OS Relationships (Part 2 Updated pg 5) - Page 2

I am really amazed with ur writting skills u bring out one's feelings so well with words u use and with the way u use them its just BRILLIANT , i am becoming a fan of ur writting really 😃.Jigars confrontation to GoHem was beautiful, his feeling put out clearly in front of them and ur words reflect Ahem inner turmoil so well of the new feeling evolving within him for gopi and the obligations towards his mother it indeed is emotionally challenging and the last bit of ur OS was OMG i have no words to describe it, it was just soo beautiful,soo Magical.this would be the best scene ever btw Gohem if they do show something like this in sns.

Originally posted by: Xarina

Tangem. You have echoed my thoughts exactly. So good to see Ahem let rip at his mum. Well done.

Originally posted by: Naina2127

Thank god Aham lashed out at his mom, telling her to stop interfering, stop worrying about everything and let her kids live their own lives.

Awesome story...looking forward to the next part!

Naina

Originally posted by: NazmaJ

I love this!!!

Ahem letting loose and taking out his frustrations at his mum's behaviour, not just what she's doing now but what she has done in the past too!!!

I can't wait to read more!!!!

Originally posted by: swasthi

This was brilliant writing. Absolutely awesome!!

Ahem was portrayed with immense courage and strength to argue back to his mum. He has learnt how to chip away through the training he had through the years growing up under Koki's direction.

He received just what he wanted when he returned to his room - his Gopi!

Looking forward to the next update.