short os after the kidnapping pt 4 page 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Good going Suk ... keep it up.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank God she remembered. A very nice update.
Loved it .
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Posted: 14 years ago
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this OS is really nice...

waiting for the next part..pls update sooon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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first of all i have to cry wah wah...becuase i too had the similar idea to write a ff but now i have to change...

but no offense at allšŸ˜† u are a very skilled writer and i love the way it is turning out, gopi remembering everything slowly and coming close to ahem that far good than my own thougtsšŸ‘

Continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
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me to waiting for next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Gopi goes down n helps kokila n hetal make breakfast, kokila told her no need but she insist maji plse let me help, kokila looked at her u called me maji , ji i remembered the wedding. kokila smiled so does hetal. The whole day went quickly n aham arrived seeing Gopi smiling n chatting with kokila his whole heart filled with happiness a feeling he had never experienced before. Gopi saw he was there n smiled kokila looked at them both n she smiled with satisfaction, aham dikra you have come aham i shall make you your green tea gopi says nahi maji i will make it, kokila looked at Aham, Aham dikra Gopi vahu has not stopped working all day she needs to rest unlike her sister who has been sleeping all day plse take her with you, Aham grabs Gopis hand you are going to rest whilst i have tea n do some work you r not allowed downstairs until dinner is that understood, ji Aham ji Gopi replied.
Gopi slept in ahams arms he also decided to take a rest he will work after dinner. Both woke up n got ready for dinner, aham went down first gopi was looking at her parent picture she says i wish you were alive today i miss you so much with tears in her eyes, then she opened the orange cloth the one that had the puppets that panna gave her n then she opened the letter that aham sent to her, she looked at i cant read she starts to read it n then starts to cry, she wipes her tears n goes downstairs with it.
At the dining table everyone is sitting down, Rashi is standing, Gopi walks down with the letter n tears in her eyes, Hetal says look Gopi has come, Aham turns round smiling then his smile fades, he sees gopi is upset he goes up to her, Gopi whats happened? Rashi rolls her eyes, Gopi looks at him n then walks over to Rashi who is looking at her, Rashi ben just before marriage i told you i did not want to marry Ahamji because he was in love with another girl so when a letter came to the house you n mahmaji read it to me saying that yes he is in love with another girl but she is his moms choice n he will make me very happy. Rashi looks at her haei haei so whaat? Gopi says what does this say? Gopi tells her read it, so Rashi reads it but very nervous, its the same as i read to you that day so why do you want me to read it, Gopi then starts to read it, it says that Aham ji does not want to marry me, so why did you read it wrong to me? Aham looked at Gopi n smiles Gopi you remembered you can read now Gopi looks at him confused she replies i can read but how mahmi n rashi ben never let me go to school even though i wanted to.. Aham looked at her in shock, kokila hetal n everyone now looking at Rashi, kokila looks at hetal she is your vahu not mine, Hetal goes up to her why did you read the letter wrong rashi i want a answer, Rashi starts ranting about how hetal doesnt trust her n how she is two face, jigar hearing all of this is about to slap rashi but aham stops him n says dont do anything you will regret later take it from me i have regretted the day i slapped Gopi.
Jigar looks at Rashi go back to your home i dont want you staying here, Rashi looks at him shocked, nahi jigar ji plse dont send me back, what will happen to my mother n father the people in the colony will taunt them they will be shamed, Jigar looks at her i will speak to your father today you will leave here, Gopi looks at jigar devar ji plse think again, my mahmaji will die, kokila looks at Gopi, Gopi vahu your mahma is a pure man he will understand he will feel more hurt if you go back there not rashi. we will speak to him. Gopi says ji. rashi starts to cry n says she doesnt want to go back to that dirty place here she doesnt belong there, jigar looks at her n shakes his head
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great story, will rashi and urmi be chucked out of the story.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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realy nice update can't wait to read the next part!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Interesting part. hope Gopi in the serial also exposes Rashi in the same way.I guess its just wishful thinking.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Good going Suk ... looking forward to the next update.

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