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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
>>>>>>>>>>>next>>>>>>>>>>>>
Abhay finishes work and drives to Rudr's place. he walks to the front door and Bhabhi is there with her tray. She nods and smiles nervously and asks him to come in. Gauri was alking past and stopped in shock. RR was drinking her eleventh cup of tea and nearly choked. Ratnesh stood and stared.
"Namste and howdy everyone. My name is Abhay. Abhay Rai Bahadur."
RR decided to say something, " We know who you are. What do you want?"
Bhabhi looks shocked and whispers to RR, "Maji! we must show our guest some respect....please...for your son Rudr's sake....😭"
Abhay feels bad, " It's ok. I just wanted to give you all a wedding invite from my hand."
Bhabhi cries some more.....😭
Just then Rudr comes down the stairs. He sees Abhay. Abhay sees him. Their eyes meet. There's an eye-lock!
Gauri quickly goes to Rudr's side and thinks of something calm to say.
"Rudr, remember how much fun we had frying puris in the middle of the night ?"
But the eye lock continued.
to be continued....next time guys....thanks for reading..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
😡 ur more mean than sangini CVs...😡😡😡

decide to leave us with sucha a huge cliffhanger????😡😡😡

fine.. okay.. i'm leaving... will go finish up on my own book - "losin it".. n head to bed.. i dont want dark circles either....😳


😆, jokes apart.. FF is brilliant... thanks Anu-ji.. u made my whole week... loved every single chap...🤗

Edited by Additi_sjfan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
anu .eyelock scene between RUDR and ABay?😲.do'nt scare me yaar.another jodi?
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Paru...

anu .eyelock scene between RUDR and ABay?😲.do'nt scare me yaar.another jodi?



Dostana 2 😆😆😆.. n pihu can be the middle lady😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
awww...
anu u knw what its my first ever FF.. may be because u said in the start its mini one hehe but i enjoyed every bit of it...
starting from bhabi's tray to the eye lock (paru n SJ 😳... no NO a big no to pihu for being middle girl.. 😳) it was so entertaining...
i shud quit making AG FC n make one for u .. awesum writing skills yaraa. (ops waqas will kill me 😆) just kidding !
Bestest was the chapter # hmmm sorry u vr not mentioning numbers it was conversation between anu n priyamvada.. It was soo pihuISH...
i got my pihu dosage ..
Big thanx to you 😊 n
😛 to sangini cvs....
Edited by Praise... - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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So r we getting any anu-ji's sangini dosage today???😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
Amazing.I can not control my laughter.

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