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JJ15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#261

Swasthi/Shilpa,

Another wonderful update. Gopi hugged him back!👏 All these months, we were waiting to see Ahemji hug her back, but now its the opposite. I love how Ahem is taking clever baby steps. He locked the door ! thats a start lol.

I wonder what Jigar is going to do. Is he going to join ahem and sort things out?

I am surprised that rashi and kinjal became one. Well they are on their own and now everyone is keeping an eye on them two. So gohem safe.

Thank you ladies, you are doing a wonderful job!

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shruthi2010

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Posted: 13 years ago

#262

i m having tears in my eyes
sniff, sniff
tears of happiness
this is such a lovely update.
kinjal i give up on her. dont know how come she is koki's daughter
rashi is worse.
loved the way anita moved out.
i love the way the story is moving.

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Nihira-fan

@Nihira-fan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#263

Wowww...that was wonderful!!loved the way you showed ahem's love for gopi...was very romantic!thanks swasthi and shilpa for such a beautiful SS...really hats off to your creativity!!

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kukundna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#264

👍🏼 it was good

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indu_shah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#265

OMG it is totally taking my breath away..with so much suspense in each part ...loved it...swasthi and shilpa u r queens of words magic..and love the way u bring things together very close to the show...i loved the way ahem stands to himself and takes charge of things..good that anita understood and left..now gopi is also convinced abt the truthness of ahem;s feelings to her..great!!! awesome fantabulous SS...thank you so much for the wonderful feast!!!

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_Precious_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#266

Finally got chance to read the last 2 parts. Awesome, and both of you did a great job. Through the entry of Anita, Ahem confessed his love to Gopi, all the misunderstandings of Gopi and Ahem were cleared, kalakaries of Rashi were exposed to Jigar and Kinjal also was exposed. Also it gave a good closure to Ahem-Anita past,by showing a positive change in Anita. Really liked the payal part, Ahem's own first gift to Gopi. All in all, loved to the core. Thanks so much to Shilpa and Swasthi for this wonderful story.