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varshu27

@varshu27

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#341

yay a double treat...a wonderful update and an awesome vm...loved how ahem poured all his feelings out to gopi...not only that he gave her time to think about what she wanted to do...loved the ultrasound scene...

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Nazma

@NazmaJ

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Posted: 13 years ago

#342

I loved everything about this update!!!

Ahem's explanantion to Gopi was fantastic and the way Ahem dealt with Kinjal was great!!!

Loved the VM too!!!

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#343

I just read your previous few updates to catch up with all the missed ones too.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading all of it. You have reached a very interesting place. You have brought in the most happiest moment in their lives together with him revelaing his tru feelings and real personality to her by him dissecting his complicated character, as well as including those broad brush strokes of the story - that tangled yarn - to her mind enabling her to process his words and simplifying it in those final few sentences. Very, very beautifully told.

I watched the VM several times and have really enjoyed the song, the lyrics and the selected scenes. Thank you for this treat.

Shilpa you have outdone yourself - well done!

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ANJ4

@ANJ4

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#344

I was so happy to get your PM ... just love the chapter and believe ahem pour his heart out to go... Also it did not hurt that you gave us a VM to top it off of... Please update soon.

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evad

@evad

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#345

Shilpa🤗 wow thank you for the wonderful update and i loved that the fact that Kinjal got told off. I also love the VM watched twice already😊

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sweet cherry

@sweet cherry

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#346

Loved da update it was amazing
I'm glad ahem confess wat he was feeling but gopi shouldn't
Give in yet... He still need to suffer for all sa pain he has caused
Her... It was an fantastic update
Cant wait for da nxt part

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shruthi2010

@shruthi2010

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#347

shilpa wow. you have all the highlights in this part.
aham found kinjal's plan and blasted her. i m happy.
the scene with the doc was beautiful. i m very happy.
finally the confession of aham was so touching.
so what will be gopi's decision. i will wait for it.

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rsshree

@rsshree

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#348

kinjal deserved it, hope she get out of mm soon,

emotional talk of aham

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navyab

@navyab

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#349

enjoyed the part...you getting the story really well...

Finally Ahem has expressed his love to her ...So the question is will Gopi give into Ahem so easily...all the hurt for so many months...living an uncertain life...& when she got to know about the baby she was alone...will he be able to justify any of it even if it was his fault !!!!

If Kinjle was someone who backed off easily things would have been diff...so what will be her next plan...With Anita's support...

In India --u dnt get to know the gendre of the baby (FYI)...

How will Ahem build the closeness in the relationship & earn Gopi's trust...For Gopi, baby is the priority now !!!!

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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#350

Absolutely loved the update and the VM is a treat.. 👍🏼

Loved the way Kinjal was told off and put in her place.. Ahem opening up about his apprehensions is a wonderful change.. But, is this enough for Gopi to forgive him and move ahead ? Nope not yet...

As always you have me hooked, already looking forward to the next update..

The VM does a wonderful job in describing Ahem's feelings.. Simply Superb..⭐️