FF:Milan/part34(Last part!)-pg143 - Page 107

Originally posted by: Nihira-fan

Fantabulous update!!!had a great fun reading your ff...you're an amazing writer.please write some more.will look forward to it!!

thanks a lot nihira..oooh that a great compliment

yup planning to write a more ff. Thanks for encouraging

Originally posted by: kaka.lg

🤣Since i've known you, this is the first time that u are laughing like this...😆

what say..ahemji never laughs but when he does..the world stops

Originally posted by: tina_1234

awesome part...couldnt undst d meanin of last line..rashi's mistake nd koki nd hets negligance??

wat ya talkin abt

hi tina.. tanks for supportimng me from the begining.

i already pm u the meaning and posting again for others

the meaning of last line is

u said that u dint understood the last line

so refer to the 1st part of milan...there at the end u wil see a line called.

this is the mistake which changed the lives of the modi children forever

so i ended it now telling that the mistake of rashi taking gopi out, which led to her thrown out, which lead to koki plan, which led to education track, which led to gohem and raji and...u Know right.

Hetal was negligent with rashi and koki though suspicious let gopi go with rashi!

so the final line finishes the first that that the mistake chaned their lives forever happy

Originally posted by: uamaz

Well done, it has been a pleasure to read this FF ! You ended it beautifully and many thanks for your hard work and for keeping us all entertained.

👏

Please PM me when you write another one.

thank u uamaz. tanks to u guys who supported and encouraged me in all the updates..

YUp i wil definetly pm u when i write another.

Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

what say..ahemji never laughs but when he does..the world stops

Originally posted by: arul01

The ending was so wonderful... really loved it... gonna miss milan.. one sweet story this is... well hope u write more in the future... i am so looking forward to it! good luck!

tanks arul. yes i wil miss too.. but not to worry...u can read it again and again in archieve mansion

yup gona write more.thanks for the encouragment

Originally posted by: kaka.lg

u know that the world will stop if u laugh, but u still laugh...how bad of u, Ahemji?

he he ..what to do..everyone say i dazzle when i smile. though i control its slips sometimes.

Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

he he ..what to do..everyone say i dazzle when i smile. though i control its slips sometimes.

😉😉itz the last part ... i am feeling a bit sad😭 .. but hope the last pt is a fab piece .. nt hope i know it is a fab piece ... after all Milan is a master piece .. fyi u have no right to deny this ... so dont argue hun ..

with a heavy heart i am starting to read the last part .. well see how magnificent it is .. btw i have no doubts tht it would be mind-blowing .. 😉

so here goes nothing ...😆

pt 34

wow dr as much as i hate to see urmila in any tiny tiny pt of an update .. her being in at the beginning didnt feel bad at all .. i think the reason is the scene following tht ... wow loved the part Aham singing to her .. wow Aham and Lullaby ... i was totally taken by it .. Aham and lullaby seems weird .. but have to admit it does have a ring to it ..

I just cannot stop imaging the scene .. Gopi cuddling with Aham sining or humming a lullaby .. its simply so touching and romantic ...😳😉

the part gopi looking and the pic .. Aham showing up her hiding the tears was also a fab scene .. it truly brought out gopi's feeling .. the fact tht how much love they try to give her love u cannt replace the love tht she would have felt from her own parent .. which means Aham has to try hard😉 ... lullaby was a great start 😉😆

every single time i read such as fab scene i always imagine .. how the hell do u do it😉

cute scene Gopi cuddling like a baby .. one day hope we can witness this whole scene ...

oh so Aham is on his way to accomplish a mission .. well .. will see wht his mission is .. or rather wht u are trying to accomplish dr 😉

love u Rashi ... love the way she handled urmila ... urmila toh sudarne wali hun nahii ...

wht the ... i am schocked u gave me a real fright dr .. u better thanx god tht i didnt get a heart attack after reading Gopi fell from the stairs .. oh the thoughts tht went through my mind .. before reading futher my mind started wondering here and there ... coming to itz on conclusion and sorry to say i have no control over wht i think 😉 ... wht i thought was tht Urmila was the one sure to be responsible ... so i felt like pushing urmila in front of a moving vehicle or rather pushing her from a cliff ... but i new u will nt let anything happen to her ... so tht was the only relief ...

no wonder Aham blew up like a volcano ... i am impressed he didnt end up killing someone ...

"slipped from the starirs on the first landing and about to hit the floor when she found herself in strong arms, no need to say whose." -- no need hun .. who else Aham Modi .. hubbi dearest ...

Aham bringing the house down .. with his voice ... wht a scene dr ... Aham exploding and poor fellows are so helpless ...

oh so it was nt an accident after all ... i wasnt wrong letting myself be carried aways at the beginning ...

OIL on the stairs ... nt a bad idea to get someone hurt ... After l hour of blasting he calmed .. tht is a big achievement for Aham Modi .. nt bad l hour ... all the people might have been so pale .. would have looked like ghosts ...

wow wht a magnificient show from Aham .. better than any Maha episodes tht i have witnessed ... simply mind-blowing ...

"U, MRS. GOPI AHEM MODI..COME HERE!" - - wht impact he has on everyone specially Gopi ... loved the whole fisco ... the way he make sure Gopi satys away from Urmila .. he was right .. they say that thedi ungilise gee nikalta nahi toh ungli theda karna padta hai .. by hook or crook had to keep her safe from urmi and also from herself .. being so bind in believing urmi blinding ... the impact of Aham's word on gopi like a charm .. how could it nt after all her obeying him or nt .. depended on Ahamji life ... he made sure tht she hadnt a choice but to obey ... magnificent dr ...

the icing on the cake was Aham telling his mum .. or rather ordering her tht Gopi's safety was more imp than anything else ... it was even better when Koki starts to call gopi .. "mere ahem ki bahu" .. kash some day this truly happen in the real serial .. wow tht would be so mean so so much ...

Oh so Aham did make up for the rash behavior .. letz see how he accomplishes tht or rather u deal with this 😉

wow jijar toh bohot romantic nikala .. oops sorry Shaina u are so romantic ... and jijar said he would be a great dad for their children .. so i guess he is planning to have more kids even before this one is out .. or are they going to have twins .. anyways tht was a sweet scene ... wonder if jijar is this sweet .. wht Aham would do .. as he has to make up for the rash behavior along with the anniversary surprise .. so Aham has to do better than jijar .. and score higher than him ..

i was so into the jijar rashi scene .. i read the next part at a stress and i just had to go go back and re-read the sentence as wht i read sounded so out of line ... wht i should have read was "Gopi opened her eyes lazily and saw ahem was standing beside her." .. but wht i truly read was without registering my mind on the word Gopi opened her eyes ... so wht i though was Rashi and jijar was kissing and when rashi opened her eyes Aham was standing beside her ... i was so taken back 😆 ... first thought wht went in my head was wht the hell Aham is doing in their bed room and who was dumb enough nt to clse the door ... thanx god i read it wrong .. but i was laughing over my own thoughts ...

wow Gopi Aham scene was even betteer than Rashi and jijar's one .. thanx god u remember to remember Gopi forgot the anniversary ... tht was like the whole universe was with Aham on this memorable day ... and finally she understands ... they do talk a lot from their eyes .. after all they say silent talk thousand words ... tht pic would have been one hell of a pic .. can i have one for myself 😉 .. maybe someday we will see tht too on screen ...

Kinjal and dawal are happy .. it was nice to bring them into the scene too ...

wow Aham is so sweet and the way u showed how much Gopi reacts around individals was even better ...

god dr ... wht a scene .. rashi and jijar scenes have started to over stand tht of Gopi and Aham's ... of course itz all in the hands of our great writers .. oops i think i forgot her name ... thanx god i remember tht she is a girl ... (jpyl hun) ... u know when ever rose petals come into mind i go back to ipkknd ei where kushi was daydreaming .. god .. wht an epi .. it was so funny .. see wht i am talking about in the wrong forum tht also under the wrong ff ... couldnt help myself ... anyways back to ff from my imagination .. btw i have control over my mind .. i think u know this by now ...

wow wht a proposal by jijar ... well done 👏 .. he scores high ..

wow .. Gopi said i love u mr.Aham Modi ... tht was so sweet dr .. never thought tht gopi could surprise me further ... but anyways u do surprise me ...

Wow Aham has been mischievous ... i never thought of tht aspect .. i thought he was demanding ... it was fun when others pull Aham's leg .. the fact tht gopi and rashi have a slight smile in their face is nice .. they know tht Aham is nt truly angry ita just tht he is embarrassed ... taking Gopi out for ice-cream .. wow wht a way to save himself .. chocolate reminds me of their honeymoon .. wht a scene it was 😳..

wow Aham and Anita meets again and the 4 hits it off .. tht encounter of their past with the present is very thoughtful and the fact tht they realized wht they had was never love and wht they have with their respected partners is wht true love is ... and how happy they are with their lives ... and Aham do smile ... all thanx to Gopiji ... he isnt bad at all when he is smiling ... 😉 Glad tht they both found their soul mates and have no regrets on the turn of events ...

wow wht a conversation btwn the couples ... Aham and Anita seems to have a fab time .. and they both know so much of each other .. ..lucky for them their partners know about them ... other wise serious one could be exposed .. and definitely they should have wonderful past memories of school days and they are bound to be in trouble ...

Rashi always wanted to act and prgnancy seems to be the best excuse and tht is cute dr ...

Gopi calling Aham -- "akdooo ahemji" -- i am stilling laughing over this -- god could imagine Aham having his mouth open and in sock and the fact tht he doesnt want specially rashi to know is nice .. tht shows Rashi is one of the few people who dare to make fun of him and if Rashi get to know their will be no end to it .. and on top of everything Rashi is pregnant and these day she is more out of control than ever ... it was nice tht both jiju and sali has turned to be best friends .. ok they might kill each other if left alone .. but tht would also be in good sport ..😉

wow .. it was so sweet of Anita to put aham modi in trouble ...

wow dr .. Aham modi cooking .. i almost chocked on the words their .. it was hilarious .. i annot stop lanughing .. fab conversation .. love the way jijar was made to cook along with Aham .. oh so gopi dearest knows how to use the weapons of blackmail .. never thought tht i would see the day ... i was having my fingers crossed tht Gopi would blurt out Aham's new found nickname ... i was feeling sorry for the guy .. Rashi would have taken fullest use of it ... but in a slight corner of my heart i wished Gopi to tell it .. inorder to witness a fab session btwn sali and jiju .. tht rocks .. Mr.Perfect burning the food ... i wish i wish to see this in the real serial .. atleast some dreaming of such a scene ... the best one ever ... i still cannt stop my self from imagining Gopi and Rashi sitting at the table ordering Aham and Jijar .. both guys wearing aprons and having sppons in their hands and sweeting like pig and the tension on their face and smiles on the pregnant girls ... tht would be one hell of a scene ...😉

"oy mummji ki ladli." - - tht was a nice way to put it ... wow tht was so childish but fab at the sometime ...

wow Aham is such a lovely hubby ... hope someday my hubby get me teddys .. i love teddys a lot ... 1st of all have to find a bf ...

wow wonderful dr ... Aham jealous of a teedy .. tht was bound to happen as Gopi is so childish and thus it isnt hard to imagine her witj hugging a teddy ... he removed the teedy from her arms and hope he did replace the teddy by himself .. i dont think he could want to disappoint gopi by making her sleep alone 😉...

nice jijar and rashi so emotional yaar ... fab

smart Aham ... nice seen .. Gopi is so childish and open .. it was good see tht sweet side of her and how Aham is loving and caring for her ..

ice cream and chocolate .. these ladies are driving them in sane ... poor fellows ... pregnant women .. they say tht u cannt understand women and pregnant women are even more hard to understand and also more emotional ... no wonder these too are so emotional and demanding ...

""Here eat choclate ki boothni..eat everything and if still hungry eat me also"" - - wow choclate ki boothni .. how did u come up with this ... magnificent name ... god dr .. door Aham dikar ... the torture tht he is going through .. wow Gopi is more fun than i ever thought ... she doesn't want to eat Aham as there will be no one to bring chocolate .. nice and it even is better when she wants swiss chocolate .. she is demanding without being demanding ... nice ...

the best part is both brothers are going through the same torture at once .. running here and there during night just to please their wife .. i hope Aham never imagine himself doing all this...😉

god after all the trouble tht Aham went through and her sleeping .. no wonder he cried .. may be it was nt tht gopi didnt want the chocolate anymore .. it must have been for the fact .. wht a pathetic condition he is in ...

Jijar's condition seems to be far worse than Aham's .. after all itz rashi he is dealing with ... ice cream .. popcorn .. pizza .. no wonder he faints bandoka hal bohothi bura hai ... poor chaps ...

mind-blowing dr ... Rashi calling urmi .. "mrs.urmila shaw" .. it is memorable ... i'll make sure to hold this close to my heart when ever i see urmi in the serial i could imagine tht one day Rashi would treat her like this ...

ultimately urmi is turning good ... so wht else to say ... ant bhala to sab bhala hai ... tht ends with a good note

lovely name hun ...

wow jijar's daughter is wonderful ... it was nice tht she went after Rashi ... now Rashi can witness wht type of brat she herself is ... the statements used to decide her is fab ... nice daughter ... like mum like daughter ... nice relationship btwn dad and daughter .. it is fab hun .. for a change jijar have a partner 😉... btw it was no wonder tht rashi was tht uncontrollable during her pregnancy period ... after all it was a mimi version of her inside and the attitude should be of double dosage ... for all the torture tht jijar ent through for 9 months .. rashi will have to relive her life .. tht is nice ... 😆

"rothudu kahika!" - - oh i see tht the kid is worse than the teddy fiasco ... wow the son is the competitor of Aham ... nice .. it seems like a dream come true ... father and son fighting to get gopi dearest attention ... love it ...

cannt blame the kid as Aham himself wanted to keep his mum to himself when he was young .. so the only solution 😉 .. but for tht they have to wait for at least another 20yrs .. until then good luck to Aham .. nice one dr ...

arre wa the lappi become handy for something 😉.. nice .. btw tht reminds me of su's OS ...

wow wht a son Aham and Gopi .. got .. lovly ...dr ... wht i see is he is a charming walking talking disature ready to explode if give the chance ... the interaction btwn the couple was fab ...

god i am in love with these kids .. they are giving urmi a royal treatment ... love it ... wnht a treatment yaar ... and it was fun tht sali and jiju still are having similar thoughts and are in control .. up to some extend 😉

"i wil make him exactly like me" ahem said proudly and except gopi ... no one smiled. "hey krishna bhagwan..cant i rest in peace" kokila thought. - - another Aham .. nt bad i guess ..

well will the circle repeat ... ???????? no idea ... have to think a bit ...

"Thus a single mistake of rashi and the negligence of koki and hetal changed the 4 lives of the modi children forever...happy" - - nice way to end it ..

overall comment - -

The whole ff was extra ordinary and i had lot of fun reading it .. thanx for giving us the opportunity to tap into ur imagination ... though i have said this many a time .. it still doesnt seems to be enough .. u are a fab writer and pls do continue writing .. i am addicted to reading ffs .. so u better right another one and pls do pm me .. nt do dear u better pm me ... i am demanding na .. hope u dont mind hun😉...

loved the whole thing from the beginning to the end ...

thanx for the wonderful journey hun ... looking forward for ur next ff

will keep in touch ...

Farewell to milan and hope to welcome u with another amazing ff .. u better impress me dr 😉in ur next ff .. this ff was outstanding so u have to break ur own record ... dont worry hun tht will be difficult but i have full faith in u ... and no doubt it would be an outstanding one ... so until the next ff 😉

take ur own sweet time to comment ... no one is forcing u btw ... and another thing sorry .. this too exceeded my normal limit and do seems like a ff rather than a comment ... couldn't help myself .. and as it is the last part .. i think u dont mind na ...

(btw hun sorry for bugging u all the time ... no hard feeling right .. btw even if i am a pain i will nt stop bugging u 😉)