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Well, this was an eventful part.
Lets take it piece-by-piece, shall we?
@Ahem taking care of Gopi: Thats was very sweet to read. She was cured almost instantly in his care, lol.
I would have exprected her being sick goes on for a few more days, but when you have Ahemji's magic healing hands, anything's possibleđ
@Ahem getting Gopi back: Being in her presence is all great, but I still think that he needs to slowly win her trust and her love back. He broke her faith in him and I hope he doesn't just make her give in to him.
Im anxious to read on how you do this
@Kinjal liking Gopi: Im glad. I love Kinjal's character and I think she has great potential. So I love when Kinjal is positive
@Raj: It seems like he has seen sense too. Thank god. Of course he got swayed by a woman, but Im glad he's now going to return and help protect Gopi against her dad and mami
Okay, thats all I have to say for now
I loved this part. I love your writing. Lets write a book together, lol
Waiting for more...
Yuks
Lets take it piece-by-piece, shall we?
@Ahem taking care of Gopi: Thats was very sweet to read. She was cured almost instantly in his care, lol.
I would have exprected her being sick goes on for a few more days, but when you have Ahemji's magic healing hands, anything's possibleđ
@Ahem getting Gopi back: Being in her presence is all great, but I still think that he needs to slowly win her trust and her love back. He broke her faith in him and I hope he doesn't just make her give in to him.
Im anxious to read on how you do this
@Kinjal liking Gopi: Im glad. I love Kinjal's character and I think she has great potential. So I love when Kinjal is positive
@Raj: It seems like he has seen sense too. Thank god. Of course he got swayed by a woman, but Im glad he's now going to return and help protect Gopi against her dad and mami
Okay, thats all I have to say for now
I loved this part. I love your writing. Lets write a book together, lol
Waiting for more...
Yuks
