First FF on Dheera Written by xPalkix and Ninag - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
only dheera ff is available on the forum now

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

i must thnk u jasmine...
yes i use to read sns ffs..
i sumtimes visit this forum as this forum is very dear to me...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

only dheera ff is available on the forum now

yeah i know..
& its sad to see this..
but cvs hv ruined all other char & pairs chemistry... so cant help...
i dint watch dheera dance yet...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

yeah i know..
& its sad to see this..
but cvs hv ruined all other char & pairs chemistry... so cant help...
i dint watch dheera dance yet...

omg you need to watch 1st Nov episode...you will fall in love with them!!! Watch it on saathnibhanasathiya.com
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ninag

omg you need to watch 1st Nov episode...you will fall in love with them!!! Watch it on saathnibhanasathiya.com


yeah sure dear
wil watch it soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Durga was standing between Meera and the door to make certain she could escape once Meera had died. Suddenly whoosh. Durga threw a lit match stick onto the petrol and the room burst into flames. Durga did not notice the bottom of her sari had petrol splashed on it catching fire as she stared manically at Meera the flames seperating them.

Outside Dharam noticed the flames coming from upstairs and sprinted towards the house. He could hear meeras screams "someone help me, oh god help" then silence...the front door had been left unlocked and he dashed up the stairs...

Durga realised her clothes were burning and threw herself to the ground rolling around trying to put the flames out. However she managed to cover herself in more fuel making the fire spread up her body slowly engulfing her until she stopped moving. Meera couldn't breathe. The heat and smoke were so intense she couldn't even see what had happened to Durga. She couldn't even leap from the window as the window was locked. Suddenly Dharam burst into the room as Meera unable to breathe and choking sunk to the ground. She was certain her death was near. She wished she could see Dharam one more time. Suddenly Dharam burst through the smoke and flames. His kurtha caught fire but he deftly ripped it off. With a clean swoop lifted Meera into his arms and using his body as a shield to protect her he burst through the smoke and flames. Outside he collapsed onto the cool grass with Meera in his arms. Both lay there barely conscious until Meera began coughing and spluttering. Slowly as she came too the horror of what had just happend engulfed her. She started trembling in shock then looked up at her husband who's chest she was lying on.

Although it was pitch dark the flames of the fire lit up the night sky. The heat was intense and both were drenched in sweat. Meera stared at her husbands handsome face. He was blackened with soot. Meera sat bolt upright and shook Dharam. Dharam failed to respond. she panicked. She placed her head on his chest and listened for his heart beat. Boom boom. His heart was beating away loudly. Just then Dharam started to cough and came back to consciousness. "Meera"? he said weekly not realising she was sat beside him. "Meera" he repeated with a panic in his voice. His eyes sprung open. The first thing he saw was his wife's face. Thank god. Both grabbed each other and held on tightly. "I'm never letting you go again" Dharam muttered his voice cracking. "I'm not going anywhere" Meera soothed him. Tears fell from her eyes. She broke the hug to look at him. "Durga?" she whispered. "She's dead". Dharam replied flatly. "She tried to kill you I can't believe it". Dharam winced in pain. Meera noticed Dharams chest had been burned. "Let's get out of here". You need to be in hospital". She helped Dharam up suddenly he felt the pain of his burns and winced. Meera looked around and noticed an old bucket full of rainwater. She ripped her sari, drenched the cloth and placed it on her husbands chest. As they walked away 'BOOM' the whole house was engulfed in flames and it had started to crash down.

Although both were weak with smoke inhailation and dehydration they managed to stagger to Dharams car. Dharam insisted on driving and Meera was to weak to argue. As they drove slowly away Meera could still see the orange flames lighting up the night sky behind the trees. She felt pity for the unfortunate woman who had suffered such a violent death.
Edited by ninag - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
awesome update ninag...
dharam cums to meera's rescue as he sees fire burning in d house...
finally saves meera & gets himself hurt during d process...
durga meeting a violent death... as they say if u dig d grave u wil fall in it.. same happened to durga..
continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
dharam reached on time n meera escaped.shocking that durga died.she dug her own hole.want 2 know shravan's reaction to it.waiting 4 dheera romance 2 start
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks. Will write more on Friday.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dharam and Meera had to stay in hospital overnight. Dharam to have his burns treated and Meera for smoke inhailation. However neither was seriously hurt. Dharam pondered how he was going to break the news about Durga to Sharavan. He was probably already frantic about Durga since she hadn't returned home last night.

There was a timid knock at the door, then two big brown eyes peaked around the door, Dharam could tell they were happy to see him but also anxious. Suddenly Meera ran into the room and flung herself into Dharams arms. "Ouch" he winced. But still he managed to embrace her and it felt so good. Meera remembered he was hurt and let him go. Her face was still close to his and she stared into his eyes. It felt like time stood still and they held the gaze silently. Then she lent in and kissed his forehead. Dharam felt like he would burst. This was her acknowledgement that she loved him, they she accepted him as her husband. That she didn't want or need any other man in her life. Of course he had done her wrong in the past but he had redeemed himself by becoming her best friend and by risking his life to save hers. She was tempted to kiss his smiling lips but at that moment the doctor walked in. "Great timing" Dharam and Meera muttered in synchronisation. Then looking at each other they burst into laughter.

After the doctor had done his checks and left, Meera turned to Dharam. "What are we going to tell Shravan about Durga?" He shuddered as she spoke that name. I will have to tell him the truth, to his face" Dharam said gently. Perhaps if you call Vidya she could come with him. But please tell them not to utter a word to mother yet. I don't want her to know yet. She will just worry about me. Meera used Dharams mobile to call vidhya. "Dee?" Meera spoke with her voice cracking. "It's me" "where are you Dee?" Vidhya asked..."I've been worried sick about you". "Dee stop asking so many questions. Just bring Shravan with you to st Francis hospital. Room 47". I am here now and Dharamji is with me". With that Meera hung up. After the call had ended Meera lay back on the bed exhausted. She quickly fell asleep lying on Dharams arm. He developed pins and needles in that arm but didn't move it at all.

Dharam lay awake. He thought about Durga and felt sad about the fact he never gave her the kind of love she craved. The only happiness she had known was with his brother for the few short months of their marrage. He had resented her for ending his childhood so suddenly. He quickly had to become a responsible husband and father at the age of 15. He had to leave the school he loved so much and was flourishing in to support his family. He had built up his business and was now very rich but in his personal life he had remains unfulfilled and unhappy. Slowly this resentment turned to bitterness until he turned his anger on Durga. It was strange but with Durgas death Dharam was now free to love. Meera was the perfect one for him. He didn't want a servant as his wife. He wanted someone with fire and a free spirit. Someone who matched him and stood up to him and battled him. Yes he could respect a wife like that. His thiki mirchi. His Meera.
Edited by ninag - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
meera hugged n kissed dharam.b4 liplock they got interrupted.OMG!It was a surprise.Hope Shravan Vidya will be able to face Durga's shock.hopefully dheera romance will blossom .waiting 4 their confession

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