FF:Milan/part34(Last part!)-pg143

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lovv

@lovv

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#1101

shaina brilliant story... ur narration..i dnt hav words 4 dat..

with ur writing i can feel each n every emotion n feeling of the characters... i can imagine d screen perfectly..almost there z no flaws..each n everthing z perfect...u hav very good comic sense..u knew d characters mind very well... iliked d way ahem-rashi's friendship , n how u ended anitha's character...u nt even left parag n jithu... superb... coming to romace..its perfect..even in a single sentence i never felt any vulgarity...u r a brillinat script writer..i read each n every part more than 5 times...dat much i addicted to milan... thanks a lot 4 d awsome story..last bt nt least the way u characterised d children also good..

ALL THE VERY BEST FOR UR FUTURE SCRIPTS..

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@.ChammakChallo.

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#1102

i wish u didnt finish this i still read it u know

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Savi_S

@Savi_S

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#1103

I just love ur ff. I m just leftspeechless. How u hav maintained the story and the character essence. Loved ahem and rashi bonding. All 4 of them.

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@MereMahiyaa.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1104

I readed this story again the part that i missed in july and august when i was in moroccoo i never get bored reading it

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AwesomeHoonMain

@AwesomeHoonMain

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#1105

Love this FF👏

Loved Gayaan's character

Are you going to write a sequel?? Would love to read more 😊

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Sunnyahem

@Sunnyahem

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#1106

Looove this !!! Keep reading this when I'm in a gohem kind of mood !!!

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Sunnyahem

@Sunnyahem

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1107

My favourite gopi ahem story !!! Just love it and read it when I want some peace !!! My kind of ahem and my kind of gopi in this...!! And seriously if I don't see another episode I'll be fine ... I'd rather make this my story of saathiya nibhana saathiya and cherish it ...!! Awesome writing

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