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kavya

@Kavya.S

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#251

wow that was too good

very well written u2...loved it

the gift scene was so beautiful...

loved the update shilpa and swasthi

Edited by sks21 - 13 years ago

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-Eris-

@-Eris-

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#252

Very nice gal s:-) now i hope you will redeem rashi :p :-) :-) wanna know wat koki will say after she comes to know about kinjal being a part of ruining her dikra s marriage. Thanks for the pm. Update soon

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taniks

@taniks

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#253

Oh wow that was incredibly beautiful , the story was so beautifully told , it was a gentle ,sweet yet intensely passionate love story . Awww ahem did it so well the dealing of those two witches and anita all the while so careful a very vunerable gopi . That scene was handled with such great skill of the storyteller cos 3 different emotions were displayed in that one scene , anger to the point of threatening ,regret and understanding and intense love and patience and all of it was done perfectly. That type of gift I wud never ever have suggested for gopi , but it was so perfect to ease her into a relationship of intimacy with her husband. I couldn't have ask for better way to convey his commitment to her . I have to say the scene wud him leaning against the counter looking at her , I could actually picture it in my mind , beautiful description made that possible . Congrats shilpa and swasthi on an incredible and amazin g chapter , really a piece to stick to the memory . Thank you.

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Aish3003

@Aish3003

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#254

Wow... The scenes were beautiful... Really well written. Ahem is so adorable. Please keep writing...

The payal scene was too too too good!!

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#255

great update

both rashi and kinjal r shameless

even after being caught they have no remorse for what they have done to gopi

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@Arnisha

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#256

nyce jus loved every bit of this Anita being postive and excepting tht ahem has moved on n ahem standing up 4 gopi n having a go and rashi n kinjal nyce ending.. well dne to bth of u..

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Xarina

@Xarina

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#257

Shilpa. Swasthi. I am howling at the moment. That was just too beautiful and so romantic. Loved the kitchen scene and Ahem's words to Gopi that there are no limits to what happens in the sanctuary of their own room. Brilliant, brilliant update. /sniff, sniff, blows nose and smiles.😊.

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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#258

I was off IF for a few days and you gurls have three fabulous updates, each better than the one before..

I just love the entire OS, the focus on GoHem is all that we need now. Ahem claiming what is his and warning trouble makers off is the right approach.

I so long to see this on SNS and until that happens I am so happy to have fab such superfab writer friends. ⭐️

Thank you ladies for making the time for this brilliant piece of work..👏👏👏

Looking forward to more, as usual...😳

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-neela-

@-neela-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#259

I've had a busy weekend but I managed to read the last two updates twice 😳, they were beautifully written (it doesn't matter if they are sad or happy updates but anything to do with Ahem and Gopi is a stress reliever for me and especially when it is written by two fantastic writers 😉).

Bless Gopi, she always has to bare the brunt of everything, but now her 'Knight in Shining Armour' (well... suit & tie or kurta, whichever one you prefer 😆) has finally come to her rescue. Understandably Gopi will take a bit of time to open her heart fully to Ahem but the payal scene just made me ☺️. And to top if off, Gopi finally got a hug from her Ahemji. This is the first of many steps for Ahem and I look forward to see what else he has in store to prove to Gopi his love.

Kinjal and Rashi have finally been caught. I am looking forward to see what will happen to Urmilla - how will she react once she knows Ahem knows all, how will Ahem blast her, or will it be Kokila who gets to blast her? Oooh, so many questions, I can't wait to finding out 😛.

I am going to stop now otherwise I will end up writing an essay!

Looking forward to the next update. Thank You once againfor bringing smiles to our faces 🤗