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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank god ahem reached there in time...what a thrashing he gave to the goons...loved it...feeling so sad for gopi...
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It so sad for gopi i hope everthing will be alright
i can't wait for the next part!
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Originally posted by: Bloem123

It so sad for gopi i hope everthing will be alright

i can't wait for the next part!


tanks a lot

i have a lot of surprises filled for gopi this time

it pay back time for everyone who hurted and avoided her( u know who i mean)
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Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

thank god ahem reached there in time...what a thrashing he gave to the goons...loved it...feeling so sad for gopi...

tanks

happy to hear u liked the trashing part because i thought very hard writing that part

as many dont like detailed thrashing scenes😊

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Originally posted by: shaina.sharma


tanks a lot

i have a lot of surprises filled for gopi this time

it pay back time for everyone who hurted and avoided her( u know who i mean)


oke, i can't wait to read it 😃
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Part-6

Part6-1:

RASHI

Rashi was just waiting for the kokila storm to come and hit her but least she knew that rashi have called her mother during the whole gopi fiasco and asked her mother the kalakari advice to escape. After her mom's maha lecture rashi thought |" oof this gopi

who asked to let her go and get herself into trouble and now i m in troublle due to her." Though thinking of might have happend to gopi sent a shiver down her back rashi was as usual stubborn to accept her mistake. Kokila thundered "why are u standing like

a liberty statue oveer, COME HERE". Rashi slowly rushed towards the center of the hall trying to show a guilty and depressed concern face. Kokila noticed every inch of rashi's face to know what she was thinking and saw a slight confidence in herself . Kokila

thought " no way rashi not today i m going to let u go away" Rashi came and stood facing kokila face to face and hetal on left and jigar on right. Kokila said "This time rashi i wont say anyting to u " Rashi just looked up schocked. kokila continued " but this time

i am giving u a chance to speak, a single chance to speak only truth and truthfully say what happened from the moment u stepped out to the moment u came back without my gopi vahu. I am doing this rashi becuase u have always complained that i never listen to u

and jump to my own conclusions but this time i wil listen to ur story first and wont belive any other word" Rashi was on cloud nine " wow " thought rashi " now i can tell whatever mummy told me and this kagdi have lost senses seeing her lovely gopi in this state

and when comes to jigar ji and mummyji they as usual wont go against my puppy face but this kagdi is far intellligent i have to be careful". Kokila knew exactly what rashi was thinking and she deliberately put forth such condition to put rashi in a false hope of security.

jigar looked at koki and moved his head to sideways indicating this was not the right thing to do and koki signaled him saying she knew what she was about to do and thought now her work became more easy. Kokila said " so rashi lets start the story and no lies"

Part6-2

Rashi started her babling as usual saying " kakiji and mummji i m really sorry that i lied to u about the marriage because i knew that kakiji wont allow to the park at the evening. The reason is there was a get to gather of my friends and i wanted to meet them hence i lied to u"

kokila signalled rashi to continue rashi sayng how she and gopi went and enjoyed there and rashi said " kakiji i asked gopi to stay near a ice cream shop and i went and spoke to my friends and when i came back she was no where to find we searched the whole place but she

was no where to be seen and one of the shopkeeper told us that gopi went away so i returned back thnking kinjal ben's parlour incident where gopi left her and came to home all by herself , kakiji i was so scared how can gopi do this to me i have searched the whole place and

asked everyone but in vain" kokila quentioned " but still rashi i have a doubt that if it was ur's friends gathering than why did gopi vahu have to come , she never went to coll na so what did she would have done there" Rashi thought " i knew it kagdi u would ask me this

question " , rashi replied " kakiji, gopi is my little sister i want her to have as much fun i have. How can i leave her here burning near the stove while i was enjoyng my day out. Moreover during my college days gopi used to bring me my lunch and all of my friends became

her friends also. we all know how gopi is liked by everyone. I never thought that gopi's foolishness have made me to pay such price". Kokila said "over, or is der anytng u still wanted to tell me" Rashi replied " no kakiji this is what have happend exactly" and thought to herself

even gopi cant deny her story as according to her view this is what happended exactly and thought " of course i told the truth except the part where i met mummy not my friends and when i escape by telling lies how can i get caught by telling the truth." Kokila said " sochlo rashi

this is ur last chance to say in ur defence and after that i wont tolerate any thing extra other than the present story ur telling us samjigayi" Rashi said " ha ha ji kaki no more extra story this is what happened u can ask gopi also". Koki said" no need rashi i trust u" Rashi thought

"Tank god gopi ke kanaji u saved me today" but koki interrupting rashi thoughts "but rashi as i am a old crow" (Rashi eyes popped out) "and i understand things a bit slow (this time every modi's eyes pop out) so i have my doubts can u clarrify it rashi" Rashi said " ji kakiji"

and thought now starts the interrogation of kagdi modi

Part6-3:

Kokila thought now rashi is totally trapped and said "answer me by yes or no k rashi " Rashi said "ji". Kokila said "u and gopi went to the park, did gopi knew it before hand" rashi told "yes", thinking the moment where she asked gopi not to tell to kaki about her lie and knew

that gopi would keep the promise. Kokila said " u said gopi went away as when u went to meet ur friends and after searching her u returned back rit" Rashi thought "what was this kagdi upto" and said yes. Then kokila said "whenever u wanted something rashi u used to tel to ur pati

or mota bhabhi then why did u lie to the family" Rashi said "oh kaki i lied because i knew that u wont allow gopi by tnking it wil be waste of time so i lied for gopi" Kokila said "really how caring u are k rashi now tell me u told to left gopi and went to meet ur friends, why dint u

take gopi with u" Rashi was already irritated and was getting sleep and thought "oof e kagdi bhi na, really lost her mind " and said "oh kaki u know gopi na she is very shy and silent and she feels akward near new people so keeping in mind i left her and came back immediately within

10 min without waiting for my friends also ".Koki thought "bingo fell right into the pit"and said "rashi how can gopi get afraid of those persons who according to u know them very well.U said that gopi knew each of ur friends then why did u left her when she was taken to meet ur friends".

Rashi felt wide awake "god me and my big mouth" and said " oh kaki these were my new friends gopi knew my old friends" then kokila said "then why did u say u wanted gopi to meet ur friends when u knew she never met them".Rashi left speechless "ji kakiji i came to know when i reached there"

kokila continued "k rashi but u might have learned about them when u have met them but u urself told us that left gopi and went to meet them. SO i ask u rashi before meeting ur friends how did u came to know those wrent ur old friends". Rashi was stumped, she knew she fell right into kagidi

trap now and now she cant make up new story as she already told kagdi theres no more. Rashi thougt time for the emotional drrama and turned towards hetal and said |"mumiji wat i m telling the truth but kakiji is always after me . i thought kakiji trusts me when she asked me the whole story

but no she only wanted to insult me by confusing me . She just wanted to take her frustration out and i am here a toy for her to let her frustaration on me. I am so tired and worn out that some details missed from my mind. i wanted to take my sister's mind off her miseries and now here i am getting

blamed all over again. It was my mistake to take gopi out." Rashi turnd towards jigar and says" jigar ji u knew na how i get worried regrding gopi and her happiness, i searched her every corner of the park leaving my enjoyment and was so terrified but dnt knw where that girl went away as

getting a chance. she was out of my sight just for a few minutes and was disappeared like thin air, always i m trying here to bring happiness into the family and always gopi brings trouble like she dont want anyone to be happy at all..."

Part6-4:

SLAP...

The first slap rashi was ever encontered and from the least person she expected " Jigarji!!!!" Jigar said " shut up rashi just shut up"(jigar is modern hence the famous dialogue is in english) Dont imagine that we will believe u now after such happings tonight.We gave u one chance

rashi and waited for u to tell the truth but no rashi again u lied to us" Rashi said "but jigarji i am telling the truth i told gopi to wait for me and.." Jigarji "thats what i am asking rashi why did u leave her and dont give me ur friends thing because the lie is clearly writen on ur face

and where as the ur boasting regarding ur searching for gopi bhabhi it is also a lie becasuse i have asked everyone thinking u might have asked them regarding bhabhi and have shown them any photo but no one conformed that before me no one came looking for bhabhi and also

ur big fat lie regarding bhabhi disappering i myself asked the ice cream shopper and he told me that bhahi waited for 2 hours at the same spot for u to come and fetch her and went away from that place because the shop keeper asked her to do". Rashi was petrified to face jigar she thought

how did she forget such big point, of course when these people wnt to find gopi they might have askd them questions. Rashi said "jigar ji trust me pls i am telling the truth this time i dint deliberately left gopi behind it was a accident and there was no involvement of me" Rashi thought "

yes that true it was all mumy idea she never thought of leaving gopi". Jigar shouted " BAS RASHI , enough of ur crocodile tears how i hoped that u might tell the truth but u always lied rashi as today, i always thought there was something wrong with u but later thinks that it was my

fault to think like that. I knew u thought me as ahem bhai ka chamcha but dint want to become a workholic like bhai leaving the people who care for him. Bhai have a loving mother with whom he wont spend a 5 min time a loving fathter who he wont consider as his father at all and

most of all a lovely caring wife who does anyting for him for his one smile, always takes care of his needs silently without any expectation and never let him know. But bhai never knew this becuase he himself made cut off all emotions.he was never there for his mom or bhabhi in need

it was always bhabhi who took care of the family when it was in crisis time in many ocassions. I dint want to become like him because i wanted to support u for ur every mistake and ur every prise. I wanted u to be happy rashi and comfortable in this house becasue a wife gets respect only

when she gets respect from her husband rashi, i wanted to protect u but u never did care for me rashi never!!" Rashi was deeply hurt with jigar words and tears flowed from her eyes. Jigar said" i dnt care for u rashi as u have proved that only money is important and neither i need any

information regarding where did u go leaving gopi bhabhi or to say with whom" Rashi mouth felt wide open" jigar ji u are suspicious of me , but i am telling the truth jigar ji listen to me once pls jigar ji i m not guilty and dint meet anyone promise jigar trust me pls i dnt break ur trust.."

But jigar said " Bas rashi i dont want to see ur face again leave this house rashi leave now within 5 min and dont make me drag u out. Just get out of my life ". Saying jigar inside leaving a utterly displeased modi family , a devasted rashi and a utterly shockked ahem !!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg!!!!! what an awesome update...generally jigar has role but this time he is the hero, loved him...koki is superb...now to see what happens to rashi and urmila?
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Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

omg!!!!! what an awesome update...generally jigar has role but this time he is the hero, loved him...koki is superb...now to see what happens to rashi and urmila?

tanks a lot

yes according to me jigar is also a potential character and he too should be

given some credit . and as per rashi and urmila kanaji hi janeee😆😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
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waitin for next part eagerly :))
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Back again and more shock awaits here, tanks for the response

Part-7
part7-1:


"Does jigar thinks about me this way, does everyone thinks about me the same way that i have no emotions towards anyone", ahem was going towards his room, his mind kept repeating the words jigar have said.Ahem thought " how can jigar say that i dont care for my family,

i love my mom a lot, what i dint do to make her happy. I was suceesful at every work i have taken ,making her proud, making this family proud, I am responsible for the families bussiness growth. Kaka is proud of my work, because of mine and kaka's hard work now everyone

recognizes modi industrires. I sacrificed my happiness, enjoyments for this family, so that they live in a life of comfort. I even sacrificed my love for my mom's happiness and for the family prestige and married that gawar who cant even take care of herself. As slowly jigar words

sinked into ahem brain his pain became anger. ahem thought " what dis jigar know of anyting, he himself is not capable of running the bussiness and the whole burden fell onn my shoulders. To become sucessful one have to sacrifice their lives, and if ur a sucessful person then

the whole world including ur family will respect u, care for u. If one knows one person behaviour then u can say whether the person cares for u or not and everybody knows that i care for my mom , there is no need of any show like how that jigar says and like how that gawar

always tries to hint the family. Everytime she appears as if she is always thinking about my needs and my requirements. She always at a showdown trying to hint the family that she takes care of me, Never does she keep her life personal and also makes my life public to the entire

family. Why to act terrified and all that crying drama even when i dont speak to her indicating everyone how i treat her. I have already warned her not to publicize our relation but this girl exactlly does the opposite thing which i asked her to do. But why i am thinking this, I know

how much i care for my family and how much i maintain the reputation of this family. I Ahem Modi am a sucessful person in my life and business also and i dont care about the persons who cant even know how to control his wife and how to maintain relations with one another.

But what ahem dint know was talking to himself he came straight to his room and slept on his bed besides gopi.

Part7-2

Rashi was in no state of words. "how can he say such things to me and how can he leave me, wat wrong have i done. This is unfair, i dont have a hand in what state gopi is and they are blaming me." Tears started to roll on Rashi's cheeks. Then she saw hetal and thought her only

chance was hetal now. she said "mumyji, mumiji dekhiye jigarji kya keh rahe hai. i know i am lazy, iresponsible but but i never wanted gopi to get hurt. how can i she is my sister after all. mumyji pls listen to me i am not telling lies i have no hand for wat happend with gopi".

"Bas dikra" hetal said "bas i have always trustted to rashi, saved u thinking that u r a playful kid and thought to protect ur nature so that it wont lost in responsibilites. i thought that some or other time u wil come around gradually but today u have disapointed us all and mostly me"

rashi spoke " but mumyji today i am really speaking the truth if u want i will swear on kanaji." hetal said " Nahi rashi now pls dont insult the god now by taking false vows pls. if u really arre speaking the truth rashi then pls explain me rashi that where were u when u should be

with ur sister, why such negligence towards ur sister when u say that u take care of her. Why cant u answr that one particular question on which ur whole life depends on." Rashi is sobbing now.she tells "nahi mumyji pls dont say like this, u always supported me and u consider

me as ur daughter na so pls trust me. i can say that i am innocent mummyji pls listen to me once. i will never give u a chance to complain also. i wil learn every waay and wiill not neglect my work but mumyji pls trust me thats all i need pls mummy." Hetal said "You r right dikra

i have always considered u as my daughter but i forgot that whatever a MIL does she never becomes the mohter of her DIL as her DIL always consider her as MIL only. Kokila was always rit I shuldnot have protected u and cover ur mistakes. The state in which u are is because of

me also. so i am not in a position to forgive u as i cant forgive myself. But there is only one thing i am telling u rashi u can stay for the night and pls leave in the morning before jigar sees u". So saying hetal went to her leaving a begging rashi.

Part7-3:

only rashi and kokila remained in the hall. Kokila came towards rashi and said "I know rashi that ur for the first time speaking the truth but alas not even one person in the family is ready to accept the truth and all because of ur behaviour. I always told u to stop ur acts and try to

take ur responsibilty, not to laden onto others shoulders but u dint heed me. Always warned u to keep ur family matters to urself and not to follow the blind advice given by others though they might be ur relation but u never heard me. This is the result rashi that when u make

others to suffer there will be also a time when u will suffer." Saying kokila proceeded to her room leaving a dishearted and sobbing Rashi. Its morning in the MM. Rashi as usual called her mom to ask her advice and naratted her pitiable position in the night. Rashi thought "whatever

mummy said is rit, i should not get low by guilty when i even dint do any wrong, its all because of that gopi and only gopi can save me today. I will ask her to narrate the exact the story what i told the modis and she will save me as usual like as the pressure cooker incident. Thinking

rashi proceed to gohem room. Here ahem and gopi both woke up at the same time. Ahem saw gopi and thought " whether she is ok, i think its better to call mom. She will handle her, i think she's still in shock." Before ahem could ask how was she gopi shouted a ear splitting cry,

"NAHIN NAHIN mere pass mat aye". Ahem was shell shocked. he dint know wat did she meant, he never touched her. he went near gopi saying " gopi what are u saying". But again gopi shouted "Nahin dont come near me, pls leave me i have given my jewellery pls dont come

near me, mujhe ghar jana hai( i want to go home),pls mujhe chod dijiye". She was begging him with tears and holding her hands. Realization hit Ahem," Oh god she still in shock, MOM, MOM come here rit now". Hearing ahem's calll everyone rushed to ahem's bedroom. Ahem was

slowly approching gopi "gopi dekho pls listen to me its me ahem ,ur husband ahem, ur safe now, ur with me,recognize me gopi".He about to reach her but again she went hyper" NAHIN dekhiye dont come near me, pls leave me i have given all my jewellery, i dont have anyting, i just

want to go home, u told me u will take me to rashiben , mujhe rashiben ke pass jana hai..". Ahem said" gopi" .gopi shouted "Nahin mat aye dont come near me". Everyone have tears in their eyes. Ahem became stunned to see gopi in such a state. He was helpless to do anything.


Part 7-4:

Finally kokila and hetal came towards her and kokila signalled to back up.Gopi was shaking her head saying " Nahin nahinn pass mat ayiye" slowly kokila said "gopi vahu" her voice was choaked,"gopi vahu mein hoo tumari saas, see ur kaki is also here,u dont have to fear now ur

here with ur family, come to me gopi vahu".As if a miracle gopi immediately became calm on hearing kokila voice. but she dint went near them. slowly hetal and kokila went and catched her. Hetal said "gopi mein kaki dekho sab yehi hai, dont wory dikri.."she was unable to complete

and started crying.Gopi looked at them and at the familly and slowly fell down and lost consiousness. Ahem grabbed her and made her lie down in the bed.Nobody uttered a word and everyone was looking at gopi.Suddenly jigar shouted " How dare u r still here". Rashi was standing near

the door, with fresh tears rolling her cheeks forgetting her mission to talk to gopi.She was just looking towards gopi and realized her mother words "remember be strict dont get melted at the sight of her". "did mummy knew that gopi will be such terrified if she will be left alone" thought

rashi" did she treated her with such punishments". Guilt washed over rashi. she was about to go near gopi but jigar shout brought her back. She looked at him unable to face him. Jigar went near rashi and said "wht i told u rashi, to leave but as usual u wont hear me rit". rashi said "nahin

jigarji pls listen to me, i have no hand in this. i will tell u the truth. woh mummy told me to do so. I dont have any hand" but jigar was in no mood to "hear bas rashi enough, again came up with a new story rit. dont u have any shame to blame ur mother rashi or was it her idea to save u".

rashi said " Nahin nahin jigarji i am innocent, this time i am speaking the truth i swear"."Enough rashi, see what state u have landed ur sister into. dont u have any humanity. I cant stand u here one moment". Saying so jigar grabbed rashi's hand and dragged her out. everyone followed him.

rashi was pleading jigarji listen to me once but jigar dint heed her. He dragged her to the door and throwed her outside. Rashi fell on the floor and scremed "JIGARJI LISTEN TO ME" but jigar slammed the door on her face leaving rashi tearfully saying " I AM INNOCENT".


k how is it
do comment pls

and dont hate me (all ahem and raji lovers)

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