FF:First Love~LAST PART~ page 81 12/9/11

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@ShellJA

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#131

Shipla that was great update. I don't know why you would stop writing , you're an amazingly talented writer!

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vaishali

@vaishali667

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#132

hey this part is fabulous i am waiting how ahem will solve the problem u made my day today more as if my brithday today thank

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jasmin0000

@jasmin0000

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#133

That was beautiful Pease of writing Shilpa; 👏 please do continuing I always love to read what you write it's one of the good things on the form. 😃

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: vaishali667
hey this part is fabulous i am waiting how ahem will solve the problem u made my day today more as if my brithday today thank

Happy Birthday Vaishali, I hope you have a wonderful day and all your wishes come true.

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shaina

@shaina.sharma

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#135

ur ffs always contain a beatiful touch of emotions. Its good to see gopi resisting and ahem trying to win her back. Its really beatiful and waiting for some gohem romance .

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#136

Well, she sure as hell can't be on family way, so she must be sick

Im glad she didnt give into Ahem like I know SNS Gopi is going into. She stood up for herself and got her point across too

Ahem will have to do better than that to regain her trust and win her back.

It was a lovely update Shilpaben. Too bad I fell asleep before I could read it last night.
Waiting for more...

Yuks

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#137

Loved the description in the third paragraph, learnt a new word 'assuage' and second the comments made by lovtv.

What a poignant end to the update! Ahem needs to take care of his Gopi in all spheres if he unconditionally wants her to be his.

Looking forward to the next update.

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Simra

@Simz786

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#138

Aww. Ahem Apologises. Sweet. ❤️ Don't Want GoHem Divorce! 😭 Keep Up Gd Work 👍🏼 And Please Don't Even Think About Quiting This FF 😊

Edited by Simz786 - 14 years ago

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Rafeal

@Rafeal.

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#139

Gopi saying powerful dialogues! Really? Phew! Lol.. Men think with their heart.. Poor Ahem! Gopi was rude! Thinks she is ms. Smarty..lol. I am sure ahem will tame the shrew! Lol.. Great update as usual! Dont you dare stop writing