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Posted: 14 years ago
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its getting more interesting after this part...

waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
very nice part
looking forward to the next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Suk nice story glad that rashi's gonna get a taste of goes around comes around
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Posted: 14 years ago
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The next few days was amazing Gopis memory was coming back slowly but she would get hurt by some of the visions especially when it came to Aham , he would be on his knees apologising but she hated seeing him like that. Even the kalakaris of urmi n rashi were all out in the open, the pressure cooker the ghee, n during rakhsa bandan tea fell on kinjals sari n she stayed up all night washing it aham was shocked, also kinjal running away before the marriage n how she n help worked together n got kinjal back but then Aham said to kokila that it was time for her to leave, that was the heartbreaker because he had brought her back for his nani as he could not tell nani the truth. That one took a bit of time for gopi to get over but once she did Aham was more n more attentive to her calling her if she was alright during work.
The preist n Shamji the NRI came for dinner one night, shamji told aham n gopi that he had brought them a present to come to England n stay with him for 14 nights Goham were delighted until gopi said no they could'nt come as maji n pappa will be alone, Aham looked at her shocked, dont worry Gopi if Shamji doesnt mind i will pay for the tickets for mom n dad. so that a plan any other problems Gopi Aham asks her she shakes her head n smiles.
In England they stayed in Windsor village the house was grand shamji explained that the property dated back to 1800's n how he has kept it the same way. They visited London, Buckingham palace, Harrods in those 14 days Gopi n aham became closer than before. They walked n talked a lot especially after dinner the nights would be colder n then when they got back the fireplace was lit n they would sit in each others arms Aham even learnt how to make tea gopi would tease him. Kokila n Parag also found each other both were united finally.
When they got back to England, Aham had instructed Jigar to decorate their bedroom so when they came in Gopi was shocked she loved it, Aham looked at her smiling he put his hand on her face n kissed her passionately n a night to remember they were finally united as one.
ok no more had enough of writing 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25

awsome ending. Its good to see ahem repenting and gopi being normal and not terrified even

after remembeing everyting. Good bonidng among all. do write others os or ffs.


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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
awesome ending .Very nice update.
Keep writing more.
Raunika
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
NIce part dear... by the tone of last para, i guess this was the ending... wonderful...

but if it is notthe last chapter, post more soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very lovely ending..


enjoyed a lot reading this os..thnk u so much
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you for this read Suk. What a great way to end too.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great job on the ending :)

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