed?" "That is how much you hated her?" Madhu says "That naukrani took you away from me." "She was going to take our family's money away." "Besides you can't prove that I had her killed." "Just like you can't prove that I am the one who had Santoshi kidnapped with the help of Kraanti Maa's goons." Dhairya says "So this is all your plan?" "The kidnapping, the ransom, killing Santoshi?" "You did this all for money?" Madhu says "Haan, yeh sab mera plan tha." "Finally today I have gotten rid of that naukrani and I am going to get my money too" Dhairya smiles and Madhu says "Why are you smiling Dhairya?" "Santoshi just died." Santoshi gets up from the floor and Madhu is shocked and says "Santoshi your alive?" The police come out from hiding and arrest Madhu. Dhairya says "Your not the only one who knows how to do planning." "Yeh sab mera plan tha to catch you in the act." Madhu says "There is no proof I did any of this." "I am innocent." The inspector says "We have your confession on tape ma'am." Madhu cries and pleads with the officers, but they ignore her. As they are about to take her away Madhu sees Pratap and says "Pratap do something." "This is a mistake." Pratap says "I heard everything Madhu." Madhu realizes everything was over. Pratap then says "Madhu why did you do this?" "Was my love not enough for you?" "Did I not provide you with enough." Madhu says "Pratap I loved you, but I loved money more and that naukrani was going to take that away from us." Pratap looks devastated and says "Inspector, take her away." Madhu looks down as the police officiers take her away. Dhairya witnesses the exchange between Pratap and Madhu and tells Santoshi "I will be right back." Santoshi nods as Dhairya goes to Pratap and says "Bhaiya, I am sorry that Bhabi did this to you." Pratap says "No Dhairya, don't apologize to me, I should apologize to you and Santoshi for all that Madhu did to you two." "I knew Madhu was somewhat greedy but I never thought she was capable of wanting to kill someone." Dhairya reassures Pratap and says "Bhaiya none of us knew the extent Maabhi would go to for money." "Don't blame yourself." He hugs Pratap. Santoshi smiles witnessing the two brothers embrace when she starts to feel a bit dizzy. Dhairya then goes towards Santoshi and gives her a big hug and kisses her on the forehead. He says "Thank God nothing happen to you." "I don't think I would have been able to live with myself if something happened to you." Santoshi looks up at him and smiles. Dhairya says "Come let me take you to the hospital to see Kiran and we can also get you checked out as well." Santoshi nods her head. They start heading out of the warehouse hand in hand when Santoshi lets go of Dhairya's hand as she begins to feel dizzy again and Dhairya says "Santoshi what's wrong?" Before Santoshi can answer she faints in Dhairya's arms as he yells "Santoshi!"

Edited by oceanus85 - 9 years ago
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Great Update Oci. 👏 Dhairya reached the place where Santoshi was.Santoshi looks relieved seeing her hushband her love Dhairya 😊.I liked all the dialogs even that goons' 😆.Goons also tied Dhairya.He was tied up to the chair across from Santoshi.I liked this scene 😊.Greedy wicked Madhu 😡.Santoshi got so scared & Dhairya super scared at the thought of loosing his Santoshi. 😭 Thank God Kiran & the police came at the right time & saved Santoshi & Dhairya but poor Kiran took the bullet on his body that was meant for Dhairya anways thanks Kiran for saving our Dhairya sir 😆.Madhu became fool & confessed her crime.I feel bad for Pratap.What wil happen to him? Santoshi faints at the end 😲 Why do I feel Santoshi is pregnant? 😉.For Kiran ⭐️.Your imagination is superb Oci 👏.Thanks for the update dear.Eagerly waiting for the next update.Is there still any chances of Sairya honeymoon trip to Maldives? 😳
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Originally posted by: SymphonyStar

Great Update Oci. 👏 Dhairya reached the place where Santoshi was.Santoshi looks relieved seeing her hushband her love Dhairya 😊.I liked all the dialogs even that goons' 😆.Goons also tied Dhairya.He was tied up to the chair across from Santoshi.I liked this scene 😊.Greedy wicked Madhu 😡.Santoshi got so scared & Dhairya super scared at the thought of loosing his Santoshi. 😭 Thank God Kiran & the police came at the right time & saved Santoshi & Dhairya but poor Kiran took the bullet on his body that was meant for Dhairya anways thanks Kiran for saving our Dhairya sir 😆.Madhu became fool & confessed her crime.I feel bad for Pratap.What wil happen to him? Santoshi faints at the end 😲 Why do I feel Santoshi is pregnant? 😉.For Kiran ⭐️.Your imagination is superb Oci 👏.Thanks for the update dear.Eagerly waiting for the next update.Is there still any chances of Sairya honeymoon trip to Maldives? 😳



I am glad you liked the goons dialogue.😆 Kiran for sure is the star for taking a bullet for Dhairya.⭐️ Yes I to felt bad for Pratap when I was writing that part.😔 You will have to see what happens to him. As for Santoshi being pregnant, you will have to wait and see if that is true as well. I haven't actually written the next chapter. Well I wrote like a paragraph, so not sure what is actually going to happen. It also might be awhile before I update. I usually write a rough draft and keep making changes and editations until I am pleased with what I have written.
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