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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow wonderful ff...really liked it...god hope rashi wont hurt gopi ...waiting for next update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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K here i Come with the new update, The story wil be focossed on goshi (rasi and gopi)Because in the future we will see a lot of gohem .The story might be a lot of fiction but bear wid me

Part-1:

rashi was in a thinking mode her mind buzzing wid questions.

"why did mummy asked me to bring gopi wid me, i have no clue regarding wat mummy is planning. this mummy also always tells her plan at the last moment not even once she mentions the whole plan to me so that i might be careful"

"really why did she make me lie to all by sayng dat we r going to our frnds marrgie function and also asked to get gopi to the amsument park"

"does she really tnk i am in a mood to enjoy the rides der and why gopi .but the present question is how wil i manage dis gopi , she will rant everytng once we reach the home dat i lied to everbody now what can i say to her to make her shut up"

but gopi was not in a state of rashi turmoil. She was too absorbed to know rashi intentions.Gopi have never went outside though she enjoyed it no one was der to take her out.

rashi called out "gopi". gopi turned out to her and her excitment made rashi's heart skip a beat. rashi was thnkng

"look at her so happy,excited,hopeful and childsh like she never went outside the cityskirts. Oh yeah she dint" .The look of gopi even brought a slight smile to rashi's lips.Rashi was amused to watch gopi and even forgot wat to say for a second

"gopi i m sorry".gopi heart skipped a beat "will rashiben wil ask me to leave and decide not to take me as usual".

"wat happend rashiben, why r u looking worried. did i make somethng wrong"

R:"der goes the drama, always acts so affectionately and naive but today mummy will teach her a lesson. Gopi i am sorry i lied to everybody regarding the marriage. my friend is not gettng married today".

gopi was shocked to know the truth."lekin rashiben why did u lie and dat to kakiji and maaji".

r:"gopi actually der is a get to gather of my all frnds at the amusemnt park but u knw kakiji na she wil never let me out so i lied to her and i dont want u too suffer in the kitchen while i m enjoyng der"

"afterall u r my little sister na.U work hard everyday so thought u too need a break so i lied for both of us plz gopi dnt say to anyone"

gopi was elated at rashi words"rashi ben loves me soo much.she takes care at me.She wanted to spend the time wid me hence told the lie. no mater wat i wil protect her, i wont tell maaji dat rashi ben lied to her no matter wat happend"

part-2

koki was pacing in the room worried. She felt sometng is not rit,she forgot somethng den it struck her she dint ask rashi wat venue wer dey wil be attending.wat happnd to her how did she became careless.By depending on gopi she started to lose control of herself.

"first i wil ask mota babhi if rashi told her".even koki smiled to herself knowing the answer to come.

"mota babhi did rashi told which venue wer dey wil be attending".but koki was surprised to hear the reply."yes kokila rashi said dey wil be going to lalkishan hall". koki was spechless,hetal continued"kokila i knw dat u tnk i m not capable of handling d DILS but i dnt want to impose rules for dem. i want to tnk dem dis house as der houses and by keeping rules we cant achieve dat".

but koki wont accept defeat,"no mota bhabi every person needs a disciplane in his life and ur rashi needs it badly.rules should not be kept but rules should not be broken also"

part-3

finallly dey arrived at the park.gopi expression was beyond words,she exclaimed"rashi ben!!!!,kitna bada hai(so big) and so many tngs to eat and play.

R:"wat r u doing gopi stay calm everyone is seeing us and listen dont go here and der stay wid me k and always listen to me k"

gopi nodded and rashi smiled herself dat she can control her.gopi was overwhelmed wid her sisters affection and tears brimmed in her eyes.

sorry if it became long and knw dat this update contained no progress but like cvs next update coming up wid the drama

PART 3-Pg 2

Edited by shaina.sharma - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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that was very nice....what are the mother daughter going to do to her??update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wonderful waiting for the next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Really sorry for the long break but exams time and cant tell really when my next update would be and i warn u the track might be boring nw but wil be intresting later......

PART-3

Rashi !!!!!!!!!

urmilla was calling her daughter from hiding near by the water tank ,

mummy!! wer r u and what is dis stupid plan to make gopi wander wid me in this park. what r u planning mumy tell fast i need to get home too.jigarji might be coming to home any moment....

rashi saw gopi standing near an ice cream shop nearby and was looking everywhere excitedly unware of the sourroundings around her.

Urmi: arrey first come to me and den i wil explain to u everytng.

Ras: par mummy tel me nw knw i wil execute it is getting late mummy and i dont want more scoldings from kakiji....

U: arrey u come here first and den i wil tel u.

Rashi went near gopi who was eyeing the icecream like it would come out from store and pop into her mouth, rashi though saw dis told to herself" let her starve for ice cream like i did for the sandook." but later thought if she needed to see mummy she need an excuse so,

R:" arey bhai give 1 scope ice cream . tank u,,, here gopi take it i knw u like ice cream a lot.

gopi's face was reaally a sight such bright smile , rashi was dazzled for a second,

what did she do just gave her an ice cream, dis girl is very hard to understand..

"gopi here u go and stay here only i wil go and meet my friends and wil come back within seconds k gopi . dnt go anywhere k byeeeeeeee"

gpi:" ji rashi ben i wil stay here only"

part-3-2:

its getting late in the modi mansion and the two DIl's are not yet home .kokila was getting impatient. she thouhgt to herself ,"why i m getting fussed over gopi she will come back , i knw rashi whatever she might be up to she wont harm gopi physically,"

but still kokila was impatient so den she called rashi's mobile to know the status but it was out of coverage so tension grew more...

Part3-3:

mummy wat r u up to atleast tell now !!

U: k now listen to me and come wid me, lets go wander in the park..

R: what mummy is dis ur plan , to wander in the park, and let gopi enjoy der eating ice cream wid my money, wow mummy i shuldnt say but i tnk nw u lost ur kalakari.....

U: chup arrey u dnt know gopi as i do , u know in childhood whenever i needed to teach her a lesson i would take her to a market and leave her der and would come home,

after 3 hours i would go to her and pick her up and u know in which state she would be, she woulld be utterly terrified and confused and used to roam around the market sobbing bitterly calling out for me, den after dat whatever i told her she would dare not disobey me...

it time again for dis gawar to take dat lesson and dis time it will be u who will teach her not to mess with ur dreams and ur desirre for that sandook , say dat when she gets the sandook bring dat to u and make her tell everyone dat she dont want dis sandook samjiii....

Rashi was tongue tied. she dint knw dat gopi got these type of punishments too rather than beating by her mother.. she liked the idea of controlling gopi but some part of her brain told her not to listen for once to her mother.

R:"par mummy , i told mumiji and kakiji dat i would take care of gopi and if she goes to home in the state of crying , den i will be doomed/

Urmi: " dnt worry after finding her give her another ice cream or another scolding not to cry or do any drama in the house , u dnt worry dikri my plan wont go any wrong, k now lets go and enjoy and leave dat gawar out there."

so with one last look at gopi rashi with some unknown burden in her heart left with her mother.

Part3-4:

it became 2 hours after koki called rashi and stil no sight of rashi and gopi and not even a call. Even rashi had the same feeling " mummy lets go now it too late and it is almost 2 hours we have left gopi and i really need to get home now "

Urm:" k k now lets go and get dat hyper gawar and remember be strict dnt melt away at the sight of her". and by the waring her mummy gave rashi immediately guessed at what state gopi would be ..

"where , where oh god mummy where is gopi"

rashi searched the entire place but sh

e still dint found any trce of gopi everywhere. usually she used to do what she used to say. if she said that she would stay here she would do that but what happend to her now.

"mummy u said she will be here but now she not even here and dnt knw where else she could be ,

oh god mummy wat will i do , kagdi will eat me alive, mummy we lost her gopi bahu , her precious gopi bahu "

Urmi:" chup ekdam chup i thought that girl was innocent but i forgot that she might change her attitude after her marriage i bet she might be probably her way to home by now"

Rashi: " what i am doomed how can gopi do such thing i told her to keep her trap shut."

Urmi:" this is how she wins evryones heart and were wiorreid about her now lets go fast and reach our home before she can come up with some story."

both rashi and urmi wer on there way home when rashi suddenly got a thought ," mummy but how wil gopi go home , she dont even have money i paid for the auto and also for her ice cream ,how can she go by auto or taxi"

Urmi:" dumbo she is smater than u , she brings money but with her inocent act make others spend money on her."

rashi was boiling inside, how blind did she became during the evening, she even let bought gopi a ice cream how dumb of her, dat backstabber wait til i get home.

It was late and everyone in the modi family was waitng in the hall seriously. Rashi thought " der u go rashi ur doomed now , gopi opened her mouth and now u wil face the consequences ,

t,k now to deal with the family i should come up with some story.

jai shri krishna , oh mumiji i m sorry i became late lost track with my friends , dint see the time but next time i would be careful i promise...

but kokila was in no mood to listen and came straight to the matter

" Rashi where is gopi bahu , why is she not with u"

BLANK , rashi 's mind became litterally blank " what is dis kagdi is talking about gopi why is she asking me about gopi unless............................

KAKIJI kya gopi ghar nahi ayi( dint gopi came home?)

and with rashi's question made everytng clear for the modi's


and from next update comes the gohem showers, k now u guess who will go get gopi!!!



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Posted: 14 years ago
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sorry for the long break ... also dreading to post this part but finally the gohem wil start now

Part -4

RASHI...

kokila's thunder knew no bounds,everyone became dead calm. ahem stopped dead in his tracks.

Ahem:dis gawar did something wrong again !!! but mom called rashi's name out whatever ,dis gopi always do something to make his mom angry...

der u go again always after gopi first go inside and make any conclusion and den start cursing her k ahem...

Ahem: damm my inner voice!!!

kokila: "what do u mean by asking us wheter gopi returned to the house or not . it was ur responsibility rashi to make my gopi bahu reach home safely but WHERE IS SHE?

rashi was terrified.. how hard she wished now to search for gopi a bit but her laziness came over her. now everyting became disaster, der's no way dis time for her to escape...

hetal:" kokila now dis is not the time to discuss responsibility , we have to go fetch gopi , jigar go and get gopi from the reception hall."

doomed.. rashi thought totally doomed now how can i tell them we dint went to marriage but how can i hide now so slowly she packed up the courage " ji jigar ji ", jigar had a irritating enquriy look , "wat is it rashi?"

the tone of jigar made rashi's heart clench, his voice was full of irritation and rudeness but rashi knew dat now she cant back up..

"ji woh mein aur gopi marriage party mein nahi gaye , we went to amusement park near the outskirts of the city"...

Part4-2:

ahem was stunned to hear wat his mom was saying.. gopi got lost, immediately he felt his car keys in hand, to rush and search for her, a protective instict loomed over ahem and was about to rush outside but where can he go where to search.

Ahem was furriated with himself, he thougt" wow ahem modi dnt knw abt werabouts of ur own wife".

he was about to ask his mom wer did gopi go when heard hetal kaki telling jigar to fetch from reception, dis made his heart stab, he gopi's husband was standing here at the door and the order to fetch his wife was given to his brother..

a strange feeling came over ahem, a feeling of burning, a gave jigar a killing look and thought how looks could kill.. but d next moment came to surprise to him in form of rashi's voice...

amusement park near outskirts of city at dis time of night . ahem needed no more he told his mom not to worry and rushed outside and rushed into his car followed by jigar..

anger took place at the sight of jigar in ahem's mind but thought he might come in handy..and strated off with full speed.

AMUSEMENT PARK

hetal was speechles after hearing wat rashi have just said , jigar too dint have any words so he left without any further enquires. rashi knew how her MIL hates lies and now she openly for the first time accepted her lie. but what rashi was waiting for the thunder of kokila modi. so she peeked a glance at kokila.

She was right , kokila was fuming with volcanic anger. "amusement park who told u to go to amusement park , wat did u say to us ,u said u wil go to marriage party but why on hell did u go to the park , bol rashi why r u dumb now i said TALK..."

koki exploision made rashi jump in air, but before koki could continue chirag said first let us wait for gopi to return den we wil sort it out. koki too was tensed for gopi and dint have the energy to waste on rashi . she asked rashi not to be in her sight so rashi went and stood near a corner calm, quiet and frightened.

Part4-3:

Rashi ben gopi was terrified. it had been nearly 2 hours since rashiben left and everything was in a state of havoc. She have been standing near the ice cream shop nearly 2 hours and the shopkeeper was eyeing her as she is here to create disturbance. gopi dint know wat to do and where to go. she thought of searching rashi but dint dare to leave the place.

but the shop keeper was irritated with gopi's behaviour. how can a adult cry like a child he thougt to himself. she was drawing unncesary attention so he asked gopi to leave from here. Gopi left the place and started roaming around in search of rashi ben . only she would have waited a little while longer she could have found rashi to leave home.

gopi was roaming around the park since 1 hour and no sign of rashi ben .gopi was utterly terrified and frightened" rashi ben kaha ho aap? where did u go , how can i go home wihout rashi ben she will get scoldings from maaji .i know rashi ben will come and find me. She takes a lot of care of me , she will come". with such thoughts gopi sat under a tree sobbing hope in her heart.

But the movements of gopi were not hidden by some goons. Gopi's state was clear to them. they went towards gopi and asked her wheter she was waiting for some body . poor gopi unware of their thoughts told" ji wow meri behen rashi woh koh gayi kya aapko pata hai wheere is my sister now ".

the goons got the information needed for so they told gopi dat dey knew her sister so asked her to come with them . dey will take her home. Innocent gopi obidently followed them outside unware of their evil plans.

Ahem and jigar arrived at the park but their was no person in sight . they have arrived here but where to find now. Then jigar spoke "bhai give me babhi's photo". Ahem was shell shocked " what is he talking why would i carry gopi's photo along wid me".

Then realization hit him Ahem thought of course every person carries a photo of his wife in his wallet . ahem was looking dumb in front of jigar and slowly jigar too realized wat he was asking of ahem bhai.

Then jigar replied that he would go and see inside the park and told ahem to look outside. Saying jigar went inside and ahem started asking around about gopi when some old man told

ahem dat he saw a girl just 10 min back with some people and he also told ahem dat he might consider the girl to be in danger . Hearing this ahem dashed towards the direction the man showed...

Part 4-4:

Gopi was following the goons blindly but her insticts told her something is wrong. She was uneducated and naive but she is intelligent too. When the goons started off the road and were leading her

to deserted path she sensed danger. But it was too late for gopi to do something and she was caught among the goons . The goons sensing her hestitation terrified her with their knife and led her on.

After reaching a desterted place they told her to remove the jewellery she was wearing. Gopi immediately obeyed and gave them her jewellery . But one of the goons were not satisfied only with the jewels.

He started slowly approached gopi and grabbed her hand . the goons circulated her and made a pass of her among others laughing. Gopi who was in a terrified state earlier now was half dead. She was crying tears of blood

upon the advantage they were taking of her. They pushed her on land and two persons held her hands tightly and one person gloatingly approched her and bent over her and was very close to her face.

Gopi was crying her heart out and asking them to leave her but her pleas was unheard . She thought of the no escape of her situation and immediately recollcted the only person she can never face again, about the one person

she can never dream of and her heart agony came out of her mouth in the form of cry "AHEMJI..."

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Great ff pleas continue soon 😃
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plz let ahem reach there in time and save gopi...
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Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

plz let ahem reach there in time and save gopi...

ur wish my command i am going to start the update now

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Hello tanks for the response and here is the update with a gohem hug treat. any suggestions are welcomed

Part 5


part5-1:

Gopi was crying her heart out and asking them to leave her but her pleas was unheard . She thought of the no escape of her situation and immediately recollcted the only person she can never face again, about the one person

she can never dream of and her heart agony came out of her mouth in the form of cry "AHEMJI..."


A volcanic force hit the goons face. he went stumbling down and dashed a rock. Ahem volcanic anger knew no bounds.He heard the laughter of the goons and gopi's pleads as soon as he entered the

desterted path. He was about to reach the place when he heard gopi's cry of agony and her pain stabbed through his heart.Now his attention turned towards the two people holding gopi's hand. one person came dashing towards him

but poor man never encountered a volcano before in his life. Ahem did not even move a inch from his place. He placed a punch straight through the man's face and he came spwarling down. Then slowly as the snake starts towards its prey he moved

towards the other goon. This man immediately sensed the danger and started backing away. Ahem moved in lighting speed and caught the goon;s hand. He held the hand in an iron grip snapped his hand to the other side breaking his bones.The man collapsed in pain.

The remaining goons ran away from the volcano but ahem's full attention was only towards one person who was spwarled near the rock. "How dare he touch her", ahem thought. He went near the person and kicked with his leg into his stomach with full force and continued to kick him till he

started to bleed but still ahem's anger was not let down. He beat the goons to pulp and finally controlled his anger and turned towards gopi. Gopi was sitting at a corner eyes shut, ears covered with her hands, knees to her chest. Ahem was overwhelmed seeing her in this state . He started towards her and took her hands into his and

slowly made her to stand. Gopi shut her eyes tightly thinking if she open her eyes her dream would collapse and she will have to face the reality. Her strength had been crashed down and all her emotions are drained out. She felt nothing but pain all over her mind devoid of every feeling.

Part5-2:

Gopi was trembling like a leaf. Ahem heart buried in her pain seeing her like this. She still had not opened her eyes and ahem knew the reason , she was afraid of the world now and like to be remain shut in her shell. Ahem thought that his mom was right, she needed protection.

This very thought made ahem heart move with concern and without even thinking he pulled gopi towards his chest and locked her into his iron grip hug. Ahem curled towards his hands around her protecting from every evil intentions.Ahem knew that gopi was not aware of him but he wil hold her until she calm's down.

Gopi instant feeling was to scream when she was hugged by the person but something in the back of her mind made her stop.Unknowingly she was comfortable in the persons arms. She felt safety, peace and comfort in his arms. Gopi knew that this feelings can be given to her only by her Ahemji but she dint dare open her eyes

which will break her shell.She was with her Ahemji and dat was all needed though it might be a dream of her. Ahem dint know how much time he held gopi in his arms . He just closed his eyes and held her tightly. He held on until gopi;s trembling have calmed down. Then slowly without breaking his grip or removing his arms he started towards his car.

Jigar was unable to find gopi inside the park and when he was about to go down the road He saw ahem bhai coming with his bhabhi holding her to his heart. relief swept over jigar and dashed towards them. Ahem made gopi cover with his suit as he saw there were scratches on her hands and even her blouse was bit torn near her shoulders. He saw jigar and the look of concern on his

face and signalled him that everyting is alright . jigar opened the back door and ahem made gopi sit inside and handed over the car keys to jigar. Jigar neeeded no instructions because he knew what his bhai was thinking . He immediately sat in the driver's seat and started the car while his bhai sitting backside holding his bhabhi to his heart.

Part5-3:

As relief swept over jigar mind it started functioning again, "why would rashi take bhabi to park when they were supposed to go to a marriage function and why such carelessenss towards her sister", jigar thoughts imediately went back to rashi's question "kya gopi waspass nahi ayi"

jigar thought "It was clear that rashi thought bhabi came then were was she wen she was supposed to be with gopi bhabhi. Did rashi plan to meet bhabi at the housing and went away leaving bhabhi alone . if so then wer did she go and to meet whom?" jigar felt something was not right here and looking at her bhabi's face he was

determined not to keep silent this time. even ahem mind was too functioning the same thoughts , he knew his sister-in-law is a good for nothing candidate but still how can she bo so careless regarding her own sister. Ahem thought of the lie rashi told everyone . if they wanted to go to amusement park then she might have said to

her kaki might have arranged something. Ahem thougt wheter gopi was involved in rashi's lie but somewhere his mind told him that it might not be a posible case as he knew his mother would caught the lie in gopi's face. In how many occasions he saw his mother catching gopi's lies to save rashi. |"rashi" ahem thought " was it rashi plan all

along and she tagged gopi along with her for company " but still ahem dint find the missing clue that even if gopi accompained rashi unknown then why would rashi be so careless with gopi and thought that questions will be answered when gopi would recover and this time he will see to that wheter gopi is hiding rashi again.

Part5-4|:

Modi house was in atmost silence and not even one person voiced out since ahem and jigar went out. Rashi was standing in the corner terrified thinking to call her mother and ask some kalakari advice but she knew her every every move was watched by khagdi. The sound of ahem car made all the members alert and hope in their hearts.

jigar came inside with a reasuuring smile followed by ahem and gopi.Ahem still dint leave his protection circle around gopi as he knew that though gopi had eyes open she was not in this world as if her mind have stopped functioning. The modis breathed a relief on seeing gopi but relief came to concern on seeing gopi's state. Both hetal and koki

approached towards gopi. Hetal called " gopi dikra", koki called "gopi vahu". As if a rope pulled gopi out of her shell, she brought back to the world on hearing the voice, she was at home, her home . hetal opened her arms to gopi and gopi rushed towards them. Everyone thought that gopi would go to hetal but everyone was surprised or to say shocked when

gopi directly went and hugged koki. kokila too hugged gopi and both of them broke down. Hetal generally would have get offended but today she was glad with gopi's gesture because she really wanted gopi to bound with koki as she had bound with her. Gopi's sobbing was uncontrolable, both koki and hetal tried to stop her but were in vain. Everyone eyes have filled with tears on seeing

gopi's state. She was not in a state to utter even one word and was crying her heat out. Inorder to rush to koki gopi dropped ahem suit over her so there's no need to tell the modi's what happend to her. Kokila pain knew no bounds she was in the same agony as in seeing gopi and blamed herself for this state. Gopi resistance gave away and she fainted. Ahem who was observing gopi and his mom

immediately knew when gopi started to fall and rushed towards her and held her from fallling down. Gopi fainted straight into his arms and he gently carried her to their room and made her rest on the bed and covered her with blanket.

Arrival of gopi and her state made the modi's forget everyting but when she was out of their sight every person in the family turned towards the only one person standing near the corner trembling like a leaf

Do comment if u like

Part 6- Pg 4


Edited by shaina.sharma - 14 years ago

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