OS Relationships (Part 2 Updated pg 5)

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CravingKhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: sks21
wow that was brilliant dear...
everyone is engrossed in their own thoughts...u have written it so perfectly...loved it
hope everything will be alright soon...
cant wait for the next update...

Thank You Kavya...will update soon

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CravingKhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Xarina
Great second part, tangs. I am really enjoying your writing. Keep going. X xx

tangs is that my new nickname kinda like it...glad u like it...in the process of sorting thru Koki's mind a difficult task

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CravingKhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan
loved the os

Thank You. I am doing this as a series and should be back with more

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swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Tangam this OS is taking excellent shape.

So many home truths returning for Ahem. Gopi working out really hard what is causing the rift in the Modi household.

Looking forward to the next update.

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CravingKhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: sweetsugar
Another beautiful part , and i am loving it evn more , i like the way ur progressing with Gohem ,Kokila's behaviour is justified as well afterall which mother would want her child to speak to her in this manner, it wil ofcourse hurt her but obviously Ahem is feeling bad as well and kokila's behaviour isnt helping and now he has to go away from her leaving her in this sad state , he is not going to rest in peace uthil his mother behaves normally

Thank You saba and sorry for the pm glich I am new to the forum and am on a learning curve and you got be the unfortunate guinea pig...

anyways I'm glad you like and Koki is a complex charactor writing her story takes energy!!!!!

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CravingKhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Justlikethat1
Brilliant Tangam.. It was fantastic.. 👏 So will Gopi help bride the gap between Ahem and Kokila? Awaiting the next update to find out..

Thanx Harini...at this point am not sure gopi has many of her own bridges to cross...the next update is a mystery to me as well at this point but will try and keep the momentum

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CravingKhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: varshu27
terrific os tangam...i absolutely love ur writing...it grips a person right at the begining ...loving how all the emotions are playing out...cant wait for ur next update...

Thanx much Varshu u are really good for my ego...

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CravingKhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: CHIKA784
Lovely update!😛

Aww poor Kokila,i feel bad for her

Thank You Chika

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CravingKhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: sbp1971
Loved part 2 tangem. Loved the whole tikka scene reminding Ahem what he did in the past.

I keep thinking,with Koki's recent behavior, about her previous conversation with Ahem when Kinjal insulted her. She told Ahem to make a way for himself so she doesn't get blamed for forcing him. If Ahem ever blows up at her, this is exactly how Koki will react.

Looking forward to continuation.

Thank You Shilpa

I really do hope the show has some continuity, they spent so much time showing her rejection in family rituals and festivities t would be a nice touching change to see him participate whole heartedly...since his dinouncements were so public I should think the moving on even if subtle should be clear...