OS Relationships (Part 2 Updated pg 5)

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navyab

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

enjoyed the part...pls continue !!!

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sweety

@sweetsugar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Another beautiful part , and i am loving it evn more , i like the way ur progressing with Gohem ,Kokila's behaviour is justified as well afterall which mother would want her child to speak to her in this manner, it wil ofcourse hurt her but obviously Ahem is feeling bad as well and kokila's behaviour isnt helping and now he has to go away from her leaving her in this sad state , he is not going to rest in peace uthil his mother behaves normally

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Justlikethat1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Brilliant Tangam.. It was fantastic.. 👏 So will Gopi help bride the gap between Ahem and Kokila? Awaiting the next update to find out..

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varshu27

@varshu27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

terrific os tangam...i absolutely love ur writing...it grips a person right at the begining ...loving how all the emotions are playing out...cant wait for ur next update...

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-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Lovely update!😛

Aww poor Kokila,i feel bad for her

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Loved part 2 tangem. Loved the whole tikka scene reminding Ahem what he did in the past.

I keep thinking,with Koki's recent behavior, about her previous conversation with Ahem when Kinjal insulted her. She told Ahem to make a way for himself so she doesn't get blamed for forcing him. If Ahem ever blows up at her, this is exactly how Koki will react.

Looking forward to continuation.

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Jammona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

you tabbed each emotion well and lovely story please update

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CravingKhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Naina2127
He felt like pre menopausal women

Cracked up when I read that [ =))] But anywho, awesome second part. Poor Kokila, now I actually feel kind of bad for her. Hope to see everything all settled soon, and Jigar forgiving Rashi as well :)

Awesome second part Tangam! Looking forward to the next part!

Cheers!
Naina

my attempt at descriing his hot and cold mood swings!!!!! if he is pre then koki must be post. Thank your for your feed back Naina should be back soon with something