OS -A tale of Hope - Part II (Page 4)

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ZaaraBB

@ZaaraBB

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Maaan...why does everyone stop at the climax part...uggghhh...It was really good...i wanted to read more...but...uhhh...i loved it...beautifully written...update soon

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kavya

@Kavya.S

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

that was awesome harini👍🏼...i loved it

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indu_shah

@indu_shah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 fantastic cant say anything more..the words seem to fall short..my dream scene 😍 of ahemji holding her locked in between his hands on the wall, she pinned to the wall... 😍how much i wanted this scene to be part of any OS , SS or FF harini u made my dream come true...since the day i watched the scene of ahem scolding her for opening the door for his mother in their early days of marriage...i wanted a similar scene 😍 but here ahemji is in complete love with her.. 😍 u made my dream come true..this is for u...🤗 lovely SS it is...👏

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shruti aggarwal

@shruts18

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

OMG Harini that was just too good. Ahem confessing and not in more words but few! His expressions and thoughts are just too good.

You picturised him in an apt way, getting impatient and angry and frustrated at things not under his control. I so want him to bear the pain and guilt Harini.

Thanks for the treat Harini.😃

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Vinder90

@Vinder90

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Absolutely perfect:: I so much wish the real SNS CVs were half as clever and thoughtful as you, honestly sometimes i wonder, we have tenfold times better writers and imaginatives here, and what the hell are teh original SNS team made of, dumb fellas

if they really read this, they should learn from this, this is work of art, so awesome, that words dont describe it::

Cum on SNS CVs, incraese your talent , and get more creative,

This OS was extremely good, tooo good, absolutely loved it