SS: To Belong Part *Note on page 70* - Page 38

Originally posted by: angelirebelli

Absolutely loved the update and the VM is a treat.. 👍🏼

Loved the way Kinjal was told off and put in her place.. Ahem opening up about his apprehensions is a wonderful change.. But, is this enough for Gopi to forgive him and move ahead ? Nope not yet...

As always you have me hooked, already looking forward to the next update..

The VM does a wonderful job in describing Ahem's feelings.. Simply Superb..⭐️

Thank you so much Angeli. I believe this is one of your favorite song's so I am very much pleased that you liked it.

I just loved the way Ahem blasted Kinjal recently when Nani was brought back and I took my inspiration from that scene and moved ahead, I really enjoyed writing that part, the man is just to brilliant when he is angry and telling people off, it helps that he is not telling Gopi off for a change.

He realized his reasons were very stupid, most especially as he is talking about them and this will cause him some anxiety because he will wonder if Gopi will believe such stupid reasons. No this is not enough, now he has to show her that he loves her, words are not enough.

Originally posted by: thejazzgal

wow shilpa ben

that was lovely again...

loved the way ahem blasted kinjal..!! loved it ..u deserve it kinjal...

"they both said "No" together. Ahem smiled at Gopi mischievously "It's a girl doc, I am sure." He winked at Gopi, who made a face at him. "Don't believe him Dr. Reena I am sure it's a boy." how cute :)

now im eager to know if ita a baby boy or girl...

and also feeling something fishy going in ur mins about ahem's dream. plzz dont make it true :)

finally ahem cleared all their misunderstaninds..

hope gopi gives him another chance.

and plzz i want some of scenes like ahem taking to babay.. indirectly to gopi..

loving ur story more n more..

plzz do cont soon

muaahh!!!!

Thank you so much Jazzgal! Kinjal deserved all the blasting and more, I look forward to the day the CVs listen to our pleas and grant us our wish on the show.

Ahh..the cute US scene, I thought why not make him playful for few minutes and let them show their happiness, just a light moment to break the ice. glad you enjoyed it.

From here on out, he is back to being the easy going fellow trying to win his wife's love, hopefully before the baby arrives. Best way for him to communicate with Gopi is thru the baby, lets see what he comes up with.

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

great update

finally ahem confessed his love to gopi

also loved the way ahem snubbed kinjal

Thank you so much. Yeah our Ahemji stole the show big time in this one, now it's Gopi's decision to believe him or not.

Originally posted by: X.Sisi94

Amazing story Thanks for the Update Shilpa

Love your writting And thanks for the Beautiful Vm~!

i am glad that Aham blasting Kinjal i hope he comes to know what she did and the part in de hospital was amazing

But the best part of this Update was Ahem open up his feelings too Gopi really Liked that part!

Amazing Update Like Always Cant wait to read the next part!

Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed the update and the VM. Ahem was amazing and yes now Kinjal has been warned. He has confessed now Gopi has to decide to believe him or not.

Originally posted by: _Precious_

Thanks Shilpa for the fabulous update. I really enjoyed reading it. Ahem has finally confessed all his feelings to Gopi and has a peace of mind now. Loved the way he showed Kinjal her place. But I think, this is not sufficient to make Gopi feel comfortable, he needs to work more and more for Gopi to believe him and revert back the feelings. It was a wonderful scene where both of them excited to see the scan of their baby forgetting the insecurities with each other. Ahem wants a baby girl whereas Gopi is so sure of a baby boy and I am very eager to know if its a baby girl or boy. I guess, mother can guess it right. Overall, a brilliant upate. And the vm was fantabulous. I keep watching it over and over again. Loved it.
Thanks for the pm.

Thank you so much Precious. Yes Ahem has confessed, but Gopi still have to think things thru in order to giver him that one more chance. Kinjal blasting was just too good, glad he is learning to protect what's his and what is more important in life. He does need to work more and more to show his love and help her restore her faith in her prayers.
The ultrasound scene was to lighten things up between the two, and bring both back on equal footing. Glad you enjoyed the update and the VM.

Originally posted by: uamaz

Great update ... Ahem should have strangled Kinjal

Thank you so much and agree he should have strangled her, but at the end of the day she is still his sister, but he still won't tolerate her behavior anymore.

Originally posted by: indu_shah

wonderful update dear!!...ahem's confession seemed to me very ahem like...i can visualize him struggling to make her understand abt his feelings as much as he could and he is making great efforts and only for gopi..i dont think he wud have made such effort to anybody else..definitely not for anitha...he showed great patience with kinjal when she asked her mom to check if the child was his...and i feel the blasting was worth and she needs more...the excitement at the ultrasound was so evident and i feel happy for gohem...great update...thanks for the pm shlpa..

Thank you so much Indu. Yes Ahem is so unsure at times and as he voiced his reasons out loud they sounded stupid to his own ears, so now he has to sit back and wonder if Gopi will believe him. He is working hard and will continue to do so to prove he loves her. Yes he is calmer and dealing with Kinjal in his own way because he is sure Gopi would be more upset if he lost his temper and did something to Kinjal. Glad you enjoyed the update.

Originally posted by: tina_1234

intrestin part...so ahem cleared his side..lets see how gopi takes it

Thanks so much Tina. Yes he has put his feelings forward now it's up to her to decide.

Originally posted by: sneha_17

Your FF is too good, your writing is too special

The way emotions of Ahem and gopi are captured beautifully.

Keep up the good work.

Update soon , waiting for more gohem sweet romance

Thank you so much Sneha. Glad you are enjoying the SS, and thanks for your wonderful feedback. Will update ASAP.

Originally posted by: sks21

shilpa ben loved the upddate it was brilliant
wow the way ahem handled the situation with kinjal was amazing
and finally ahem opened up to gopi so now gopi has to decide
and also love the vm...

Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed the update. Kinjal blasting by Ahem is always a treat, and I want to see more of it on the show, can't wait for the day when he finds out about her kalakari.
Ahem has confessed not we wait for Gopi's decision. Glad you enjoyed the VM.

Originally posted by: sweetsugar

tat was just marvellous Shilpa , loved ahem all the way . and the scan scene i am in love with ...i am glad he took this opportunity and spoke his heart out ,and again wat a beautiful scene sincerity reflecting in evrything he said .loved the way u have written it all . Gopi can take her own time to take a decision Ahem is a very understanding husband ❤️ Edit

Forgot to mention abt the VM ...loved IT ⭐️

Thank you so much Saba. I don't even know how I pulled off the confession scene, truly, I was not very happy with it at all, so I kept trying to change it, but in the end it just made more sense to leave it as is.
Ultrasound scene was just to pave the way for Ahem and I think his reaction was just perfect for Gopi to reflect back on. Glad you enjoyed the VM also.

Originally posted by: kaka.lg

no words to describe how amazed i am with ur story and writing skill. thanks so much for the update, shilpa ben..it's simply amazing

Thank you so much Monyka. I have no words to Thank you for such wonderful and inspiring comments and feedbacks. It says alot and motivates me to keep bringing you the updates.

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad

shilpa looved it brilliant amazing,,,,


- finally ahem confessed - talked to her...
- loved the warnings ahemji gave kinjal - u r dead kinjal😡

- the whole ultrasound scene was brilliantly written - loved it -- reminds me of my ultrasounds and the excitement u have when u see the baby

- gopi please give him another chance - if u don''t give him another chance then he will be mine😳




P.S. forgot to add about the VM... beautiful song loved it

Thank you so much Munni. Yes our Ahemji is getting better by day, not only here but on the show also. I believe our minds were in the same place today as we watched the hair washing scene.😉

Kinjal has been put in her place lets see what stupid stunts she pulls next.

Hate to tell you this babe, but Gopi is way too in love with him to give up so quickly. Plus he doesn't see anyone past her.

The ultrasound scene was inspired by my very own first ultrasound when I was pregnant with my first child. And I thought why not give Gohem one too. It's nice to imagine.

Originally posted by: Dhabu89

Wonderful update. I recently started reading it and I love where your story is going. I do really hope Ahem puts Kinjal and Anita in their place. Glad he opened up to Gopi...now there is no room for misunderstandings.

Good job with the FF. Looking forward to see where they go from here

Thank you so much. Glad you are liking the story. Yes Ahem will get a chance to put both in their place and this time Gopi will witness how far he is willing to go to protect her.
He has put his feelings forward now it's up to her to decided. Thanks for this wonderful feedback.

Shilpa,Please PM me when you update😊

Originally posted by: CHIKA784

Shilpa,Please PM me when you update😊

I just added you to my buddy list.👍🏼

Originally posted by: sbp1971

I just added you to my buddy list.👍🏼

beautiful update!!!