OS -A tale of Hope - Part II (Page 4)

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shruthi2010

@shruthi2010

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

that was wonderful.
the cvs get paid. and their duty is to bring out beautiful stories.
but they end with a crappy track.
why oh why cant they just take a page out of our os.

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aamshula87

@aamshula87

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Thanx.that was cool.but i hoped d 2nd day wen if screamed of e dream,then gopi came near 2 him.she asked ahemji aap teek hona.then suddenly he hugs her tightly n says i thot i hav lost u,i cant liv without u .au that she says me too.then she realises she already hav lost her hopes n she comes from his hold n say raat bahut hogaya hey aapko kal office jaana hey.n she is abt 2 turn then he saw tears in her eyes.he asks y tears n she says nothin.

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aamshula87

@aamshula87

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Thanx.that was cool.but i hoped d 2nd day wen he screamed of d dream,then gopi came near 2 him.she asked ahemji aap teek hona.then suddenly he hugs her tightly n says i thot i hav lost u,i cant liv without u .at that she says me too.then she realises she already hav lost her hopes n she comes from his hold n say raat bahut hogaya hey aapko kal office jaana hey.n she is abt 2 turn then he saw tears in her eyes.he asks y tears n she says nothin.

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Dhabu89

@Dhabu89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

A little note for your footnote. You could not get this right? I think this is perfect. I am in awe of your writing. Harini, this is another chapter in you SS that is captivating and inviting and nail biting. I did all three by the way. Nail polish tastes yuck 😕

Anyways, Harini I loved this part and I am already looking forward to the next part of your SS. Thank you so much for this. I could live the whole weekend on this part alone.

I loved how Ahem was racking his brain wondering what happened that day of Holi. And how he was hell bent on making Gopi smile on way or another. I loved this Ahem. He is just like our Ahem...

👏 Another fantabulous update and another perfect mysterious ending...waiting for the next part already 😃

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Munni

@munnihyderabad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Aww Harini...🤗 that super duper Fantastic👏⭐️

- thank you ... you made my dream confession👏 Ahem confessing in anger⭐️

- harini this part is written more intelligently - u know what i mean... the process of elimination, the timings, the ruling out of things... that was awesome👏👏

yes it has to be this way... he has to get to a conclusion as which words of his triggered this loss of smile on her face, and he got to know it...something holi afternoon and night...very intelligent Ahem Modi and Harini👏⭐️

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navyab

@navyab

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Harini...lovely part & when ever we think we did not get the OS or the feelings correctly are the ones which actually turn out so well 😉 !!!

Poor Ahemji, the question still remains 😛 !!!

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Another fabulous installment Harini. I can just see Gopi's despair and Ahem's desperation to remember and if things going the way they are we might just get to see it escalate to this point.

Well you have restored my hope, I was feeling like Gopi for a minute today. Had high hopes for today, but we went back to two minutes, so I shouldn't have, but next week will be better I am sure.

Thanks for this wonderful update Harini.