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shajnaii

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Posted: 14 years ago

#171

this part is superb, fabulous..

u r a really good writer...pls keep on..love it soo much

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evad

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Posted: 14 years ago

#172

Wow Shilpa I don't know what to say everytime you update it's a chef d'oeuvres [=D>]. I would love to see Urshi faces when they know that zRaj's back in town how would they explain those lies

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angelirebelli

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Posted: 14 years ago

#173

Wow, what an update !!! *superlikes*

Aham taking charge is just the thing the doctor prescribed for their relationship. Loved the cute li'l scene between them. After the tete-a-tete with Raj, I am sure Aham now knows how to deal with Gopi and also her maami n her likes.

So loving the pace of this fic...and as usual looking forward to the next installment !!

Yeh dil mange more !!

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ANJ4

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Posted: 14 years ago

#174

that was so good. so happy that ahem and raj know the story of gopi. love your story. thanks for writing a masterpiece.

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Yuks

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Posted: 14 years ago

#175

I finally got a chance to read this. And it was lovely as usual. Do I even need to bother saying it anymore? Can we just take it as a given now?

Oh betrayal, how hard it is to overcome that. It's the hardest one I think

Not only has Gopi been betrayed, but Ahem too, and now Raj too.
I guess they will all have to band together and get back at Mami and Raashi

Waiting for that to happen

Waiting for more Shilpaben!

Yuks

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vaishali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#176

hey this was just lovely part plz update next part soon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#177

lovely FF shilpa ben!! ( hope u dont mind me calling u shilpa ben :P 😃 )

love all ur FF's to core..
now another fan fic from you!!
no words about this particular FF !! love it to core'

sorry delaying reading but was lil busy with my studies..

but now desperately waiting to read further
keep rocking

mwahhh!!!
cont soon :)

Edited by thejazzgal.s - 14 years ago

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Rafeal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#178

👍🏼"please, don't leave me." 😆... I repeat this dialogue daily... How did you know my secrets? Sixth sense, huh?😲

I must be careful around you, right ben? Ok, fab OS.. Loved it! Your Ahem is so Kewl...🤣... But hate Gopi🤬😡...

All the characters are great, so down to earth... But Gopi, I hate her... lol... You have really tried a lot to improve her but to be frank the SNS wali Gopi has so drastic effect on me that i just hate her...😆

But I loved Your work... Its fantastic as usual. Definitely a great work! You are really good at this..👏👍🏼