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Originally posted by: chowanisha

dis was good

specially the condom one!!!!hahahhaha

wat they they faced...

and then the waiter ...face wash se dhoya...hahahahah loved it

Originally posted by: EmShivam20

Ressunress Hayye kya likha hai tum dono n dil gardan gardan ho gayab...!!!! waiter vala Scene Simply loved it well itz a masterpiece ... Perfectly perfect ...!! ... N bygod Ur wordpower ... Mujh Bhi daaan mai dedo kuch words ... Bhoot n keya ... u guyz nailed it Dedication part Shy ...R u serious??? *Laughing hard* leg pulling *Evil looks* agar Dubara Meri legs ko Touch bhi karne ki kosis ki na to i will ... uh know rest n thanxx For Itna bade vala Jhuth

Originally posted by: -foreverhers-

Hayye kya comment dia hai tune... Humara dil bhi garden garden ho gaya...
Masterpiece... Itni taarif... Baat kya hai ovu? Aap hum par itne meherbaan??🤣 Kahin daal mein kuch kaal toh nahi? 🤣
Aye ovu agar tujhe daan mein de dia toh fir humare paas kya rahega? Babaji ka thullu??? 🤣
Dedication mein jo bhi likha hai that's cent percent true, believe us or not.
Tere leg ko kon touch karega?? Hum toh kabhi bhi nahi karenge... Hmm... Teri ear zaroor pull karenge🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: angel_anisha

Res! :*:*:*

Unrez 🤣

Eee 🤣 Yeh OS- 🤣 🤣 Bhooot?? ^_^ I have read thislike 10 times already bhoot 🤣 pata nhai tujhe? 🤣 🤣

Its awesome- 🤣 aur kya kahoon 🤣 You know na 🤣 There was a time when i used to give those long comments- but now i have become very lazy 🤣 So deal with it 🤣

AND- that random gravity check- was a joke i used to crack 🤣 🤣

Dedicate ni karte toh bhi padhti moi 🤣

Well done both of u :*

Originally posted by: anjipankaj

This OS should get a round of applause yaar.Absolutely in love with this os.

This os is just perfect .A perfect os of Romance fight and Comedy.

Condom part was just hilarious.😆😆

Uff their fights was supercute..

Bechara waiter .Randhir ne uski kaphi acchi band bajayi

and a very big hug for making up my bad day into a good day by wrting this os.Thanks you so much sweta and Keya.Muahh

Originally posted by: anu_anya

lovely beautiful os
thany for scrap
keep writing :))

Originally posted by: baishali1234

All I can say is...AWESOME!!!! Yaar too good!!!! I laughed my ass off in the events...the best one-

'Tumhare bacche ki maa'

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Randhir, who was busy sipping his coffee, sputtered the coffee on the waiter's face as the words hit his thick skull quite hard. The waiter felt utterly humiliated, and cursed his damned luck. The couple was getting on his nerves. "Sir, iss bar toh maine face wash se munh dhoya tha fir kyun?"

Hahahahahaha it was awesome!!!! Loved it! Then the ending couldn't get any sweeter...awesome! Pura mood light kar diya after this horrible ongoing track...thanks for the PM!!!

Baishali

Originally posted by: AzureLicht

This is utter brilliance! You've captured both - Sanyukta & Randhir - perfectly! As a reader, I couldn't have been more engaged while reading this and as a writer (or so I like to think), I love the way you've described the scenarios, the simplicity and elegance with which you've put forth their respective thoughts. Plus, brownie points for the amazing concept!
Amazing work, you two! ❤️

Originally posted by: Sagl

Brilliant os ...it ws so engaging ..i could nt take off my eyes frm it even fr a sedond ..d way u executed everything ...from portraying emotions to a flow of writing all ws brilliant ...luvd it to d core