GOHEM SS: Heart to Heart updated pt 6 pg 15

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Jake-neil
Do i find a little bashing of my purple girl?😆.
Nice update, shilpaben. Ahem's dilemma was really good. The guy needs a kick from his father

Parag is too sweet to kick Ahem, besides he would get kick from Koki if he ever kicked Ahem😆

I figured you wouldn't mind too much of my Rashi bashing, you would let me get away with it, wouldn't you?😆

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: lovtv
loved it. This SS will go more to my liking than the show! thanks Shilpa!

Thanks Shelly, but I was just saying to someone recently, no one can write passionate scenes like you😳

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choti_rani

@choti_rani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Shilpa that was fabulous as usual! Can't wait to read the next part.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: kav88
that was wonderful...good that gopi is thinking about her life...update soon...

Thanks so much, I like for Gopi to thing for herself for change, I am sick of some of her stupidity they show.

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avivakirk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Shilpa,

I just read your update now. These days the forum is so cluttered with articles that sometimes u miss out on something good.

Loved it. You're a romantic at heart & in your writing it shows. Love romantic stories. liked the way Aham's thoughts don't give him peace. It's good he's observing Gopi & comparing her to Rashi's behaviour. Waiting for more.👏👏

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: avivakirk
Shilpa,
I just read your update now. These days the forum is so cluttered with articles that sometimes u miss out on something good.

Loved it. You're a romantic at heart & in your writing it shows. Love romantic stories. liked the way Aham's thoughts don't give him peace. It's good he's observing Gopi & comparing her to Rashi's behaviour. Waiting for more.👏👏

Thanks so much Aviva, I got the idea from many of the comments about how Ahem would now see the differences between Gopi and Rashi, and thought why not, that's the way CVs should show it.

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Simra

@Simz786

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Good Work. Loving The Story 😊. Can't Wait To See What Happens

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avivakirk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: sbp1971

Thanks so much Aviva, I got the idea from many of the comments about how Ahem would now see the differences between Gopi and Rashi, and thought why not, that's the way CVs should show it.

Way to go sweetie! Please write more!

Edited by avivakirk - 14 years ago