OS Relationships (Part 2 Updated pg 5)

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CravingKhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: CHIKA784
That was absolutely brilliant to read!😃

I loved it,i hope this happens,i would so watch SNS than😆 (Not that i already don't😉)

Aww poor Raashi,that was so sad!,and Kokila -______________-

Atleast Ahem finally snapped! 😉

Loved it<333

Thank you Chika, Heres hoping... and I think it will may not be this way but this is the story of how Gopi and Raashi and their resp spouces learn to be Saathiya's despite thier charactor flaws. I think this will extent to Koki's broken marriage as well.

Ahem snapping bound to happen now that he does not have Gopi to bark at.

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CravingKhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: varshu27
brilliantly written tangam...great to see ahem finally tell koki what is what...and the last scene with gopi and ahem...just awesome...

Thank you Varshu

Appreciate all of the support you give to my writing

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CravingKhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: aNsHu_tEjPaL
loved the ending!!! it was soo emotional!!! i really hope u continue!!!! amazing writing...ahem and koki's conversation was like a dream come true but the last scene took my breath away!!!! loved it!!!!

Thnx Anshu

Glad you liked it...hope to continue soon pl come back and let me know if you like how the story proceeds

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CravingKhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Justlikethat1
Fantastic tangam.. It mirrors what is happening in the serial right now.. Love it 👏 Cannot wait for the update

Thank You Harini. Will update soon

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CravingKhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Priyakna
reserved... wow I loved the part gopi comforting ahem <3

Thank You Priyanka

There will be more of that comforting mutually as the relationship grows

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CravingKhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: SNS_fan101
lovely OS! continue soon

Thank You will do

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CravingKhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: sks21
wow that was brilliant tangam...loved it
finally ahem answered back to his mom...
cant wait to read the rest continue soon

Thanx Kavya

Will put another update soon, do give me your verdict on that.

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CravingKhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Sandy914
Just simply superb..!!! sensual and Emotional :)

Thank You Much Appreciated Sandy

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CravingKhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: sweetsugar
I am really amazed with ur writting skills u bring out one's feelings so well with words u use and with the way u use them its just BRILLIANT , i am becoming a fan of ur writting really 😃.Jigars confrontation to GoHem was beautiful, his feeling put out clearly in front of them and ur words reflect Ahem inner turmoil so well of the new feeling evolving within him for gopi and the obligations towards his mother it indeed is emotionally challenging and the last bit of ur OS was OMG i have no words to describe it, it was just soo beautiful,soo Magical.this would be the best scene ever btw Gohem if they do show something like this in sns.

Thank You so very much Saba, Your words touch me. I am so pleased that you were moved by the story and even more humbled by your words and your thoughtfulness to note them down. Thank You