First FF on Dheera Written by xPalkix and Ninag - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi im new here. I have read all the parts of u r story. Its amazing. Waiting for update
update soon
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Meera was suddenly awoken by raised voices. She opened her eyes to see Shravan punching Dharam. Dharam didn't flinch. "You murdered my mum". I knew you'd kill her one day. I hate you, you bas***d". Vidya held Shravans wrist as he raised it to strike Dharam again. Dharam stood shocked and speechless. Meera lept up out of the bed. "Vidya" she cried and ran into her sisters arms. Shravan turned to Meera. "This is all because of you, you s**t. My mother would be alive If he hadn't married you". Vidya turned to Shravan "calm down Shravan. I believe Dharamji and Meera di". Something in their demenour, in the way dharam had broken the news to them made her believe everything Dharam had said". Shravanji - come with me. I know you are devastated. Maaji was a special lady but the situation pushed her over the edge". "Can't you see they are lying?" Shravan cried. They planned all this so they could get my mum out of the way and carry on their dirty relationship. Shravan fell into vidyas arms. "Take me to mums old house. I need to see where it happened". With that he stormed out of the door. Vidya turned to Meera and Dharam. He had placed his arm defensively around Meera. "Are you both ok"? She enquired? Dharam replied "yes we are fine. Please go after Shravan and comfort him he needs you now". Vidya gave a small smile and left the room.

Later that evening Dharam and Meera returned to the Suryavanshi mansion. Gaura was already aware of what had happened to Durga as Shravan had told her how much he hated Meera and Dharam. Gaura ran to Meera and her son and hugged them both. "May Ambe ma always keep you both safe". Gaura was delighted to have her bahu home and although sad for Shravan she didn't really care Durga had died. That mahoose woman had been inauspicious and had brought her son nothing but misery.

After eating dinner Dharam and Meera retired to their room. Both were exhausted. Out of habit Meera started to arrange her bed on the floor. Dharam came up behind her and gave her a huge bear hug. "Eh pagal ladki what are you doing"????? He asked her? He kissed her neck gently. With that he took her hand and led her to his bed. They both lay down and after a few tender kisses and soothing words they fell into a deep sleep lying in each other's arms.



Edited by ninag - 9 years ago
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That night Shravan lay in bed with vidya. She was already sound asleep but he couldn't. "I bet he's screwing that bitch right now" he thought. He felt physically sick and as if his heart was broken with the death of his sweet gentle mother. At around 5am he tiptoed down to his fathers drinks cabinet and helpedhimself to some whisky. Then he drank some more and was completely drunk by the time the family came down to breakfast. "Shravan"? Dharam gently touched his sons forearm. "Don't touch me. I hate you". Shravan pushed Dharam. Dharam stood up straight. "Bus. Bahout hogaya" Dharam ran upstairs with everyone watching him and came down with a small locked metal box. He unlocked it and removed some documents. "Sit down Shravan". He gesticulated towards the sofa. "You sit too Meera". Gaura realised what Dharam was about to do and tried to stop him. "Please dikra don't tell him. It will break him". Dharam ignored her. Without speaking he handed Shravan a certificate of adoption. On it was written that dharam had taken Shravan as his own son. "I don't understand". Shravan had suddenly sobered up. Dharam gently explained about the history between him and Durga. Why he had resented her so much. He told his son he was sorry to have kept it from him but he never wanted Shravan to feel he wasn't his true father. He had loved him from his heart as a little baby and taught him to walk, talk, read and count with all the love a father could give. Shravan thought back to his happy childhood. How much he had loved and worshiped his dad. He had felt he could do no wrong. But now...Shravan was so confused. Then he remembered his mother was dead. He stood up. Ripped up the certificate and threw it in Dharams face. "Your no father of mine" he snarled. Then he went upstairs to pack his cases.
Edited by ninag - 9 years ago
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Meera stood up and ran to hug Dharam whist Gaura and Vidya stared open mouthed. "Oh son what have you done"? "He needed to know the truth" Dharam spoke. His voice heavy with emotion. Vidya ran after Shravan. "Go after him". Gaura commanded Dharam. "No the only person who can calm him is Vidya". Meera stood against her husband shocked and unable to move, her head buried in his chest. He had one strong arm wrapped around her waist. "Come upstairs Meera. I need to talk to you". He led Meera upstairs by her hand. In their room he sat next to her on their bed and started to explain how he had felt all those years married to Durga. How they had never had any relationship. How he was sorry about his treatment towards Durga but he would never hurt Meera. He loved her from his heart. Meera also confessed her love towards her husband. How she thought he didn't want her and that's why she left. "Thank god it's all cleared now. I love you so much". Meera smiled at Dharam. Their eyes locked. Dharam stroked Meeras soft cheek. Her skin felt like velvet. Meera felt her husbands powerful arms pull her towards him. She fell into him. Inhaling his aftershave. Her heart beat wildly as they kissed passionately. One thing lead to another and they were now bound completely as husband and wife.
Edited by ninag - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome updates...
so shravan is not dharam's blood...
shravan blames dheera for his mom's death & hates them both...
vidya trying to console shravan...
now shravan wil leave d house...
gaura dint like durga she hated her... but she dint even feel sorry that durga is dead.. hw cruel can this woman be...
felt bad for shravan..
within a day he became orphan...😭
continue soon..

Edited by coolhi1988 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks coolhi! I have a great idea! Will write start of next week. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update. You are amazing. Waiting for next chapter. Update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess2791

Amazing update. You are amazing. Waiting for next chapter. Update soon.



Lol thanks 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ninag

Thanks coolhi! I have a great idea! Will write start of next week. 😃

okk dear..
u r welcum
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Posted: 9 years ago
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shravan who doesnt know durga's true colour blames Dharam 4 killing Durga.But meera believes them.Liked dharam asking vidya 2 console shravan.Dharam didnt let Meera lie down.He placed her on bed.Dheera kissed passionately.Last scene was so romantic n passionate.They consummated.Will Dheera have diwali 2gether?
Edited by jasminerahul - 9 years ago

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