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Posted: 14 years ago
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hahaha...had enough of writing Suk...lol...with this OS/SS it's very clear what is bothering you about Aham, all the times he has hurt Gopi(some of the things his done to her, even a saint wouldn't forgive...😆) and off course the letter from Kinjal that Rashi and Urmila misread to Gopi.

You wrote very well unravelling all Aham's insensitive behaviour towards Gopi and making him grovel, it's definitely a way to go, whilst I would have just killed him off, plane crash/witchcraft etc and introduced a double role Jignesh to the rescue...lol and called it quits, you fixed Aham...well done. 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh wow...awesome...haye hw much i would hope for this to come true...wooo

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