SS: To Belong Part *Note on page 70* - Page 37

no words to describe how amazed i am with ur story and writing skill. thanks so much for the update, shilpa ben..it's simply amazing

Originally posted by: CHIKA784

Reserved!😃

Yay the first one again,its becoming an excellent habit😆

That was a lovely update,thank god for Ahemji sorting out Kinjal gavar😡 and explaining his feelings to Gopi,finally she can understand..atleast i hope so😊 The hospital scene was absolutely heart-warming and emotional,it was perfect and i loved it..❤️.

The VM was brilliant,i've never heard the son before,it was touching and lovely,reflected the update perfectly!

Please update soon😛

Thank you so much Chika. I can't wait to see Ahemji blasting his sister in this manners when he finds out her Klalkari, why are the CVs making us wait so long?
I really thought I screwed up his explanations, but I guess not.😆

The song for the VM is from Tum Mile...

P.S. Thanks for the early congratulations, I didn't even realize it.

Originally posted by: Naina2127

Reserveeed!

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OMGOMGOMG! Aw! 1) Thanks for the awesome update.
2) Aham blasting Kinjal was awesome *Yayay!* Thank god he didn't give in to her stupidity, and stopped Gopi from interfering as well.
3) Aww the ultrasound scene was so darn cute. Gopi's and Aham's happiness was captured soo beautifully *hope we'll see this in the show...at some point 😆
4) What will Gopi do? That was a really emotional scene, but glad to see Aham just put everything out there, accepting his faults, and explaining everything that happened, leaving no more room for misunderstanding. The ball's in Gopi's court now! Hope she agrees to giving the marriage another shot :) 5) And the VM was darn cute too ^_^

Can't wait to read the next part!

Cheers!
Naina

Thank you so much Naina.

Glad you enjoyed the Kinjal blasting, I can just imagine Ahem doing this in the future.
The ultrasound was to break the ice and silence between them, and melt Gopi just a little bit.
Now it's up to Gopi to sort thru his tangles feelings, and move forward.
Glad you enjoyed the VM.

Originally posted by: tangam

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Done it again Shilpa ...A couple sorting out thier differences is not that easy add to it their dodgy past and an impending baby...her emotions must be runnig wild ...not to take the hormones lightly either... what a choice time to open up...but me I am loving the drama...now chew on those fingers till next time...

loved the VM thank You

Thank you so much Tangam

Speaking of hormones, I am surprised Gopi hasn't acted out of character yet, hmm...something to think about. She now has a huge job of trying to decide what's what. Don't chew on your fingers too much, I will try to my best to update ASAP. Glad you enjoyed the VM too.

Originally posted by: aNsHu_tEjPaL

yayyy!!! u updated!!!!!! sooo happy!!! omg!!! ahem's confession was soo intense!!! loved how he tried to find the right words to explain himself...loved how he tried to tell gopi that he messed up and its not her fault!! loved how he expressed his love to her so many times!!! it was just soo beautiful!!!

omg!!! u didn't reveal if its boy or girl...their first time seeing the baby was soo touching and sweet!!! i could feel their excitement...loved them holding each other's hands and ahem being more interested in gopi than the baby!! what a beautiful scene!! can't wait to find out who wins!!

i dont think kinjal will back off just yet...she probably may come up with something else!! she needs the lashing of the whole family!!! ugh!!! i was soo proud of ahem for finally opening his mouth and telling his sister off!!! he finally has opened his eyes/mouth and can see what people are doing to his wife!! glad he finally understands that nothing is more important than his wife!!! yayyy!!

finally the vm!!! omg!! can i tell u that is my all time fav song!!!! loved the scenes u picked for the song...all the recent scenes went perfect w/the song!! the last scene from friday's epi was just out of this world!! ahem looked sooo hot and gopi was soo pretty!!! absolutely mindblowing!!!!

loved the update!!! pls cont sooon!!!

Awe..Anshu thank you so much!🤗

Honestly I wasn't aiming for a very intense Ahem it just so happened that when I started writing his explanation he took over all on his own, I thought oh wow this is on messed up explanations but nothing else would work so I just left it.

Good guess on Kinjal, but you know our Ahemji is alert, so he will be ready for her.

The ultrasound part I thought of at last moment also to lead to their serious discussion. Gopi had to be mellow enough to listen to him and to think back later to that moment.

Glad you enjoyed the VM.

Originally posted by: Xarina

I'm blown away. I have enjoyed reading your updates so much. They are all well written and certainly make me think back to your writing. As always. Much respect. X xx

Thank you so much Xarina. I am so glad you are enjoying the story, and thanks for the feedbacks. I do enjoy the show very much and CVs are giving me much needed inspirations.

Originally posted by: jiya25

hi lovely story...i just hv a question, where do u download the videos for ur vm...love the quality of them

Thank you so much Jiya, glad you enjoyed the update.

@Videos. I download from Apnicommunity sometimes, but I have a software on my computer that allows me to download from You Tube and Star Plus. I only use the videos to make the VM, so I haven't had any problems with copyrights or loosing my YT account.

shilpa looved it brilliant amazing,,,,


- finally ahem confessed - talked to her...
- loved the warnings ahemji gave kinjal - u r dead kinjal😡

- the whole ultrasound scene was brilliantly written - loved it -- reminds me of my ultrasounds and the excitement u have when u see the baby

- gopi please give him another chance - if u don''t give him another chance then he will be mine😳




P.S. forgot to add about the VM... beautiful song loved it

Originally posted by: Justlikethat1

Shilpa.. Wonderful update.. I am so glad Ahem confessed. Brilliantly written. I was happy that Gopi herself realized that he would not be unfaithful to her. But his confession makes it easier for her in the future..
The scan scene was very nice. Really touching to see how excited Ahem is about his baby but he also seems to have set his priorities straight now..
The Kinjal blasting was good. I am just waiting for the day he learns about her doings... I would love to see his reaction then 😃

Thank you so much. Yes this is one thing I wanted to get clear, Gopi does trust Ahem to do the right thing, and not cheat on her, he may not have been happy with the marriage in the past but he still wouldn't be unfaithful. Now it's up to Gopi to believe him or not.

I am glad you like the Kinjal blasting, but she hasn't backed off yet, let's see what he does next time.

Originally posted by: varshu27

yay a double treat...a wonderful update and an awesome vm...loved how ahem poured all his feelings out to gopi...not only that he gave her time to think about what she wanted to do...loved the ultrasound scene...

Thank you so much Varshu. I am so glad you enjoyed the update and the VM. Yes it is good he backed off where he did and gave her time to think. Let's see how Gopi takes in everything and what conclusion she reaches.

Originally posted by: NazmaJ

I loved everything about this update!!!

Ahem's explanantion to Gopi was fantastic and the way Ahem dealt with Kinjal was great!!!

Loved the VM too!!!

Thank you so much Nazma. I am so glad you enjoyed the update and the VM.

Originally posted by: swasthi

I just read your previous few updates to catch up with all the missed ones too.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading all of it. You have reached a very interesting place. You have brought in the most happiest moment in their lives together with him revelaing his tru feelings and real personality to her by him dissecting his complicated character, as well as including those broad brush strokes of the story - that tangled yarn - to her mind enabling her to process his words and simplifying it in those final few sentences. Very, very beautifully told.

I watched the VM several times and have really enjoyed the song, the lyrics and the selected scenes. Thank you for this treat.

Shilpa you have outdone yourself - well done!

Thank you so much Swasthi. Once again welcome back.

I thought it was about time Gopi had some evidence of his feelings. She may not believe him yet, but she will come to realize that he is telling the truth. Her mind is tangled as the yarn she is using to make the sweater for the baby, she will have to untangle everything before the baby comes to be sure the sweater and her heart is ready for the future.

I thought this is an appropriate place to use this song. He is ready to claim her, but is she ready to be claimed? Let's see how she deals with the latest revelations.

Originally posted by: ANJ4

I was so happy to get your PM ... just love the chapter and believe ahem pour his heart out to go... Also it did not hurt that you gave us a VM to top it off of... Please update soon.

Thanks so much Anju. Ahh.. our Ahemji is out to win his wife's very generous heart. Glad you enjoyed the update and the VM.

Originally posted by: evad

Shilpa🤗 wow thank you for the wonderful update and i loved that the fact that Kinjal got told off. I also love the VM watched twice already😊

Thank you so much Eva. I love angry Ahemji, most especially when that anger is directed at anyone but Gopi. He is just too brilliant at telling people off. Glad you enjoyed the VM also.

Originally posted by: sweet cherry

Loved da update it was amazing
I'm glad ahem confess wat he was feeling but gopi shouldn't
Give in yet... He still need to suffer for all sa pain he has caused
Her... It was an fantastic update
Cant wait for da nxt part

Awe..Thank you so much. I agree Gopi is not yet ready to give in. Once bitten twice shy, she will sort things out in her mind and then wait and watch. Will update ASAP.

Originally posted by: shruthi2010

shilpa wow. you have all the highlights in this part.
aham found kinjal's plan and blasted her. i m happy.
the scene with the doc was beautiful. i m very happy.
finally the confession of aham was so touching.
so what will be gopi's decision. i will wait for it.

Thank you so much Shruti. I have to tell you I enjoyed writing the Kinjal blasting part very much. Gopi has a very big task ahead of her now. She needs to go back and think on things and not give in yet, but wait and watch. He still has to show her the love.

Wonderful update. I recently started reading it and I love where your story is going. I do really hope Ahem puts Kinjal and Anita in their place. Glad he opened up to Gopi...now there is no room for misunderstandings.

Originally posted by: rsshree

kinjal deserved it, hope she get out of mm soon,

emotional talk of aham

Thank you so much! glad you enjoyed the update.

Originally posted by: navyab

enjoyed the part...you getting the story really well...

Finally Ahem has expressed his love to her ...So the question is will Gopi give into Ahem so easily...all the hurt for so many months...living an uncertain life...& when she got to know about the baby she was alone...will he be able to justify any of it even if it was his fault !!!!

If Kinjle was someone who backed off easily things would have been diff...so what will be her next plan...With Anita's support...

In India --u dnt get to know the gendre of the baby (FYI)...

How will Ahem build the closeness in the relationship & earn Gopi's trust...For Gopi, baby is the priority now !!!!

Thank you so much Navyab. I always look forward to your comments, you give me such brilliant ideas. Yes now the ball is in Gopi's court, but thank god our Gopi has smarten up a bit and didn't immediately go to la la land at his confession. She realizes she has more at stake here, mainly the baby. He still has to show her the love now that he has confessed, he needs to restore her faith in her prayers.

Kinjal may attempt something one more time, but that will be her last time. She doesn't yet realize that the person she is trying to destroy will be the person to save her in the end and will lead to her redemption.

I debated writing about the Ultrasound altogether because I have heard that it is illegal to try to find out baby's gender in India, however I decided to include this strictly to show Gopi that Ahem means what he says, she will reflect back on the scene and see that he was more into her than the baby. She needs this to realize that baby is not the only reason he brought her back. The part about the doc asking if they wanted to know the sex of the baby once again I just added to break the ice between the two, so they can move forward once again.

On a personal note, with my first pregnancy we had an Ultrasound, and my husband I were having the same argument. He said it would be a girl and I was sure it was a boy, and we both decided we didn't want to know until the baby made an appearance. He won the first time.